Tanshi ss:star crossed lovers completed pg9 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
am loving it! eagerly waiting to unfold the rest of story. i cracked up so hard at " arey wat bull shit u both r talking"🀣
Edited by Leena.M - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Lovely awesome superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Beautiful start...rebirth concept, loved it 😊
Now eagerly waiting for nxt update...
tnx for pm😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Felt so happie fr response.
Tq so much guys
Here v go next part
Part 2
Raj: manpreet I'm feeling bad...Already rishi is in depression..Again v r playing with his feelings...Wat if he knows I'm acting
Mann: dad...Chill. V r doing this fr bro.fr his betterment ..so don't feel bad abt that..n don't worry he never get to know abt ur acting..
Raj; hmm i hope atleast this acting helps us to bring rishi out of depression
Mann: definitely dad..I do feel this journey changes our life.
Did u remember once katyayni bhai told tanu born again fr bhai...V didn't say this to bhai as v don't want to keep hopes fr him..Bt i hope it turns out true...I hope tanu born again fr his rishi


In Canada:
Dadi got call
Dadi: wat ? Is it? ha ok i vl send..
Dadi: kittuuu kittu
Kittu: ha dadi..Coming
Kittu: wat now dadi...Should i do any other so called ritual
Dadi glared
Kittu gave don't care look
Jiyu saw this
Dadi abt to burst kn kittu
Jiyu rushed to them
Jiyu: darlings...Plz..Not again..Plz spare us today
Dadi n kittu turned against each other
Jiyu took deep breath
Jiyu: dadi tell wat u want to say
Dadi turned her lips aside
Jiyu hold her head
Jiyu: didi u ask dadi..She vl say if u ask
Kittu: no way I won't ask this hitler
Dadi: i too won't say to this queen victoria
Jiyu: omg
In mean time jiyu got call
Jiyu; ha papa...Wat...Ha ok..I'm coming
Jiyu: dadi..C wat u did...Becz of u papa is waiting there
Kittu: wat happened
Jiyu: dad is in airport..Driver went to pick up bt his car got repaired ..So driver called dadi n dadi told she vl send u..Bt here u both r fighting
Dadi: hey bhagavan...I frgt...U. Both go fast .My beta is waiting there
Kittu: uff u won't remember any thing..Except fighting...I vl c u once im back
Kitu said in threatening mode
Kittu: let's go jiyu..
They both rushed to airport
Dadi: this girl na never change..U know kittu beta...How much i fight with u..That much i love u ..
May God bless u beta..I hope ur saviour ur shield will come in search of u

Bedi family reached canada
Mann: bhai akki told he vl come to airport to receive..Wait i vl call him
Rishi: ok

Jiyu n kittu r in car
Kittu got call
Kittu: hello akki
Akki: hai krits..Need some favour
Kittu: ha tell
Akki: my friend is cmng frm australia...I need to receive her..Bt in mean while dad told his frnd man n family coming..He asked me to pick up them..Will u go n receive my frnd
Kittu : uff I'm gng to receive my dad.
Wait wait...Got idea
Kittu: jiyu vl receive dad n go...I vl receive ur frnd..
Akki face brightened
Akki: jiyu is also coming
Kittu: oyy mr majnu. I know ur face brightened like star by hearing her name...Y can't u tell ur wish
Akki: will say...
Kittu: oh k bye
Akki: bye
Jiyu faCe is also glowing
Kittu: when u both love each other...Y u both r playing hide n seek
Jiyu: waiting fr his proposal
Kittu: ha ha...If im in ur place...I won't wait...I vl go n propose my love first
Jiyu: saying is easy...
Kittu : i vl say wat i do. .
Jiyu: ok i know i can't argue with u
Kittu: good u realised
Both laughed
They reached airport
Kittu felt some unusual feeling
First they met their dad
Kittu hugged arun
Kittu: missed u dad
Arun; i too missed u beta
He kissed her fore head
Jiyu smiled by watching them
She knows their parents love her didi lot
Bt she never felt jealous
May b becz she too loves her sis lot
Arun saw jiyu
He called her through eyes
She rushed to him
He hugged her n kissed her
They three hugged each other
Arun: ok let's go
Kittu: dad u both.go..I have small work..Have to receive frnd
Arun agreed
Arun along with jiyu left place
Kittu met akki
Akki gave details abt his frnd


Rishi: mann wr is he he said in serious tone
Man: 5 mins bhai
Rishi got some business call
He was walking while talking
Kittu is in rush as already akki told his frnd came
She was climbing esclater as she don't want to wait on that
Rishi also walking without thinking anything
He too came at esclater
He stood on that
Kittu who is rush...Slipped becz of her high heels
She was abt to fall
Bt some one her from back
Ofcourse he is her hero
Rishi felt goosebumps
He felt some current passing through him
Yes it's like how he felt when he touched his tanu
He can't able to c her face
As her face is covered with her hair
Even kittu is feeling unusual feeling
They both r in same position like that
By this time esclater reached top n they both r abt to strip
Rishi held her tightly
They both came out of world
Kittu stud on her feet n turned to him to say tqs

Rishi shocked to c her
Only one word came out of his mouth
TANU
Kasam bgm
Kittu too shocked by cing him
She got some flashes
Rishi moved towards her
Rishi held her face with his two palms
He got tears
Rishi: i know tanu...I know u vl come fr me
Kittu: tanu..
She felt like some one already called her with name..
Rishi: ha tanu...Ur my tanu..Rishis tanu...Rishi ka pyar...Rishi life..U came fr ur tanu
Kittu remembered her dadi saying..Ur saviour vl come ...U both vl complete ur story
Kittu: no...He can't be..N no way I won't fall in this trap...This is all nonsense...I think he is pagal
Kittu removed his hands from for face
Kittu: hey...Mr...Thank u fr saving me.frm falling bt don't think I vl fall fr ur cock n bull stories
By saying this she pushed him lightly n left the place
Rishi who is trance of tanu came out
Rishi ran towards the direction she went
Rishi: tanu tanu..U can't leave me like this...I know u vl come back to ur rishi
He kneeled down n shouted tanu name
He was in tears
Bt he missed her in crowd
Mann who came in search of rishi shocked to c rishi like that
R
He rushed to him
He hugged him
Man: bhai kya hua
Rishi: chotu...Tanu ...Chotu...I saw ur bhabi...She came back fr me
Man: bhai really
Rishi: ha chotu...My tanu came fr me
Man: don't worry bhai..V vl search her...Wr she can go leaving u...She vl come back to u..Now let's go
Rishi n mann went n told this to their family
They felt so happie
Rano: one time I lost my dil becz of my foolishness ...If i might accepted her..Tanu n rishi might lived happy life..Bt this time I won't do that mistake...She came fr rishi again...Now she vl be my daughter. Not dil
All felt happie

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
Sorry fr mistakes im in bus...Any mistakes vl rectify soon..N sorry if any illogical points
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Superb update..kittu n her dadi cutely fight. 😊
N best part rishi n kittu first meeting. Where rishi recognized her tanu. Very heart touching❀️
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Wow so they know that tanu will b reborn 4 rishi n they r waiting 4 tanu.dadi krithika fight n jiyu stuck btw themwas funny.which actress is playing dadi?Akki Jiyu love each other,but r not able to confess their luv to each other.so cute.waiting 4 their scenes.thx 4 adding akki 4 jiyu.Rishi catching krithika when she slipped n both feeling strange was romantic.rishi seeing krithika...she getting flashes..he touching her calling her tanu..with kasam bgm the whole scene was so emotional.sad that krithika ignored it .poor rishi.happy that manpreet will help rishi to find krithika n rano feeling guilty n is ready to unite rishi krithika this time

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Superb Update πŸ‘
Thank u soo much dear for pm😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Superb Update πŸ‘
&
Thank you sooo much for pm 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Hi honey...
How r u???😳
Both the updates are amazing...πŸ‘
The first one was damn killingly fabulous...❀️
And the second one...❀️
Rishi saw kittu and he thought she is Tanu...that part...
Loved it yr...😳
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