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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
Tanu back to home n thinking about office incidence n that time somebody suddenly enter into the room n says bhoo...!! She is non other than Ahana
Tanu is not noticed her.
Ahana- aww itni khoi ho ki mujhe notice hi ni kiya. Koi mil gaya kya??? 😉 Kon hai woh??? Mujhe bataya bhi nahi ???
Tanu-bus bus kitna bolti h.
Ahana- jaldi bta na kon h???? Bolegi
Tanu-tu bolne degi tb to bolungi.
Ahana- ha to bol na kon h
Tanu- aisa kuch ni h koi nahi h.
Ahana- to tu kya soch rhi th??
Tanu- neha
Ahana- neha ke bare me kya soch rhi th. koi or nahi mila kya tujhe. Ab kya kiya usne??
Tanu says all incidence
Ahana- tujhe usne bheji kh. Abhi btati hu use. aj to me uska muh tod dungi.😡
Tanu- are chod na.. jb dekho ghode pe sabar rhti h ladne ke liye. Mumma, papa ne dekh liya to dat padegi. Or phir chacha or chachi bhi neha ki side lenge. Paltu me jagda hoga
Ahana- tu kh rh h isliye kuch ni khaungi but next time me uska muh tod...
Tanu- haha thik h next time tod dena. Ab soja. Waise bhi meri important meeting hai kl jaldi uthna hai.
(Both r go to bed for sleep)

Ps: wo word for u cotton candy. N I just suggested that can we introduce ahana as tanu's sister.


Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
Morning.
Tanu was busy in her room as she want to go for the meeting. Just then Ahana rushed into the room in hurry... By looking to her face itself Tanu understood that there is a problem...
Tanu:Kya hua Ahana?U r looking so tensed... Koi problem h???
Ahana:Dii... There is a problem...
Tanu:Problem??kon sa problem???
Ahana:Dii Neha...wo...
Tanu:Neha kya??😲
Ahana explains the incident... When Ahana was going to veranda...she saw Neha talking with someone...
Neha:Aaj Rishi is going for an important meeting with RM internationals...for a collaboration with their business.. If Rishi gets that collaboration u can't imagine how much it will be beneficial for him...so u know na what to do???
Tanu:kya?? Who was that person??
Ahana:Dii u know him...
When Ahana told his name Tanu became shocked... He was none other than Rishi's biggest rival Pavan Malhotra.. Tanu in hurry calls Rishi and tells him about that... First Rishi shocked and then he replied.
Rishi: You don't worry... I will manage this. Don't tell anyone that we know about their plan.
Tanu:Ok...



PS:U said right...Lemon... Ahana should be Tanu's sister...their bonding... I felt to introduce Pavan too...as Pavan n Neha were all time favourite negatives...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
R: u wait there i m cmng to pick u...we will go together...
T: together???
R: ufff...are u serious??? Mn sath jaane ka bol rha hon meeting pe...date pr nhi...be relax dude...
T: han han thk hai...ab zyada ban k mt dikhao...
R: u r such a...rubbish...get lost...
He cuts the call...
He came to pick Tanu...
N: Arrrggghhh...in dono ko kese alag kron...he is so handsome or is behnji pe mrta hai...stupid...

PS: well done lemon and cotton candy...u took this story in a best flow...👏and the characters u introduced are awesome...
Once again A Big Well Done to both of u...👏😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
U all r amazing 😳lovely stories all Characters characterization UFf yar tum log CVS kyon nahi the...keep writing guys amazing❤️ hayu cotton candy lemon well done guys keep updating I m waiting 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Rishi n tanu go for meeting.
Tanu-hum ye collaboration kr to lenge na???
Rishi-yes off course
Tanu-kaise??
Rishi-i am rbk... nothing is impossible for me. Bus dekhti jao.
Tanu in her mind ye to itna overconfident h bhagvan ab ap hi kuch kr sakte h...
Both reached office n go for seminar hall.
Rishi-hello mr. RM
Rm-hello mr. Rishi, plz have a seat. Lets start presentation plz.
Where rishi shows his company business plan
And that the time somebody knock the door. Where a man came into the cabin
Rm-hello mr. Pavan, plz come in
Pavan-hello everyone
Rm-actually mr.pavan ki company bhi presentation degi or jiska plan acha hoga wo select hoga.
Pavan shows presentation
Rm impressed with pavan's presentation
Tanu-oh no. I think ye to is pavan ki presentation se impressed lag rh h. Or ye rbk...kh th mene...per ye hai ki meri sunta nahi..
Rm-i impressed with your presentation n this project..
Suddenly rishi interupt him n says
Rishi-i haven't show my whole presentation. If u may allow.
Rishi shows whole presentation.
Rm-my company has decided collaboration with...Rishi Singh bedi's company.



Ps: wo word for u hayu and vinushi😛. Plz moni read this again i edit this comment. Wo for late edit.

Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
When all the clients went out and pavan also stomping his feet goes out...Tanu excitedly comes and hugs Rishi...
T: Yahhhooo!!! We won...
Rishi was like...😲
He slowly moves his hands upward but stoped...
Tanu breaks the hug...after seeing Rishi's expressions...she felt embaraced...
T: wo sorry..mn...wo mn...wo...thora zyada excited hogai thi...
But he is lost...he is lost in her hug...he is lost in her fragrance...he is lost in her...
It didnt go unnoticed by Tanu...she clicked her fingers in front of his eyes...just then he comes back to this world...

PS: u also join na gilehri...
Lemon..my pleasure babes...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Where are u guys???
Come on...our readers are waiting...
Cotton candy and lemon where are u???
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Tanu- kya hua??? Kh kho gaye???
Rishi - kuch nahi. Chalo chalte hai.
Both r going bedi's office
Rishi- stop here! I bring car.
Tanu- ok
When rishi unlock his car that time unknowingly collide with pavan
Pavan- what the hell?? Dekh kr nahi chal sakte..
Rishi - me to galti se takra gaya..per tum jaise log to jankar galti karte ho..
Pavan- contract tumhe mil gaya isliye itna attitude...
Rishi- (gives smile n says) actually ye tum jaise logo ki yahi problem hai tum jaise khud hote ho tumhe puri dunia waisi hi dikhai deti h..
Pavan- hold ur tough. Today is ur day tomorrow will be mine. Watch it...
Rishi- ha ha kaise jaise tumne is project me kiya waise...
I am rsb. Tumhare jaise kitne hi pavan chavan aaye or gaye per mera kuch nahi bigad sake. U got it (he clicked n wear his goggles n start his car)
Pavan- rishi I will see u next time.
Tanu seats into the car
Tanu- kya hua?? Itna time kyu laga tumhe??
Rishi- kuch nahi...
Tanu- khadush! Acha chalo treat to dedo..
Rishi- ok mujhe bhi bhook lag rhi h. Hum restro chalte h..


Ps: wo for late foxi. I am busy with my school freinds. We met after long ages thats why I am busy.


Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
They reaches the resturant...
T: wse mjhe ykeen nhi arha k tum itni jldi maan gae...
R: what do u want k tmhe ghar chor kr ajaon...mtlb aj kl k logon ko izat raas hi nhi hai...
T: had hogai...mn to sirf simple si baat kr rhi thi...
R: ya ya simple si baat...
T: wse tmne sahi phchana mgr der se...
R: der aye durust aye...😉
T: huhhh!!!!
R: chalo ab...
They enters the resturant...

PS: its ok lemon...have a great time with ur friends...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
They enters the restaurant
Manager recieves see them n goes to recieve them
Manager greeted

M - Hello Mr Bedi, hello Mrs bedi😳😉

R - abe tu😛

M -To Mr Bedi the business tycoon ne pahchan Liya😆
Both hugs
Tanu is numb 😕

R - Tanu meet him he is my collage frnd Rohit
Manager cut btw

M - Hello bhabhi ji😛
Mai Rohit aapko pta hai Mai or Rishi collage
Mai kitni mastiyan Kiya karte the ye Collge se kya gya hame to bhul hi gya 😃 or shadi bhi karli 😆bulaya bhi nahi isne to
Waise Rishi bhabhi is really beautiful
R n t 😕both r sock

R tries to clear but Rohit isn't allow him to clear out 😛

M - Aayiye AAP Dino k liye special table couple special😳
Bhabhi make ur self comfortable😛

R - ha comfortable ho jao Tanu

T - 😕ji AAP baat to suniye mr Rohit

M - bhabhi AAP mujhe Rohit kah k bula Sakti hai no formalities
Pls😛

T - ok



PS : guys wo word Mai kuchh bhi Karti Hun 😆
Isliye ye kar diya 😛 u guys can ignore this part😆
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