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Posted: 5 years ago
so beautiful foxi.Tanshi seens was dil chorao . Love it so much .Plz jaldi update karna plz.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Again beautiful update foxi... Tanshi closeness is all time my favorite.. Beautiful terrace scene n kajal scene😳❤️ update soon foxi😛
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Posted: 5 years ago
Haya awesome update . Tanshi and moon is always a treat. Tanshi s closeness their dance every thing about tanshi is just wow. Keep updating more and more.
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Posted: 5 years ago
superb update 👏
tanshi terrace and moon scene I loved the most ❤️
now very very excited for new update 😊


[ thora sa upset hoon 😒,
is bar aapne pata nehi kiyu pm nehi kiya mujhe ,
aaj khud check kiya to new update par najar para, barna missed ho jati 😒 ]
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb updates Foxi👏!!! Really wo word dear for late... TanShi dance n kitchen scene😳❤️... Abhay always in d mission to unite TanShi😛...
Rishi n Tanu slept in each other's arm... Aww😳... Rishi lost in Tanu's beauty...
Rishi wiped out Tanu's kajal with his hand...❤️... Loved it to the core Hayu... Eagerly waiting for next part... Update soon...
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

superb update 👏

tanshi terrace and moon scene I loved the most ❤️
now very very excited for new update 😊


[ thora sa upset hoon 😒,
is bar aapne pata nehi kiyu pm nehi kiya mujhe ,
aaj khud check kiya to new update par najar para, barna missed ho jati 😒 ]

really sorry for that dear...
Mne kisi ko bhi PM nhi kiya...
But i will PM u from next time..😳
Nd thnk u sooo much 4 ur support...😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wo word to all of u...😳
Who r supporting this story...❤️
Love u all...❤️
Nd keep supporting guys..😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
[Chapter 15]
[FINALLY WE MET ❤️]

Rishi ran towards Tanu...but she was standing on the other side...

He went towards her...
Along with gifts...

But she unknowingly went from there...
And sat in between ladies...
Who were applying mehendi...

"Oho!!! Kis k naam ki haldi lagayi hui hai moo pr..."

One lady said nd all laughed...

"Haldi??"

Tanu said nd tiuched her cheeks..
Nd then looked at her hand..
She got shocked...

But then something clicked in her mind nd she looked here nd there nd found Rishi looking at her with some sorry expressions...

He just whispered sorry...

Nd a drop of tear fell from Tanu's eyes...
Nd Rishi's hand automatically raised...

But he was standing away from her...
Otherwise he would have removed that sadness from her face...

She stood up nd went from there...
She ran towards the terrace...

Rishi also went behind her...
She held the fence and stood in front of moon...

Looking at the moon she shared her all grief with it...

"Kash k aisa hota k mn us k naam ki haldi lagati..."

She said in her heart...
Tears were flowing from her eyes...

"Kash k aisa hota k us ne ye haldi mujhe apna banane k liye lagayi hoti...
Rishi mne tmse pyar kiya hai...sacha pyar...jisko mn shyd hi bhula paon..
Tmhe dekh kr mere saare ghum taza hojate hn...wo sab yaad ata hai mujhe...
wo hamari bonding...wo hamari dosti...mne sab barbad kr diya...
wo tmhara har baat mujhse share krna...kash k ab bhi hum wese hi hote...
aj phr dil se ek cheekh uthi hai...
aj phr wo ehsaas wapas aye hn...Rishi i m helpless..."

She said in heart nd bent her head...

Rishi came from behind...

"Tanu..."

He said softly...
Nd she turned suddenly with tears in her eyes...

"Hey!!! Dont cry..."

Rishi said nd wipped her tears...

She closed her eyes on his touch...
Nd he removed his hand suddenly...

She laughed out...
And opened her eyes...

"Rishi q baar baar mere qareeb ate ho...
Rishi tum q itna mujhe rulate ho...
tmhe nhi pata Rishi tum qareeb ate ho na to har chz yun lagta hai jese ruk si jati hai...
mn khudko tum mn kho deti hon...
Or jab tum door jate ho na...to aisa lgta hai jese mn mar.."

Nd he cut her in between...
Placing his finger on her lips...

"Ssshhh!!!! Aise nhi bolte..."

Rishi said...

She removed his finger from her lips...

"Rishi to phr kese bolte hn?? Tmhe nhi pata k mn har pal mrti hon...
Or khaas kr tab jab k tum mere samne hote ho..or mn...mn helpless..."

She said crying nd bent her face...
On seeing her this state Rishi melted...

He cupped her face nd lifted her face up...

"I m sorry Tanu...but i m also helpless...i dont wanna hurt u...
I dont wanna loose u like i lost my whole world..."

He said in a flow...

"So u r affraid of loosing me?? "

Tanu said...

"Yes!!! I m affraid...i m affraid so that i may loose u...nd i cant loose u..u are my world now..."

He said unknowingly...as he lost himself in her tears...

"Rishi mn kahin nhi ja rhi...mn yhin hon tmhare pas.."

She said nd cupped his face joining her head with him...

Both were crying nd sharing their griefs with each other...

"Tanu pr dekh lena...jo bhi mere sath hota hai wo hamesha mujhse door hi chala jata hai...
or mn tmhe nhi khona chahta...
plzzz...dont do this to me...
mn mar jaonga agar mne tmhe kho diya to..."

He said bursting into tears...
Still their heads joint...

"Rishi kuch nhi hoga aisa...dekh lena..."

Tanu said...

"Nhi Tanu..."

And he was cut in between by her...

"Sshhh!!!! Dont say anything...just relax and be with me.."

She said...

And both cried in each others arms...

"Tanu never ever leave me.."

He said...

"Never Rishi..."

She said nd hugged him tightly...

He hugged her back...
Abhay came running...he was finding Rishi...

He stopped at the terrace's door...
He saw them in such state...
And he just smiled and left...

They shared their moment for few minutes nd then Tanu broke the hug...

"Sshhh!!! No more crying.."

She said wiping his tears...

"Hmmm..."

He also wiped her tears...

"Chln?? "

She said smiling...

"Hmmm..."

He said nd smiled back...

They both left...

Tanu held Rishi's hand...
Nd he smiled at her...

As they reached the hall...

Rishi's foot halted...
He held Tanu's hand tightly...

Tanu looked at him all confused...
But he was just looking at front...

Eyes widely opened...

Tanu followed Rishi's gaze and found a man standing there...

"Rishi kya hua??"

Tanu said...

"Tanu wo...yahan kya kr rha hai??"

Rishi said still standing like if he saw a ghost...

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Precap: another side of story...
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
😭
Edited by vinushi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow haya I just loved the update 😭...finally after so many days i just love your update😳😭...awww tanu rishi😳...bad aise hi rahna aap dono hamesha ek sath 😭 ...pta Nahi kyun mujhe emotional romance inke itne jyada kyun pasand hai😳 ...may be bcz they r blast in emotional scenes😳👏...😭
PS : jaldi update nahi kra to tu janti hai achhe se mujhe😳
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