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Posted: 5 years ago
wow guys rocking ha...
updte soon
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R(by holding Tanu's hand):Sorry yaar... Maaf karo na...
T:Nhii karungi... Aur haan aaj se main tumse baat bhi nhii karungi...
By saying this Tanu goes from Rishi's cabin...
R:Tanu... Meri baat suno...
Rishi feels upset... Manpreet became sad as indirectly he is d reason behind this scene...
M(with a sad face): Sorry bhai... Yeh meri galti hai... I shouldn't say that to Tanu... Aaj meri wajah se aapki Tanu aapse naaraz ho kar chali gayi...
Rishi feels sad for Manpreet...
R:Nhii chote... Pyaar mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti h... Kabhi ladna...kabhi jhagadna... Meri Tanu ab mujhse naraz hai... Par yeh naraz thodi der me hi pighal jayega...
M:Apne pyaar me itna vishvas???
R:Haan kyunki mere pyaar sachha h...
Manpreet smiles...
R:chote tu mere liye ek choti si madad karna... Ab hi Tanu k pass ja kar usse kehna ki main uska intezaar kar raha hun... N say her to come here ...
M:haan bhai... Par woh nhii aayi to??
R:woh zaroor aayegi... Kyunki woh bhi mujhse baat karna chahti h...
M:hmm... I will say now itself...
Manpreet smiles n leaves...
Manpreet goes near Tanu... Tanu's face itself indicate how sad is she... N how much she wants to spend time with Rishi...
M:Tanu...
T:Rishi...
M:Main Rishi bhai nhii h... Manpreet hu... Tanu... Rishi bhai is calling u...
T:Mujhe??? Main nhii jaoongi... Main usse baat nhii karungi...
M:It's not related to u... Yeh office ki baat h...
Tanu feels sad... She really wanted to be with Rishi...
T:Oh ok... Im going...
Tanu reaches Rishi's cabin... When she opened d door she got surprised seeing d decorations... Rishi had decorated d room with lots of balloons n decorative things...
Tanu calls Rishi as she didn't see him...
T:Rishi...
Just then Rishi comes from d corner holding his ears...
R:Sorry jaan...
Tanu was unable to see Rishi in this sadness... Rishi signals Tanu to pull d end of a rope which is swinging her right hand side... Tanu pulls it...
For her surprise some beautiful balloons in which sorry is written...
R:Ab maaf karogi?? He says with a pout...
Tanu didn't say anything... Just hugged him... A strong hug...
R(by smiling):Aise mat karna jaan warna meri jaan nikal jayegi...
Tanu breaks d hug n punches him in his chest... Just then a balloon hits her head... She holds it... A beautiful smile crept on her lips... It is written as 'I love u Tanu' in Rishi's handwriting... Tanu turns to see Rishi but she didn't see him...
Some one holds her hand from down... She looks down n sees Rishi standing on his knees by holding her hand...
R: Mera pyaar... Mera ishq... Meri jaan... Mera junoon sab kuch tum ho... Nhii meri zindagi hi tum hi ho... Will u be with me forever??? Har khushi me... Har gham me... Mere saath rahogi?... Will u marry me?
T(with tears of happiness):yes... U r my life... Then how will I say no...
Rishi slips a ring on tanu's finger...

PS: Wo word Lemon for late... Superb update dear👏!!! I loved Rishi's desperation to see Tanu... Dreaming Rishi about Tanu😉😳... N Tanu's fake anger❤️... Wo word Gilehri... Come n join us na...
Edited by gopsss - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Super duper update cotton candy👏 manshi bonding awesome😳 n tanshi cute romance is mind blowing❤️ kasam ki yaad aa gayi me jaldi update karungi😛 or wo word for liking my part vinushi n cotton candy n Wo word for those who read but didn't comment.. N ha vinushi join us na..
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Posted: 5 years ago
beautiful update👏 ManShi conversation ❤️ cute tanshi romance
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Posted: 5 years ago
Love the update cute tanshi romance😊😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome. Cotton candy and lemon. Beautiful. Manshi bond ahana tanu bond and last tanshi romance. While reading became very happy. Last telling Everytime update fast. Pls bye dears.
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Tanu sees that ring n smile with teary ice
Rishi- kya hua.. Tumhari aankho me aashu
Tanu- ye to khushi ke aashu hai
Rishi wipes her tear n cups her face n say
Rishi- mujhe tum rote hue bilkul achi nhi lagti.. Mera proposal itna bura laga kya.. Ki aashu aa gaye
Tanu laughs to hear this
Rishi- ab hui na baat n hugs her
Rishi- acha mujhe ek minute bhi tumse dur nhi rhna.. Me aj hi ghar pe hamari shadi ki baat karunga
All things is heard by neha.. She is calling to bani..
Neha- are mummy phone uthao.. Jb bhi kuch jaruri kaam hota hai na tabhi ye apna phone nhi uthati
Bani receives the call.. N said hello
Neha- oho mummy kitna time lagati ho phone uthaane me
Bani- aisi konsi afat aa padi jo tu phone pe phone kr rhi h
Neha- are mummy sb khatm ho gya
Bani- haye haye aisa kya ho gya.. Kahi tere papaji ko to kuch nhi ho gya.. Kaise kaha or kya hua.. Ache bhale gaye the sabzi lene.. Kissne takkar mari ye to bta..meri hi galati h..wo to jana bhi nhi chahte th..n she start crying
That time swati enter into the room
Swati- are mummy kya hua.. Kyu shor macha rhi ho
Neha- are hello hello..oho.. Ye aurat bhi na puri notanki hai.. Me jo kh rhi hu wo to sunna hi nhi h.. Pta nhi kya samaz liya
Bani hits her..
Bani- badtameez.. Me pagal hu jo shore machaungi.. Neha ne abhi bataya ki accident ho gya
Swati- accident ho gya kiska??
Bani- ghar me log kitne h.. Hum dono yahi to accident kiska hua hoga.. Baddimag
Swati- neha k accident ho gya kah??
Bani hits again
Bani- Tu pagal h.. Hum dono yahi h.. Or me baat neha se kr rhi hu.. To accident tere papaji ka hua
Swati- are ye kaise ho skta h.. Papa to bahr h.. Unhone hi to mujhe ander bheja th ki dekh teri maa kyu chillayi
Bani- kyu ri neha subah subah se me hi mili tujhe..Jo mujhe rula diya aj to April bhi nhi h.. Jo tu mujhe fool bna rhi h
Neha- ho gya apka drama khtm.. Mene kb kha ki accident ho gya h papa ka.. Apne man se kuch bhi
Bani- tune hi to kh sb khatm ho gya
Neha- ha to me rishi Or tanu ki baat kr rhi thi.. Wo dono ek dusre ke sath h.. Or aj rishi shaadi ki baat krne wala h
Bani- kya.. Tu fikr mt kr.. Me aisa kuch karungi ki rano tanu ko reject kr degi..
Neha- aisa aap kya karogi
Bani- bus tu dekhti ja.. Agar tanu ko rano ki nazaro me na gira diya na.. To mera bhi naam bani nahi.. Hai ki nahi.. Chal ab phone rakh mujhe sochne de
In rishi's cabin
Rishi- chalo
Tanu- kah??
Rishi- chalo na.. Tumhe mujh pe biswas nhi h
Tanu- hai rishi per hum ja kha rh h?
Rishi- wooo.. Me tumhe bol ke nhi.. Le jake dikhaunga.. Ab chalo
Both reached in a restaurant
Tanu- hum yaha kyu aye h rishi
Rishi- kya ho gya h tanu tumhe.. Restaurant me log kyu ate h.. Kuch khane k liye.. Mujhe to bahut bhook lag rahi h Or me janta hu tumhe bhi lag rahi h.. Hai na
Tanu- ha.. Lag to rhi h bahut zor se
Rishi- ha isliye mene yah ek table book krli th.. Or wo bhi private taki koi hame distrub na kr sake.. Chale ander
Both enter into the restaurant..
Reception- hello sir..
Rishi- hello mene table book ki th.. Rishi singh bedi ke naam se
Reception- yes sir table no 12..
Rishi- ok thanku.. Acha tanu tum jao.. Me ata hu.. Tanu- tum kha ja rhe ho
Rishi- are kahi nhi ja rha hu.. Tum jao me ata hu
Tanu- ok
Rishi told to receptionist doing special arrangements for tanu.. N when he turns he collides with some one.. He is pawan
Rishi says sorry but when he sees pawan he gets angry..
Pawan- kah dyan h tumhara.. Dekh kr chalo.. Warna pta nhi kya ho jaye
Rishi- me apna dhyan rakh lunga.. Tum apni socho.. N he walks a little further
Pawan- are itni bhi kya jaldi hai.. Ohh.. Tanu wait kr rhi h
Rishi gets angry to hear tanu's name by pawan n he point a finger on him
Rishi- apni ghandi juban se agar tanu ka naam liya na to mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.. Or ha abhi to ja rh hu.. Agar phir tanu ka naam liya ya uske baare me socha bhi na to wo haal karunga.. Ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhoge
He leaves
Pawan- bahut ho gya rishi.. Ab me tujhe dikhaunga.. Jb me teri tanu ko tujhse chin lunga.. Just wait n watch

PS: wo word vinushi, paru, cotton candy, leena, dinesh, tearsdrops for liking.. N wo word for late.. I hope u will liking dis part also
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb part Lemon!!! Rishi's surprise planning... Oh Pawan's return... Wo word dear for not updating... I will update it by wednesday...
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: gopsss

Superb part Lemon!!! Rishi's surprise planning... Oh Pawan's return... Wo word dear for not updating... I will update it by wednesday...

Wo word for liking cotton candy. .it's ok dear whenever u will be free from ur work u may update😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Hey hamare creative writers kaha ho koi to apni ff ya story update kardo plz plz plz
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