Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh AnuPre FS Part 4 pg3

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Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh...This is a strange tale... Part 1


I selected Karan Patel as Mr.Bajaj as the character in my FS suits him more.


A Valentine’s party in the office…

It was a happy occasion fir the office staffs as their Boss Rishab Bajaj has thrown a Valentine’s party for all of them.Bajaj is friendly with his staffs and allows his staffs to enjoy too I the midst of work.

Some of them brought their life partners and they all danced.

Anurag could not stop thinking of his best Valentine’s day.

The Valentine’s party with his lady love Prerna.

While the couples were dancing Anurag was thinking of his Valentine’s party dance with Prerna.

Woh rang bhi kya rang hai
Milta na jo tere hoth ke rang se hubahu
Woh khushboo kya khushboo
Thehre na jo teri saanwari zulf ke rubaru

Tere aage ye duniya hai pheeki si
Mere bin tu na hogi kisi ki bhi
Ab ye zaahir sar-e-aam hai, elaan hai

Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu (x2)

Uljhan bhi hoon teri


Uljhan ka hal bhi hoon main
Thoda sa ziddi hoon
Thoda pagal bhi hoon main

Barkha bijli baadal jhoothe
Jhoothi phoolon ki saugatein
Sacchi tu hai saccha main hoon
Sacchi apne dil ki baatein

Dastkhat haathon se haathon pe kar de tu
Naa kar aankhon pe palkon ke parde tu
Kya ye itna bada kaam hai, elaan hai

Jab tak jahaan mein subah shaam hai
Tab tak mere naam tu
Jab tak jahaan mein mera naam hai

Mere hi ghere mein ghoomegi har pal tu aise
Sooraj ke ghere mein rehti hai dharti ye jaise
Paayegi tu khudko na mujhse judaa
Tu hai mera aadha sa hissa sadaa

Tukde kar chaahe khaabon ke tu mere
Tootenge bhi toh rehne hain woh tere
Tujhko bhi toh ye ilhaam hai
Elaan hai…(Zero).

His thoughts were broken when Bajaj called him.

Bajaj:Anurag…where are you lost?

Anurag:Nothing.

Bajaj:Why did’nt you bring your partner to the party?

Anurag became dull.

Bajaj:I guess your partner is busy like my wife.My wife is a busy doctor.So she could not come for the party.

Anurag thought:What a similarity between Mr.Bajaj and me!Like his wife,Prerna is also a doctor.

Bajaj and Anurag are Boss and an employee.But Bajaj has never treated Anurag as a mere employee. Bajaj treats him like a friend.

Bajaj:One day you should come home and meet my family.

Anurag:Sure.I am also eager to meet your wife and daughters.

Though Bajaj had invited Anurag home a few times he could not visit his house yet.Finally a day came when Anurag joined Bajaj to his house.

When they reached the compound,2 little girls hugged Bajaj.

Anurag smiled and thought:Mr.Bajaj’s daughters are so sweet.

Bajaj:Children,see ..this is is my friend Anurag uncle.

They:Hi Uncle.

Anurag caressed them.

Anurag:Hi,what’s your name?

One girl:I am Kuki.

The other girl:I am Sneha.

Anurag:Very cute names.

They smiled.

Anurag,Kuki and Sneha kissed each other.

Anurag thought:Guess they are twins.

Bajaj and Anurag stepped inside the house.

Anurag:Mr.Bajaj…your wife..?

Suddenly a woman came out of the room.

“Mr.Bajaj,you came back early”.

Bajaj:Yes Prerna…today our work got over fast.So I came back early.

Anurag was shocked to see her.His Prerna was standing before him.

Anurag thought:Prerna is Mr.Bajaj’s wife?My Prerna is not mine anymore.

Anurag was shattered.

Bajaj:Well…I have told you about my loyal PA Anurag.Right?He has come with me here.

Meet him.

Bajaj and Prerna looked at Anurag.

Prerna was stunned to see Anurag.She became upset.

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

kahan shuru kahan khatam

ye manzilen hain kaunsi

na wo samajh sakein na hum

Anurag and Prerna looked at each other emotionally.

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

kahan shuru kahan khatam

ye manzilen hain kaunsi

na wo samajh sakein na hum

Bajaj:Mr.Bajaj,meet Prerna.

Suddenly Sneha grabbed Prerna’s hand.

Sneha:Mumma…please make chocolate shake for me.

Prerna:Sure baby.

Prerna kissed her palm.

Sneha,Kuki and Prerna went to the kitchen.

Anurag:Mr.Bajaj…I have head ache.I want to go to my flat and rest.

Bajaj:Are you okay?Suddenly you are having head ache…

Anurag:I will be alright if I rest.I skipped food.I think that’s why.

Bajaj:Anurag,I told you many times not to skip food to concentrate on work.You eat food and go.Prerna makes nice food.

Anurag said in his mind:I know that.Prerna is an excellent cook.

Anurag:No thanks.I will go home and eat.I had cooked food and kept it in the fridge.

Bajaj:Are you sure?

Anurag:Yes.

Bajaj:Ok.Take care.

Anurag:Sure.

Anurag bid good-bye and went to his flat.

Anurag:I left Mr.Bajaj’s home not because I have head ache,but because ..I was not able to face Prerna.

I can’t tolerate Prerna as Mr.Bajaj’s wife.But I deserve it.I lost Prerna because of my foolishness.

He burst into tears.

Anurag remembered his first meeting with Prerna.

Anurag got admitted in the hospital due to flu.Prerna was his doctor.

He was lost in Prerna when she talked to him about medicines and the diet.

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

kahan shuru kahan khatam

ye manzilen hain kaunsi

na wo samajh sakein na hum

Anurag said in his mind:Thank you God for making me sick.Because of that I got to meet such a sweet doctor.

Ye roshni ke saath kyoon

dhuaan utha chiraagon se

ye roshni ke saath kyoon

dhuaan utha chiraagon se


Later Anurag shifted to a new apartment.Once on the corridor he collided with a girl.Both were surprised to see each other.

Anurag:Dr.Prerna!

Prerna:You?Anurag!

Anurag smiled happily as Prerna remembers him.

Anurag:So you remember me though you meet many patients daily.

Prerna:Yes.I do remember you Anurag.

Anurag:How do you remember me?

Prerna:Just like that.

Anurag smiled.

Prerna:Well..how come you are here?

Anurag:I stay in flat no.24.

Prerna was surprised:Really?I stay in the opposite flat.

Anurag was surprised.

Anurag:We are neighbours.

Prerna:Yes..we are.

They talked casually.

Anurag was very happy that Prerna is his neighbour.They kept meeting each other as a coincidence.

Slowly they became friends.

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Congrats on the FS! thanks for the pm

Part 1

awesome update... greatly written

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Even I like Karan Patel as Bajaj. Loved the friendship of Anurag & Bajaj. The party scene was awesome. Sneha & Kuki's bonding with Anurag was cute. Shocked to see that Prerna is living with Rishab Bajaj.

Anurag thanking God for making him sick to get a sweet doctor like Prerna was cute. Loved Anupre colliding scenes. I wonder what mu Anurag had towards Prerna.

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Congratulations on your new FS


Part 1


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Congratulations for your new PS. Loved the first part❤️

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Thank u 4 the likes n comments


Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh...This is a strange tale... Part 2

Anurag and Prerna started developing feelings for each other.

Prerna was looking outside through the glass window.Anurag stood against the glass window.

He looked at Prerna romantically.She blushed.


Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiya…


Anurag:Prerna,do you also feel the same what I feel for you?

Prerna blushed.

Prerna:If you don’t tell me what you feel for me how will I tell you whether I also feel the same?

Anurag smiled.

Anurag:The first time when I saw you in the hospital itself I started adoring you.

She blushed.


Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiya…

Prerna:You asked me how I remembered you despite of seeing many patients daily.That’s because in the first sight itself you captured my heart.

He was surprised.


Saaya mera hai teri shakal
Haal hai aisa kuch aajkal
Subah main hoon tu dhoop hai
Main aaina hoon tu roop hai
Yeh tera saath khoob hai
Humsafar…

They shared a romantic eye lock through the glass window.

Tu ishq ke saare rang de gaya

Phir kheench ke apne sang le gaya
Kahin pe kho jaaye chal
Jahaan ye ruk jaaye pal
Kabhi naa phir aaye kal
Saathiya…

They had their first date at the pizza hut.


Ek maange agar sau khwaab doon
Tu rahe khush, main aabad hoon
Tu sabse juda juda sa hai
Tu apni tarah tarah sa hai
Mujhe lagta nahi hai tu doosra



Prerna visited Anurag.He was cooking in the kitchen.Prerna was surprised.

Prerna:You know cooking?

Anurag:Since I am living alone I am just trying out cooking.

Prerna:Oh…experimentation….

Anurag:A kind of…

Prerna smiled.

Anurag took the hot vessel from the gas stove with his hand and due to burning sensation he screamed.He put the vessel on the table.

Prerna:Oh no…

She took ice cubes from the fridge and put it on the burnt areas of his hand.

Prerna:How can you be so careless Anurag?Who takes hot vessels with their own hands?

Anurag was embarrassed.

Prerna:Now you don’t cook.I will cook for you.

Anurag was surprised:You?

Prerna:Yes.Why not?

He smiled.

Anurag:Today’s food is ready Prerna.

Prerna:Then tomorrow I will come.

He smiled.

The next day Prerna went to Anurag’s flat again.

They were in the kitchen.

Prerna looked at the wheat flour pot on the top of the cupboard.

Prerna:Oh no…Anurag..please take it from there.

Anurag:Ok.

He took it from the top,but it slipped off his hands and the flour fell over his head.

Prerna:What have you done Anurag?

Anurag:What to do?I never expected it.

She tried to remove the flour from his face.Slowly he started caressing her face.

Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiya…

Slowly they got into a romantic embrace.

Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiya…

Prerna’s brother Anupam reached there and was stunned to see it.

Anupam:Prerna!

Suddenly Anurag-Prerna broke their embrace and looked at Anupam.

They got tensed.But Anupam smiled.

Anupam:So you both love each other.Then why did’nt you tell me about it Prerna?

Prerna:Bhai…I was going to tell you…but…

Anupam:It’s ok.I understand your shyness.But it’s better to tell mom soon.

Prerna:Yes,I will tell mom soon.

Anurag was relieved.

Prerna told about Anurag to her mother Mohini.

Mohini was shocked.

Mohini:I thought you will choose a doctor for yourself Prerna.

Prerna:Mom,love does not happen intentionally.I can’t love a doctor just because I am a doctor.I fell in love with Anurag without my own knowledge.

Mohini:But Anurag has only an uncle and he does’nt match our status also.Forget him.

Prerna:What do you mean by that mom?Just because Anurag’s parents died when he was young and he is not as rich as I am you want me to forget Anurag?Never.Prerna is meant only for Anurag.

Mohini was shocked.

Mohini:Ok.If you insist what can I do?

Prerna became happy:Thank you mom.

Prerna hugged Mohini.

Mohini:But get his horoscope.I want to see whether your horoscope will match his or not.

Prerna:But mom…why are you so superstitious?

Mohini:Because my life experience taught me that horoscope is true.

Prerna was silent.

The astrologer looked at the horoscope and said:The couple will have love for each other.

Anurag,Prerna and Anupam smiled.

Astrologer:But if they get into a relationship it will harm their health.They will suffer from mishaps.They can even die young.

They were shocked.

Mohini:Oh no…Anurag…Prerna…love is not enough to live.If you both marry each other your life will be in danger.So better you guys don’t even think of getting married.

Prerna:If not marriage then…are you suggesting live in relationship mom?

Mohini:Prerna!Are you joking?

Prerna:Then what do you mean mom?

Mohini:End this relationship.

Anurag,Prerna and Anupam were shocked.

Prerna:Never!I can never end my relationship with Anurag because of some beliefs.

Anupam:Mom..Prerna is right.Don’t ask them to end their beautiful relationship because of horoscope.

Mohini:Anupam,is their love more important than their life?

Anupam was silent.

Mohini:There was a time when I did'nt believe in all this and married your father.But my horoscope came true and he left us.

Prerna:But nothing will happen to our life if we get married.So we will get married.

Anurag smiled.

Mohini:But I will not agree.

Mohini walked away angrily.

Anurag looked at Prerna emotionally:Thank you Prerna for believing in our love more than the horoscope.I was worried.

Prerna:Do you believe in what the astrologer said?

Anurag:No.Because I believe in our love.

She smiled.

Hansu main jab gaaye tu
Roun main murjhaaye tu
Bheegun main barsaaye tu
Saathiya…

He pecked her forehead and embraced her.

Pal ek pal mein hi tham sa gaya
Tu haath mein haath jo de gaya
Chalun main jahaan jaaye tu
Daayein main tere, baayein tu
Hoon rut main, hawayein tu
Saathiya…

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Part 2


Fabulous Update

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Part 2

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Thank you for the PM and update👍🏼.

Really loved the 2nd part of the story. Anupre were beautiful and charming as always, loving Anupam's character👍🏼Mohinias usual is being egoistic and thinking about status and money without thinking that Prena's happiness lies in Anurag😡. Hope Mohini will not play a dirty game to separate Anupre👎🏼😡

Really excited for the next chapter please update soon😊

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Part 2

AnuPre song sequences & dialogues are romantic. Their kitchen scenes are cute. Surprised to see that Anupam is Prerna's brother & Mohini is Prerna's mother. It looks like Mohini is looking for excuses to reject Anurag. First, it was about family background & financial status. Then Mohini called the astrologer to check their horoscopes. Is Mohini superstitious, or is she deliberately doing to disapprove anupre wedding?

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