Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41
Really woh word dear for late... How is ur health now... R u feeling better??😳...

About ur updates... Kya updates hai!!!
Hats Off You Foxi!!!
Loved 'Bookworm' n his 'Nerd'...😳!!
Tanu n her gang...πŸ˜†
Tanu don't know about Rishi's ❀️ for her...
Tanu is always in the mission of making of Rishi fun... N Rishi in the mission of making Tanu love him
Rishi n his antics...
TanShi scenes 😳...
Really I am dreaming about this type of TanShi...
Precap:Super excited... Really woh Foxi...for late...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Story kab update kar diya aapne, mujhe to pata e nehi chala😭
wo word for late,
late ho gaya bt finaly read it
awesome updateπŸ‘
loved itπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: vinushi

Loved it 😳 I m in love. With this tanshi n ur writing hayu😳

I m really short of wordsπŸ‘β­οΈ...tanu's birthday celebrated by rishi without showing his face😳 it's tooo romantic n then their dance...Tanu kisses rishis cheek😲😳...hatts of to u Jaana...pls update sooon I m not able to wait for updates but have to wait I knowπŸ˜•...I m highly missing tanshi in these days but some of u n Insta members use to write story on tanshi it's such a big healer 😭😭.. .love love loveβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ‘πŸΌ



PS : n give update "story time " also 😳

wo word gilehri...😳
Wo word for such a big compliment...😳
Thats so sweet that my story is a healer for u...😳
Wo word yr...but jb bhi possible hoga...i will give update...pakka..😳
Love u babes...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: gopsss

Really woh word dear for late... How is ur health now... R u feeling better?? 😳...

About ur updates... Kya updates hai!!!
Hats Off You Foxi!!!
Loved 'Bookworm' n his 'Nerd'...😳!!
Tanu n her gang...πŸ˜†
Tanu don't know about Rishi's ❀️ for her...
Tanu is always in the mission of making of Rishi fun... N Rishi in the mission of making Tanu love him
Rishi n his antics...
TanShi scenes 😳...
Really I am dreaming about this type of TanShi...
Precap:Super excited... Really woh Foxi...for late...

its ok yr i can understand...no need to say that word...😳
Just working on it...will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

Story kab update kar diya aapne, mujhe to pata e nehi chala 😭

wo word for late,
late ho gaya bt finaly read it
awesome updateπŸ‘
loved itπŸ‘πŸΌ

wo word yr...i will PM u next time...πŸ˜ƒ
Wo word for loving it...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
Wo word guys...for not giving update...
I m working on it...
Actually i am busy due to eid...
But i will try to give tomorrow...
Have sweet dreams...good ni8 all...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
@cotton candy...
Wo word dear for asking...
I m totally fine now...❀️
Wo word yr...but IF was doing some problem thats why i forgot...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

@cotton candy...

Wo word dear for asking...
I m totally fine now...❀️
Wo word yr...but IF was doing some problem thats why i forgot...πŸ˜›

Aww...that's so sweet of u Foxi...😳... Dosti mein woh words ki zarurat h kya...
Haan yaar it is really difficult to access things due to problems in IF...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Wo word guys for not giving update...
As i said before i m busy in eid parties and so on...
I will try to give update daily...if possible then two at a time...😳
But if i dont then plzzz forgive me...
Enjoy reading and have fun...😳


[Part 4]
[ROMANTIC JOURNEY]

Rishi on seeing Tanu leaving hall...goes behind her...

R: ufff ab ye larki kahan ja rhi hai...

Tanu is walking in front of Rishi...
But suddenly she makes a turn...and when Rishi runs to that side...
No one is present there...

R: oh shit!!!! What rubbish...khn chli gai Tanu...

On the other hand Tanu is walking on the road all alone...
Just then some goons surrounds her...

G: aise akele akele kahan ja rhi ho???πŸ˜‰

Tanu in a drunken state..

T: mn??? Mn to apni birthday party mn ja rhi hon...bhaiya ap mjhe drop kr do ge???
G: han han...q nhi...ao chalo chlte hn...

1 goon to another: oye main road pr rush hoga...chal isse jungle k raaste se le jate hn...
1 goon: hmm chal...

They take her to the jungle...
Tanu becomes half concious...

T: hey tm log kon ho?? Or mjhe khn le kr ja rhe ho??? Mn tum dono ka moo tor dongi...choro mjhe...

They leave her...

G: le chor diya ab khn jayegi???

As Tanu is drunk...she became unconcious...but before she fall on ground someone holds her by her waist...

G: aye tu kon hai???
R: ur death...

And he punches the goon...
He lays Tanu on side...and hit the goons very badly...
They run away...
Rishi carries Tanu in his arms...
Tanu became halfly concious...

T: Rishi tmne mjhe bchya???
R: mn q bachaonga tmhe...bs tum yhn pr giri hui thi to mne tmhe utha liya...
T: oh acha...pr tmne uthaya to na...tm kitne ache ho Rishi...
R: Tanu be quite...wrna acha nhi hoga...
T: ok i will not say anything...

Now they are out of jungle...
But on the silent road...
No one is present there except two souls...TanShi...
She is continuously staring at him...

R: kya???
T: kuch bhi to nhi...

(Narrators note: guys remember Tanu is drunk in all scenes...)

R: Ghoorna band kro...
T: q tmhe sharam arhi hai???

And she starts laughing loudly...
Rishi places her on road...
He holds her by arms...
Brings her slightly closer...
Tanu shuts her eyes...
He whispers...

R: Tanu chup rho wrna yhin chor donga...

Tanu opens her eyes with a jerk...
And pushes him...

T: loser...i thought tum mn bhi koi romantic rooh hai...lekin u...u r loser...get lost...mjhe tmse baat nhi krni...ab mn kahin nhi jaongi...yhin bethongi...katti...

She sits on the road...and starts crying...😭

R: acha sorry...utho or ghar chalo...
T: nhi nhi nhi...tm ache nhi ho...u r bad...
R: see Tanu i m not bad...bs mn itna keh rha hon...raat boht hogai hai ghar chalo...
T: i m not talking to u Rishi..

He also sits on road...

R: acha dekho sorry...

He holds his ears...

T: ups and downs...
R: huhhh????
T: i said ups and downs...
R: ok maam...today's ur day...as u wish...

He stands up and starts doing ups and downs...
Tanu starts laughing loudly...she also stands up...
She is still laughing...
Suddenly she hugs him tightly...
And Rishi is like...😲

T: tm kitne ache ho Rishi...meri hr baat mnte ho...
R: ya ya...ab chln...ya aise sar e aam mera or tamasha banaana hai...
T: hehehee...nhi nhi chalo...

She breaks the hug...
They starts moving but Tanu stops...
Rishi looks at her...

R: ab kya???
T: ice cream...
R: whaattt???
T: yes mjhe ice cream khani hai...
R: Tanu ghar chalo...whn pe jitni chahe utni ice cream khana...
T: dekho Rishi agr tmne meri baat nhi maani to mn dobara yhn beth jaongi...
R: Tanuuu...

She again sits on road...
Rishi hold his forehead with his hand...

R: ufff !!!!! Acha chalo ice cream...ice cream khate hn...
T: yayyy!!!

She stands up and gives him a kiss on his cheek...
Rishi is like 😲...

R: Tanu ye kya kr rhi ho???
T: kiss kr rhi hon tmhe...kya hua acha nhi lga...

She makes a crying face...

R: nhi nhi acha tha...
T: sirf acha...
R: huhhh!!! Bo...boht...boht acha tha...
T: yahooo!!! Ek or don...
R: nhi nhi...ice cream...
T: han ice cream khate hn...chalo...

She holds his hand and places her head on his shoulder...
They starts moving...
Tanu's eyes are closed...
Rishi is continuously staring at her...

R (in heart): kaash Tanu...tum ye sab sach mn bolti...kash tm ye tb bolti jb tm hosh mn ho...kash tm sirf ek bar keh deti...Rishi i love u...mn tumhre liye sari duniya se lr jata...tmhe kbhi udaas nhi hone donga...tmhe duniya ki hr khushi la kr donga...wouldnt it be a perfect crime...just like u stole my heart...i will also be able to stole urs...if i had to choose between breathing and u...i would say I LOVE U with my last breath...

They reaches the ice cream shop...but Tanu is in sleep...

R: ufff...kya hai ye lrki...abhi ice cream khani thi...or ab sogai...

He taps on her cheeks...

R: Tanu utho...Tanu...
T: kya hai Rishi...chup kro na...sone bhi nhi dete...
R: Tanu ice cream nhi khani...

She wakes up with a jerk and shouts...

T: oyeee...chup kro...sona hai mjhe...smjh nhi ata...

And places her head on his shoulder again and goes to sleep...

R (with shocked expressions): ghayal sherni...ab mn kya yhn achar dalon...chal beta Rishi ab isko ghar chor kr a...

He carries her in his arms...and drops her at her home...
No one is awake...the party is over...
He himself have to take her to the room...
He takes her to the room...
Places her on bed...and leaves from there...

Precap: uni dance competition...

Thats it for now...hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit the like...😳
Wo word once again for late...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: gopsss

Aww...that's so sweet of u Foxi...😳... Dosti mein woh words ki zarurat h kya...
Haan yaar it is really difficult to access things due to problems in IF...

love u cotton candy...❀️
Always stay happy babes...😳
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