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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Mind blowing update and really loved the ending. U ended in a cliffhanger. Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Tanuja was badly injured... She was taken to hospital ...
Rishi gets a call from police..
Police:rishi ji aapki biwi kaa accident hogaya heh
Rishi: kya .. He goes to hospital
Police: aap rishi Singh bedi hena
Rishi:haan kahaan heh meri tanuja woh teek hena..
Police:iam sry sir...
Rishi breaks down.. And sits down...
Police: sry sir hum unhe nahi bacha paaye..
Rishi: nahi tanuja mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakthi woh mereliye iss duniya meh aayi thi aur aisa kaise jaa sathi heh... Nahi tanuja ..
Shouts tanuja...
Police:aap unki body lekhar jaa sakthe heh..
Aur uss room meh heh unke body...
Rishi slowly gets up and stumbles..
He remembers his first meet with tanu..
Then he remembers his marriage ...
Then her death..
Then his meet with tanuja...
Then marriage...
Their consummation...
Their knok jhok...
Their fights...
Their romance...
Rishi:kyun mere saath hi aisa hotha heh... Meh toh buhat acha insaan hoon naa... Meh toh hamesha sabke madad kartha hoona ... And cries... Tanuja...
He reached that room...
He slowly opens the door...
But some one taps on hus shoulders...
He turns and gets shocked...
He loses his balance an falls down.
It is none other than... Tanuja..
Rishu gets up and hugs tanuja...
Rishi:meri tanuja zindaa heh... And gets happy...
And hygs her tightly..
Ab meh tumhe kahin jaane nahi dhungaa..
Ab ek second bbu mujhse dhur hui toh mujhse bhura koi nahi hoga...
Tanuja:arre par kya hua tumhe...
Rishi:kuch mat bolo bas chalo yahaan se...
Next epi:madhav romance..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Love the update..Precape madhaw romance but with whom.Wating for next part.Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Rishi:inspector neh kaha tanuja ka accident hua heh.. He cries...
Tanuja:rishi iss duniua meh kya sirf mera naam hi tanuja heh...aur raaste jab meh aarahi thi tab tanuja kaa accident hogaya tha..aur meh unhe lekar hospital aayi aur police koh laga ki mera accident hogaya..
Rishi:aisa kaise woh karsakte meri jaan nikal gayi...ek min kehliye aisa laga jaise kisine mujhse meri oxygen cheenliya...
Tanuja:acha teek heh meh jaanthi hoon ki tum mujhse buhat pyaar karthi hoh...aur vaada karthi hoon ki meh tumse dhur kahi nahi jaungi...tum chaho tabhi meh nahi jaoungi...
Rishi:pakaa promise ...
Tanuja:pakka mera lafanter...
Tanuja:mujhe naa tumhe kuch bolna heh...woh madhav naa pyaar kartha heh..
Rishi:haan woh tumse pyaar kartha heh..
Tanuja:arrr use pyaar nahi crush kehthe heh..woh netra ae pyaar kartha heh...
Rishi:kya ..yeh kya bol rahe hoh...
Fb starts madhav calls tanuja..
Madhav:isse phele tum kuch kaho meh kuch kehna chaathi hoon..meh netra se pyaar kartha hoon..agar kabhi bhi tumne mujhse apna dost samja heh pls mujhe mere pyaar se mila dho...
Tanuja:kya ...she gets happy...and says madhav tum sach bol rahi hoon naa...
Madhav:haan apni kasam kaa kar kehta hoon...meh netra se pyaar kartha hoonn...
Tanuja:teek heh mehtumari madad karungi...
Fb ends..
Rishi:tum kya meh unki milan karvavungaa..
Ab netri ki bbidaai hogi...and dances...
Tanuja smiles and says:tum buhat khush hohna..
Rishu:haan kyunki iss chipkali ne mera jeena aram kardiya tha..par woh mujhse sache dilse pyaar karthi heh ...
Tanuja gets angry and says:kya kaha tumne woh tumse sache dil se pyaar karthi heh...haan haan woh tumse pyaar karthi heh aur woh bhi sache dil se ..meh toh tumse sache dil se pyaar nahi karthi naa..
And pretends angry ..
Rishi:jala hua ...
Tanuja holds his collars:jala kyun hogi mujhse tum sirf meri thi hoh aur hamesha rahogi...samje rishu singh bedi...
Rishi:haan ..pls mere collar chodo sab dek rahe hheh...
Tanuja leaves his collar..
Tanuja and rishi reach home...
Tanuja intentionally makes netra fall and madhav holds her...
Netra and madhav have and eyelock..
No one is present except rishi and tanuja ..
Rishi:chalo humhe inhe akla chod deh the heh ...both leaves...
Both departs...
Madhav is mesmerized to see netra...
Netra tries to leave but again she falls down..and both have a romntic eyelock...
Madhav:tum aaj buhat kubsoorat hoh...
Netra:was happy as someone praised her about her look...and says thank you...pheli baar kisine mujhse aisa bola...
Next epi: netra madhav romance ..


Late update kehliye sry actually meh bulgayi thi update ke baare meh ...match ki waja se..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Well done Niki.Netra ka pata hi cut kar diya.
And please not forget to update we Egarly wait for ur update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Netra:meh rishi se pyaar karthi hoon...aur pls mujhse koi umeed mat rakna...
Madhav:meh sirf yeh kehna chaathi hoon...bas ekbar apni aaken band kar ke dekho...jo bhi tumhe aaken band karne ke baad dikhegaa ussi se tum pyaar karthi hoh...netra closes her eyws and she founds madhav ...
Netra:madhav...
Madhav:gets happy...
Netra:nahi meh rishi se pyaar karthi hoon...
Madhav:isse pyaar nahi ego kehthe heh...tanuja se tum jheet na chathi thi...
Netra:haan meh tanuja se jheet naa chathi thi par...mujhe pata nahi tha ki pyaar kya hotha heh...socha rishi ko jheetnaa hi pyaar heh par ab samaj meh aaya pyaar paane se nahi unki dil jheetna padtha heh...
Netra:i luv u madhav...
Madhav:i lu u too netra...
Rishi and tanuja wa seeing this ...

Rishi:shukar heg tanuja netra koh samaj meh toh aagaya...warna yeh poori zindagi mere upar chipki rehthi ...par khush bhi hoon netra koh ek acha jeevan saathi milgaya...
Tanuja:lekin rishi mummy ji kaa kya karen...woh toh netra koh madhav se shaadi nahi hone dhenge...
Rishi:tum uska chinta mat karo...meh mom koh samalunga...
Waise aaj kyun naa hum bhi koi romance karle...
Tanuja shys and says rishi tum bhi naa..
Rishi takes tanuja in her arms...and takes her to their room and closes the door...
Maadhav:netra may i have the pleasure to dance with u...
Netra:yes...
Both have romamtic dance on main phir bbi tumko chaungaa...
After their dance both have dinner and goes to their respective rooms...
In the morning...
Netra:rano aunty...
Rano:aunty beta meh tumaari mom hoon...
Netra:nahi aap meri mom nahi hoh..pls mujhe galat mach ssamjegaa meh madhav se pyaar karthi hoon...
Rano:gets a heart attack waala shock and says kya bol rahi hoh tum rishi se pyaar karthi hoh aur tumari shaadi rishi se hi hogi...
Netra:rishi meh pyaar nahi karthi hoon...aur mere ego ki waja se yeh sab hoagaya..tanuja se jhretna chathi thi aur uski pyaar samaj li par nahi meh madhav se pyaar karthi hoon..aur ussi se shaafi bhi karna chaathi hoon and leaves...
netra goes to rishiz room...
Netra:rishi ..she folds her hands..and says mujhe maaf kardo rishi and hugs him...
Tanuja comes and separates them...
Tanuja:yeh kya hoh raha heh...
Netra:tanuja pls galat mat samaj naa mene bas apni dost koh hug kiya heh...aur tanuja pls mujhe maaf kardo tumse jheetne ki chakar meh apni zindagi jeema bhulgayi..par shukar keh bhagwan kaa ki mujhe jalthi pata chal gaya ...thank you mujhe yeh samjaane kehliye ki meh kiise pyaar karthi hoon...
Both tanuja and rishi look each other...
Netra:aisa ek dusre koh mat dekho tum logon koh kya laga mujhe pata nnahi chalega...par tanuja meh kaise tumhe tqs bolun...tq u so much meh kitna kuch kiya phir bhi tum mujhse badla lene ki jaga tum ..before she could complete..
Tanuja:bas karo ab jao aur apni shaadi ki taiyaari karo...
Next epi:rano evil plans..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Love your all updates it's shocking and rocking chalo chipkali ko aqal a gaye but that rano uff kabhi thik nai ho gi please update soon and sorry for being not active and commenting wo thori bussy thi 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Wow love the update.Chipkli ne rano ko heart attack dae diya . Good for her.Wating for next . Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Netra:teek heh and leaves...
Rano was hearing all this..
Rano:toh yeh sab uss tanuja ki waja se hoh raha heh..
Tanuja meh tumhe nahi chodungi...
Ab muhje kuch karna hoga...
Next day morning..
Rishi announces everyone about netra and madhav marriage..
Rishi:aur aaj shyaam koh engagement heh..
Tanuja:netra chalo humhe shopping bhi tho karni heh ..
Both leaves for shopping...
In the car..
Netra:tanuja kya meh tumhe apna dost maansakthi hoon..
Tanuja:nahi ..
Netra:its ok..
Tanuja:nahi pagal tum tho pehlese hi meri dost hoh..
Netra:tqs and hugs her..
They reach home after their shopping..
Rishi:heh bhagwan meh loot gaya...barbaad hogaya..
Manpreet:kya hua bhai aisa kya dekhli phone peh..
Rishi:tanuja neh 6 lakh ki shopping kiya..
Raj:oye kottha ussne tho sir 6 lakh ki shopping kiya heh par tumari maa tho 7 lakh se zyaada hi hamesha shopping karthi heh ...
Rishi sees tanuja and asks:6 lakh meh aisa kya kareeda heh..
Tanuja:sab kehliye dress kareeda heh..
Rishi:acha mujhe laga tum sirf Netra ki dress 6 lakh ki heh..
Tanuja:meh tumhe paga dijthi hoon kya ... Koi 6 lakh ki dress kyun lega...
Tanuja:bahuji dekhiye naa apni patni kehliye 6 lakh bhi nahi dehsaktha..
Raj:kottha meri beti koh kuch mat bol ..tanuja puttar yeh loh rishi ka card ..
Rishi:tanuja ji..pls thoda kam..
Tanuja:bahuji .
Raj:kotha...
Rishi:teek heh...meri maa..
Netra:tum dono kitne cute hona..aisa hi hamesha rehna..
Raj:netra beta and keeps his hand on her head..
Raj:rab se prathna karunga ki tum aur madhav bhi aisa hi khush rahe..
Netra gets emotional...and says:pehli baar aapne mujhe aashirwaad diya heh uncle...tq u..
Raj:uncle nahi jaise tanuja meri beti heh waise hi tum bhi aaj se meri beti hoh...
Netra gets happy...
Beeji:beta mujhe bhi maaf karde ...mene bhi tumhe galat samja...aur aaj ke baad meh tumhe kabhi bhi chipkali nahi bulaungi...
Netra:beeji agar aap chaathe heh ki meh aapko maaf kardun tho aap mujhe chipkali hi bulaayenge ...
Beeji:teek heh meri chipkali...
Rano was seeing all this
And leaves...
Rano:yeh tanuja neh pata nahi kya jaado kiya heh sab iski taraf hogayi..ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga...phele mujhe netra koh tanuja keh kilaaf karna hoga aur usse bas ek baar rishi se shaadi karwadun phir woh madhav ke baare meh nahi sochegi ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love the update Niki.6 lakh ki shopping lol.Update soon.Wating for next.
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