Four years later... FF last prt pg 31 - Page 11

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Piku_S thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah Bani and Munna made up i hope its for goodπŸ˜›
Awwwwwwwwww poor Bani she must be still recovring from the shock Jai should have sended her an email or an express letter
Jai should take Bani out somewhere to make her mood better
I think Bani is pregant, i hope Pia😑 doesn't create any more misunderstandings
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Posted: 18 years ago

c'est tres bien!! j'aime. et merci pour uploading sur le blog(: vous etes tres gentil! ((:
au revoir
kav

P.S. Bonne anniversarie!! (forgive my french spelling, its been 2 years since i took a french lesson(:)

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey i just read the whole fan fic, and it's awsome. The last part was great.. cont.soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats awesome!!!!
oh man i want to know what happens on Kara Chauth!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
simply awesome
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!!!!!

Happy Birthday πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
First of all Happy b-day. πŸ‘ superb part.too good.simply loved it. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
thx guyz for the wishes and the comments. Here is part 14. (btw, i kind of rushed it, so there might be alot of errors)

Part 14

Bani turned away from her reflection to look at jai. He stood up and was looking at her. Bani looked straight into his eyes and turned back to her reflection. Jai walked towards bani and stopped right behind her. She gazed at him through the mirror. Jai proceeded to tie the dori of her blouse as well as fixing the hook of her manglsutar.

J: How come u didn't eat anything for the past two days? The doctor told u to eat something as u fainted because of weakness. Bani didn't answer. She was mad at Jai. In the past two days she she visited hell and came back. The false news that he met with an accident killed her. He didn't even call her once. She was worried to death. Bani just ignored him and walked towards the door, When jai held her hand and turned her around so that she is facing him. He then slowly took a pinch of sindoor and put it in her maang.

J: Bani, eat something. U r in a very weak state. But bani just walked out of the room. Ten minues later, Jai came out, dressed in Black. But he was surprised all kinds of people getting the walia mansion ready for something. Since bani won't talk to him, he went to maasi and asked her what is happening.
J: Massi, what is happening?

M: munna, didn't bani tell u?

J: tell me what?

M just smiled: today is KC. All the bahu's are keeping a fast. And anu also came. Jai was surprised and worried.

J: but, bani shouldn't be fasting maasi.

M: Why? With a confused look.

J: Maasi, bani didn't eat anything for the past two days. And she already fainted yesterday because of that. And if something happens to her today…

M: okay munna, why don't u go tell her not to keep the fast?

J: Maasi, bani won't listen to me. She is too stubborn.

Maasi was happy to see jai so worried about bani. M: Okay, I will talk to her.

J: Thx maasi. Maasi just smiled and walked away to find bani. She found bani sitting out in the garden.

M: Bani beta. Bani looked up to see maasi come and sit beside her.

M: What am I hearing? U r keeping a fast even though u r sick.

B: Maasi, KC is something that every married woman does. And I am perfectly fine

M: But bani, u didn't eat anything from the past two days. Its not good for u to keep this fast today.

B: Maasi, ever since I was married to mr.walia, I kept this fast. And no matter what I will do it this year too.

M: but…

B: plzzzzzzz maasi.

Maasi hesitated but then said: Fine, but promise me that u will not do any work today. U will be resting the whole day. Maasi paused and the said, why don't all of u girls go somewhere today. Me and biji (dadi), we take care of everything for the evening party.

(btw, there will be a small party for KC, where ladies will come for the rituals.)

hope u enjoyed it!

au revoir
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww Jai is becoming a caring hubby that so sweet 😳
wow Bani kept fast for jai even though they were separated
plz wrtie soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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bani still loves him otherwise she wouldnt fast for him!
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