FF: Darkhaast / Tum Se Hi |PreRish| Updated: Ch 11 on Pg 17 | 17/9 - Page 4

Pheww...Dark. Twisty. Intense. Painful.

You're an awesome writer. This story is just.... terrific. Love it. Update soon

I love it update soon oh my God gives me meherbaan feels

Originally posted by: SapSur

This is absolutely wow...The buildup surrounding Prerna and Rishabh's characters literally left me on the edge..The chapter one of this fiction is absolutely brilliant..From the first line to the last it kept my interest intact and I am already hooked to this tale...So it is about changing Cookie's name and looks like the husband Rishabh Bajaj and the wife Prerna Sharma are ready with swords to wage the battle, with their daughter as the judge...Absolutely FAB...This story already feels like it is going to be a fun ride topped with emotions..Thank you Ara for getting back to writing again...Brilliant first update..Keep up the good work going..👏

Aye, thankyou! I feel like I'm heading into a mess since its such a last minute thing decided in seconds. And the plot comes as I go. No planning at all. I hope it isn't a mess. Coz it's fun! Aye, thank you for the long comments and reading this! it truly means alot!

Originally posted by: SapSur

Ara the second update is absolutely lovely..It has so much to gush about and to go gaga over..So we have Rishabh and Prerna the happy couple, with Sneha in their happy life..And as usual they are people who cannot see their joy, I am so glad Rishabh gave Mohini a shut up call..His sarcastic approach cracked me up...And it looks like Prerna along with being Rishabh Bajaj's wife, Sneha Bajaj's mother has found a family too..A family in the Bose and Mishra's, I am really glad the Bajaj's share a tight knit bond and they have people who consider them their own too...Just a guess I think the Bose family is actually Sneha's real mother's side of family, who have taken in Prerna as their own, on the night which drastically changed Rishabh and Prerna's lives, making her Mrs. Bajaj...But whatever the mystery of the night may be, but it brought Prerna - Rishabh together and from the looks of their lives now, it was a blessing for the two of them..Brilliant update..👏

Ara reading this gives me Meherbaan feels and I am loving it...

Ayeeeeee, thanks!!! I think I want prerna to live for herself rather than everyone. I want her to let go in away. Make crazy decisions and find herself.

Meherbaan is such a guilt trip for me. I really wanted to complete it and got busy. When I got free, everyone had moved on from the fandom.

Thank you for the long comment! You really do make my day!!!!

Originally posted by: marshi

I love it update soon oh my God gives me meherbaan feels

Ayeee, I'm churning out updates! Yes!!!!! Very similar. But not similar, promise. I love the kid and parent / couple trope.

Originally posted by: Rexana19

Pheww...Dark. Twisty. Intense. Painful.

You're an awesome writer. This story is just.... terrific. Love it. Update soon

Ayyye, thankyou! Hopefully it is nice.

After reading the starting two i thought it would be more of comedy. But the last one totally changed. Its awesome.🥳

Though i read it two times but was little confused of how rishabh punished anika.

Originally posted by: SapSur

True, I was a rockerz then..Thank you..🤗 Missed you and missed your writings too...I have lost count of the number of times I have gone back and read Meherbaan... Yaa I changed the UN yesterday..Even I am getting the hang of the new IF..But it is easy, you will get the hang of it soon enough..😎

🤗

I missed you too! I finally found a non toxic IF forum and I'm genuinely glad to find you! Did you? Aww. IshRa and Meherbaan were a whole different story. How i wish PreRish go that way. How I wish! Did you join IF again? Aye, IF is no longer archaic. it's nice. But hard to find things. But easier to do stuff.

Originally posted by: mitras

After reading the starting two i thought it would be more of comedy. But the last one totally changed. Its awesome.🥳

Though i read it two times but was little confused of how rishabh punished anika.

Well, it is kind of funny. Coz I want Prerna to troll Bajju and have fun. But isn't it said the funniest people share the most pain.

Ooh, Annika was the surrogate for Kukki. Maybe I should have explained it in detail. Rishabh's sister Shnehal married for love but couldn't have a child. Her husband married her for money and had a mistress Annika. Rishabh's BIL murdered his sister. Rishabh's parents harmed/got rid of/killed his BIL. And Annika was why Rishabh lost his parents. Rishabh was left all alone. Prerna matched with Rishabh's elder sick sister Shnehal and the Sharma's were paid for whenever the Bajaj's needed Prerna through a middle person. (Prerna's father used the extra cash to start ventures which rarely succeeded or her mother spent it on the family.) So the fateful night, the broker asked Prerna to be the gestational surrogate for the kid (give the embryo) without the details and Bajaj made Annika the one who carried the baby. And Annika died giving birth to Sneha (Kooki), not that Bajaj cared. It's kind of a dark full circle.

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Yes, there is an index of MANY stories! Read em all, I want a comment on each one of them as soon as possible ❤️

I SHALL! I DIG Pre-Bajju stories these days. They are fun! So fun! Reminds me of the good old IF days