Story Time [GAME] - Page 16

Originally posted by: Dinesh09010

Hey hamare creative writers kaha ho koi to apni ff ya story update kardo plz plz plz

may be cotton candy is busy nowadays.. I will definitely update tomorrow or next day.

Thank u finally someone replied hope you write it soon 😊😊

Rishi comes near to tanu..Tanu-rishi kya hua..mud kyu off hai

Rishi- kuch nhi...tum batao kya order karu..

Tanu- kuch bhi...Rishi-yah kuch bhi naam ki koi dish nhi miltiShe laughs

Tanu- aaa.. simple indian food..dum allo,matar panir..tum kya order kr rhe ho

Rishi gives order to Waiter

Rishi-jo bhi mam ne kh sb le aao..

Tanu- but rishi tumne koi order nhi diya

Rishi- mujhe wahi pasand h..jo tumhe pasand h..waise bhi practice kr rh hu..age chal kr to tumhari hi ha me ha milani haiTanu hit on her shoulder again n again

Tanu-mene kabhi bhi tumhe kuch krne ke liye force kiya kya..

Rishi- are are...are tanu bus kro kitna karogi

Rishi holds tanu handsTanu- rishi mera hath chodo.. mujhe tumse baat nhi krni..or mujhe lunch bhi nhi krna..

Rishi- tanu me to mazak kr rh th.. acha sorry...me janta th tumhe gussa ayega..or tum gusse me bahut hot ho jati ho..

Tanu- kya..kya matlab h tumahara??

Rishi- mera matlab ye h..ki tum gusse me bahut hot lagti ho..Tanu shy to listen this n rishi comes near to tanu n hold her hand..tanu jerks her hand

Rishi- are ab sorry bol diya..phir bhii

Tanu- rishi piche dekhoWaiter standing behind rishi

Waiter- sir..apka orderRishi in his mind...isko bhi abhi ana th..

Tanu-(tanu teasing rishi) kya hua rishi..n smileRishi n tanu feeds each other.. after the meal..tanu said

Tanu- ab chale ghar.Rishi- abhi kh..ek surprise h tumhare liye

Tanu- kya??

Rishi- jaldi lao bhai..Tanu- cake..cake kyu rishi..aj koi special day h kya.. tumhara or mera birthday tovnhi h..to phir kya h

Rishi- aj ek special day h..aj meri tumhare sath first date h..ok..wait kiska h..cut the cake

Tanu- agar tumhare liye special h to mere liye bhi to hai..to me akele kyu cut kru..

Rishi- ok..sath me cut krte hBoth cut the cake..n feed to each otherTanu- chlo ab chale

Rishi- are tumhe kitni jaldi h..abhi ek or surprise h.. music..may I dance with u gorgeous n raise his hand

Tanu holds his hand..both starts dacingTere sang yaara...khush rang bahara..tu raat diwani..me jard sitara

Both r dancing n they r lost in each other..after some time rishi teasing tanu..tum bahut lucky ho jo me tumhe mila hu.. ladkiya marti h mujhe pane ke liye

Tanu stops dancing.. acha to jao un ladkiyo ke paas..mere paas kya kr rhe ho..

Rishi- are mazak kr rh th...n holds tanu hand...

Tanu- rishi mujhe tumse baat nhi krni.. mujhe jane do..tum baar baar mujhe teas krte ho..or phir majak kr rhe ho aisa kh dete ho

Rishi- sorry sorry..ab aisa nhi karunga..tumhe tease krne me maza ata h.( he holds her shoulder)..tumhe kya lagta h..me tumhare alawa kisi or ko dekh sakta hu..dekhna to dur soch bhi nhi skta..tum meri sansh ho..sansh ke bina zindagi nhi hoti or tum nhi to me nhi..plz tum mujhe kabhi chod ke mat jana..barna me mar jaunga..

Tanu keeps figure on rishi lips..sshh..dekho rishi ye marne ki baat mujhse kabhi mat krna..mujhe bilkul pasand nhi h

Tears comes in Rishi's eyes..

Tanu sees that n wipes his tears..

Tanu- rishi tum ro kyu rhe ho

Rishi- kabhi kabhi dar lagta h tanu ki me tumhe kho na du..tum kabhi mujhe chod ke to nhi jaogi na..promise karo..

Tanu- rishi me tumhe chod ke kaise ja skti hu..me tumhari sanshe hu to tum mera dil ho..ye dil sirf or sirf tumhare liye dhadakta h..or tumse dur hui na to me mar jaungi n tears drops

Rishi wipes her tears.. n hugs her

Rishi- ab tum marne ki baat kyu kr rhi ho..mene tumhe bhi rula diya na

Tanu- acha ye sb chodo ab hum ghar chalte h. Rishi- ha usse phle ek baat..ab mujhse tumse dur nhi rhna..me apni mom or papaji se baat krna chahta hu..

Tanu- to krlo na apne ghar per baat..

Rishi- ha isi baare me baat krni h..dekho papaji ko to tum pasand ho per mom ka kuch kh nhi sakta..to tum kuch aisa karo ki mom khush ho jaye..or shaadi ke liye maan jaye

Tanu-me aisa kya karu tum batao..

Rishi- parso mom ka birthday h..or tum aise arrangement karo ki mom tumse impress ho jaye

Tanu- me per me kaise

Rishi- tum kr sakti ho me janta hu..chalo ab ghar chalte h

Both r back their home..bani sees them

Bani- tanu jitna khush hona h hoja..me rano ki nazaro me tujhe gira na du..to mera naam bani nhi bani

Ps: wo word for late..n wo word for liking my updates..I hope u liked this update also

tanu and ahana are talking at night

Tanu - ab bas aunty ki birthday party ache se ho jaye

Ahana - Kyu rishi ke pass Jane ki kuch jyada jaldi ho rahi hai

Tanu get shy and says

Tanu - aise kuch nai hai

Ahana - hai wo to dikh raha hai

Tanu - chal ab soja

And both sleeps

Neha is listening all their talk from outside and goes to bani

Bani - tum tension mat lo mere pass bohot acha idea hai

Neha - jaldi batao kya hai

Bani shows them some powder and says

Bani - hum ise tanu ke juice me mix kardege phir dekhna tamasha

Neha - ye to bohot acha idea hai

Bani- ek bar rano use is halat me dekh le phir kabhi rishi ki shadi tanu se nahi karegi

And both laughs

In morning

Rishi is waiting for tanu in office

PS - writing for first time hope it's not too bad waise agar wo juice rishi pile wow rishi tanu ka romance ab bas koi jaldi se post krdo

Nice update waise sachi me agar wo juice rishi pe le to rishi tanu ka romance wow

Plz ab jaldi se update kardo plz 😊

Awesome update👏

U r first time writing fabulous👍🏼

I will update soon

Glad to know that you like it ab bas jaldi se koi to update kardo 😉😊

Next day

Tanu reaches bedi house.. Rishi sees them

Rishi- kitni der laga di.. Me kab se wait kr rha hu

Tanu- wo me..

Rishi- are koi baat nhi.. Der aye durust aye.. Acha Chalo

Rishi turned.. Tanu holds her hand

Rishi- kya hua tanu...

Tanu- rishi me kr paungi na

Rishi cups her face n said

Rishi- ha bilkul kr paogi.tum dar kyu rhi ho.. Tum kr sakti ho

Tanu- tumhe mujh pr itna biswas hai

Rishi- ha bahut biswas h tum pr..

Manpreet comes that time n sees them..

Manpreet- wow kya romance chal rh h inka how cute

Tanu sees manpreet n she jerk rishi so rudely..

Rishi- Kya hua tumhe.. Aise jhatak diya

She said manpreet tum.. Acha rishi me apna kaam suru krti hu.. Ok bye

Manpreet in his mind manpreet beta nikl le warna bhai nhi chodenge.. He turned.. N rishi calling him.. Kah ja rh h ruk.. Pyaar ke dushman.. Jb bhi me tanu ke sath hota hu.. Tb tu jarur ata h..

Manpreet runs fast n rishi is also running to catch him.. Biji comes kya hua.. Kyu lad rhe ho??

Manpreet- biji.. Biji.. Bacha lo.. Wo mujhe kya pta th ki tanu Or bhai romance kr rhe h me aa gaya to ab ye mujhe pe gussa kr rhe h

Biji- Kya.. Sach me.. Bhawan ne meri sun li

N hit to manpreet n said khote.. Mujhe nhi bula sakta th.. Mujhe bhi dekhna th inka romance.. Acha kah hai wo tanu.. Use bula Or tum dono achi achi bate krna.. Jaisa boyfriend girlfriend krte h.. Aisa mano jaise hum yaha hai hi nhi

Rishi- Kya?? Pura khandaan hi pagal hai.. Biji aisa kuch nhi h.. Ye chota to kuch bhi khta h..

Biji- acha.. Biji holds her ear.. Acha biji ko ullu banata h.. Biji ki tiji akhon se kuch nhi bachta..ab bol ye juth bol rha hai

Rishi- sorry sorry biji.. Ab nhi hoga aisa.. Ha ye sach bol rh h.. Ab to chod do mera kan..

Biji- ab mat krna aisa

Tanu fulfilled all preparation..

Tanu- chalo sb complete ho gya..

Raj comes..

Raj- tanu..

Tanu- bauji.. Sb complete ho gya h.. Aap dekho kuch rh to nhi gaya hai

Raj- sb perfect hai.. Sb ane wale h beta.. Tu bhi tayar ho ja..

Tanu- thik h bauji.. Me tayar hoke thodi der me aa jaungi

In the party

Rishi- are yaar sb aa gaye h.. Tanu kah hai??

Manpreet- kya hua bhai.. Kisko dudh rhe ho?? Tanu ko

Rishi- kisi ko nhi dudh rh hu.. Me mom ka wait kr rh hu.. Yuvraj Or mom are honge.. Or jb mom ayengi to wo surprised ho jayengi..

Manpreet- acha.. Mujhe laga ki aap tanu ko dudh rhe ho.. Wo wah per khadi hai

Rishi turned n sees but nobody was there.. He asked to manpreet

Rishi- kah hai tanu??

Manpreet- aao aap to tanu ko nhi dudh rhe ho na

Rishi- acha ruk ja.. Chote ke bacche.. He holds manpreet hand n bent

Manpreet- bhai bhai.. Tanu.. Aa gayi..

Rishi- juth bolta h..

Manpreet- sach kah rh hu.. Dekho uthar

Rishi sees tanu n lost in her beauty.. N goes near to tanu slowly slowly.. N collides with the waiter..

Ahana n tanu sees that.. N both r laughing..

Rishi embarrassed..

Sarda scolds on ahana n tanu.. Wo gir gya hai or tumhe hasi aa rhi h

Sarda- beta tumhe lagi to nhi??

Rishi- ji nahi aunty.. Aayiye na.. Welcome.. Me abhi ata hu.. Dress saaf krke drink gir gya hai.. To me ata hu

Sarda- ha ha beta jao

After some time

Rano enter into the bedi house n surprised

All r singing happy birthday song

Rano- ye sb kya hai.. Ye arrangements.. Mere liye kiya tumne

Rishi- ha mom ye sb apke liye.. Or ye sb arrangements tanu ne kiya h.. Aapko kaise lage

Rano- bahut ache hai

Tanu- happy birthday aunty

Rano- thanku beta

All r wishes to rano

Bani n neha irked to see this..

Bani- me tujhe aj nhi chodungi tanu

Ps: bahut jaldi me likha hai.. I hope u liked it.. Or drink agar neha piye to shayad jayada maza ayega..jb bani ka plan backfire hoga..Or tumhe jaisa acha lage..

Manpreet comes to stage and says

Manpreet - agar party me dance na ho to bhala kaise party so I request all the couples to come on stage

Rishi comes to tanu and says

Rishi - tanu chalo na dance karte hai

Tanu- rishi pagal ho gaye ho kya aise sabke samne

Rishi - arey yaar tanu chalo na

Beeji comes from behind and says

Beeji- chal ja na beta hame bhi tum dono ka romance dekhna hai

Both rishi and tanu get shy

Then manpreet announce

Manpreet - I request rishi bhai and tanu to come on stage

Rishi and tanu comes on stage and dances on tere sang yaara

Bani and neha comes to waiter and ask him to give the juice to tanu

After the dance rishi and tanu are talking

Rishi - wow tanu mom to tumse bohot impress hai tumse

tanu - haan rishi function to ache se ho raha hai bas sab thik hi ho

Rishi - don't worry tanu sab ache se hoga aur phir mai hameri shadi ki baat karoga

Tanu get shy

Rishi is about to say something when waiter comes with juice

Tanu is about to drink the juice but ahana calls her and tanu gives the glass to rishi

Tanu - rishi ye juice tum pilo mai bas abhi aaya

Rishi is about to say something but tanu goes

Rishi - offo ye tanu ne juice mujhe de diya chalo pi hi leta hoon

And rishi drinks whole glass

Neha and bani sees this

Neha - mummy ye juice to rishi ne pi liya ab kya Kare

Bani - haan Sara plan ulta padh gaya

Rishi goes to upstairs and suddenly started feeling uneasy

Here beeji ask tanu to get something from rishi room tanu sees rishi and goes to him

PS - mujhe jo acha laga wo maine likh diya hope sabko thik lage and guys plz other guys also update na

Bohot achi hai plz baaki sab bhi likho na pehle to sab dalte the story ab bhi plz dalo na thodi si to likhni hoti hai plz

Waise tanu rishi ka romance bohot Acha tha keep updating