{ A Piece Of My Heart } #2 #PreRishFF [Ch14 -Pg14] - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

He is lateπŸ˜†

It would take time for her to trust him and his words again.

She still cares for him

He is lonely and with no one to share his thoughts and feelings.

He is pissed off knowing this is all about Komo.

She could have said she is worried for himπŸ€”

He shouldn't have accused her of not trusting him and his words. He lied to her again and again. And she is correct in her place.

Kisssmiley27smiley27

The ending

Lovely update Manjari, continue soon.

Edited by MR21 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

lovely update, hopefully after the talk they'll get back on the right track. dreading what Komo will do once she finds out, can't wait to find out tho.

Edited by oa2019 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Wow they kissed 😳☺️

It was awesome update

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: GulaabiAakhein.


You know I had suuuuuch an amazing time writing this chapter. It was like I was letting go finally πŸ˜†

Thanks a ton Shruti !πŸ€—

And yesss like in that moment I couldn't imagine them not kissing. It just seemed like it had to happen. Both of them wanted it and Rishabh wouldn't back down once he saw that she still does have feelings for him. He really just needed to know that she felt the same. For so long she had been so strong. She had never shown weakness in front of him, just anger and hatred. This time was different because she knew the whole truth. And she was thinking about him tooo!


Yay! Im so happy personally, with the way this chapter turned out. I was trying to nail it and thats why I wrote about their first kiss in the last chapter. I just wanted this to be perfecttt

You said it all. 😁
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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

just another amazing update ever my dear ❀️, i always wait for this FF..


The frequent emotions n the way u portrayed .. just super se upar ..


and that kissssiiiiii .. awieeeeeeeeeeeeee ☺️☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

superb awsm update to gud Luvd it

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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Messi21

Wow they kissed

Hope the talk it out and clear all misunderstanding

Thanks! Yes, well I don't know how much misunderstanding there is to clear really but they will talk!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: MR21

He is lateπŸ˜†

It would take time for her to trust him and his words again.

She still cares for him

He is lonely and with no one to share his thoughts and feelings.

He is pissed off knowing this is all about Komo.

She could have said she is worried for himπŸ€”

He shouldn't have accused her of not trusting him and his words. He lied to her again and again. And she is correct in her place.

Kisssmiley27smiley27

The ending

Lovely update Manjari, continue soon.

Hey Ramya! Thank youuuu πŸ€—

I am so glad you enjoyed the update!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Reebamathew92

its awesome, amazing, superb, excellent, fabulous... like always πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ˜˜ wow its so beautiful keep writing more and more dear πŸ’•πŸ₯°πŸ’•πŸ₯° stay safe and stay blessed.


Thank you so much Reeba πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#70


Thank youuu πŸ€—

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