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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Ooo do shocking tiwist hum soch bhi kaisy liya k ratra and that madhav sudhar jaye gy uff so vicious they are amazing tiwist dear update sooner.
Thanks Aru for your help 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rishi:tumari sapno meh chipkali..
Netra turns..
Netra:rishi...
Rishi slaps her
Rishi: how dare u.. Tum kabhi nahi sudhroge..
Arre sharam karo..
Jis ladki koh tumne dokha diya heh uss ladki neh kya kya kiya heh tumariliye..
Uss ladki neh tumari zindagi neh khushiyaan laana chaathi thi... Tumhe dukh meh dekar woh dukh hoh jaathi thi.. Tumhe madjav se isliye nahi milaana chaathi thi ki tum hamaari beech meh aarahi hoh.. Woh toh tumaari zindagi meh ek aisa insaan koh laana chaathi thi joh sirf tumara hoh...
Netra cries...
Rano:rishi...
Rishi:aaj se aapka bada beta aapkehliye mar chukha heh...
Rano:nahi rishi beta...
Aisa mat bolo.. ..
Rishi:mujhe sharam aathi heh aapko mera maa kehthe hue...
Rano cries...
And says yeh sab uss ladki ki waja se hoh raha heh...
Rishi:aap kabhi nahi shud rohge..
Rishi takes tanuja and calls doctor...
But due to traffic doc nahi aapaatha heh..
Aur rishi tanuja koh hospital lekar jaatha heh...
Doc checks her...
And comes outside...
Rishi:doc kya hua meri tanuja teek toh hehnaa...
Doc:abhi kuch nahi keh saktha hoon... Hosh aaneke baad hi patha chalega...
After two hours...
Rishi sitting near tanuja...
Tanuja wakes up...
Tanuja:meh hospital meh kaise??
Rishi hugs her and says ab sab teek hohjaayega
Tanuja jerks him and says kon hoh tum...
Rishi:tumara pati...
Tanuja holds her head nd says yeh kaise hoh saktha heh...
Meri shaadi kaise ... .
And faints...
Doc comes and says to rishi :mr rishi i am sorry aapki biwi koh memory loss hoh gaya heh... Aur woh paanch saal peeche chaligayi... yaani woh apni shaadi keh pehli waali tanuja ban gayi...
Unki memory kab waapas aayegi mujhe nahi patha lekin unhe koi bhi stress mat dehna...
Rishi sits down and cries badly...
And says tanuja ... Kyun bhagwan mere saath hi kyun mujhe memory loss deh diya hoh tha meri tanuja koh taqleef kyun di..
Kyun usse hi saari pareshaaniyaan milthi heh...

Friends with ur permission kya meh yeh ff end kardhun yaa phir meh iss ff koh continue karun... With third janam waali kahaani...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Good ko rishi rano deserve this. 😡 .Wow third janam of tanshi it will intresting if u can then plz continue this with third janam I think most of us want tanshi college romance.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Tanuja:gets up... And sees rishi sleeping near her... And says yeh kon heh... Inhe kahin dekha heh... And remembers... Something... Arreh yeh toh rishi sir heh...
Tanuja:rishi sir... Sir.. .
Rishi gets up and says:cups hrr face and says tanuja tum teek hoh naa..
Tanuja:pinch her and says kya yeh joh bhi bola sach heh yaaa neh sapne dek rahi hoon.. .
Rishi:kyun kya hua...
Tanuja: sir aap toh kadoos hoh naaa...
Rishi thinks tq god... Atleast isse meh toh yaad hoon...
And says tum bul gayi.. Shayad .. Tumari waja se meh badal gaya.. Aur hum dono buhat achhe dost ban gayi... Heh..
Tanuja:gets shocked and says kya?? Hum. Dono ... Aur dost.. . And starts laughing...
Rishi looks her ... And makes faces... And says... Kya hum dono dost nahi hoh sakthe i mean dost heh... Tum bul gayi.. .
Meh gussa hoon tumse and pretends to be angry...
And turns
Tanuja: acha rishi... i am sry.. And holds her ears...
Rishi:teek heh maaf kiya... Doc neh tumhe ahraam karme kehkiye bola heh... So take rest meh aatha hoon...
And leaves...
Tanuja:rishi kitna badal gaya...
And smiles...
And says kya meh pasand karne lagi hoon... Rishi koh...
Rano calls netra:beta kya hua...
Netra:aunty.. Tanuja kaa memory loss hoh gaya heh...
Rano jumps and says ab uss chudel se chutkara mil jayagaa...
Netra:nahi aunty... Rishi neh usse yeh bol diya ki rishi aur woh dost heh.. Ab woh rishi ke saath hi rahegi... Memory loss hoh nek baad bhi woh rishi keh saath hi rahegi...
Rishi comes behind and says:tum dono kabhi nahi shudroge...
Rano hears this... In phone..
Rishi leaves...
Tanuja:rishi.. .
Rishi comes inside and says kya hua tanuja..
Tanuja:woh meh ghar jaana chathi hoon..
Rishi: lekin.. .
Tanuja:agar meh yahaan rahungi... Toh aur bimaar hoh jaungi..
Rishi:teek heh...
Next epi:masti in bedis house
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Thanks a lot for such a nice update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Wow u start the story freely.It will be interesting to see how rishi will bring her memory back
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Humm memory loss it seems interesting like the tiwist continue please
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Friends ... there is a change in precap...
Its not masti in bedis house but it is 50 years leap... With new entries ...
Everyone dies... Tanshi got new janam ..
In this janam ... everyone is changed except ahana, man, rishi, tanu...
And rano... To twist the story...
If u guys agree i will start the story...
Pls comment...
If ur not ok... The i will continue from precap
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Nikishnivi

Friends ... there is a change in precap...
Its not masti in bedis house but it is 50 years leap... With new entries ...
Everyone dies... Tanshi got new janam ..
In this janam ... everyone is changed except ahana, man, rishi, tanu...
And rano... To twist the story...
If u guys agree i will start the story...
Pls comment...
If ur not ok... The i will continue from precap


I am agre with this precape and I think most of want to see tanshi new. Janam so plz continue with new janam.Am I right friends
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Posted: 7 years ago
30 years later... ..
Singhania house is shown...
Lady:arre jaldi karo ladke waale aajayenge...
Other lady:haan haan... Chinta mat karo sab taiyaar heh bas tumari beti time se taiyaar hoh jaaye...
Lady:haan ... beta taiyaar hoh ki nahi...
She hears a voi e haan maa ready hoon...
Other lady:tum jao jaakar dekho tumaribeti kaa koibarosa nahi.. .
Lady:sahi keh rahe hoh aap ... Meh khud jaakar dekthi hoon...
Boy:maa pls jaldi chalo mere saath ... Important heh...
Lady:beta mujhe tumari di koh ek baar dekar aathi hoon...
Boy:nahi mom... Chalo na...
The boys face is not shown...
Lady:acha chalo...
In terrace
Girl:di aap sach meh yeh shaadi keh lie haan bol dohgi...
Another:arre pagal tohdhi naa hoon joh itni jaldi haan bol dhungi... Abhi abhi hum clg ki frst yr meh heh... aur family ki baath maankar haan boldhun never... Maa kehliye mene haanboli heh...
Girl :aap meri di toh nahi hoh par...
Another:pagal agli bhar aisa bola naa toh dekh lehna meh tumari muh thod dhungi...
Boy:arre waah kya nazara heh... Hi moti
The boys face is shown he is none other than manpreet...
Girls face is shown she is ahana...
But now her name is akaansha...
And manpreet name is manveer ..
Akaansha: di dekho naa...
Manveer:meri di heh yeh...
Akaansha: par aisa lagta heh ki shayad aap pechle janam meh meri di hoh gi...
Manveer: haan pechle janam meh yeh meri bhabhi heh.. .
That girl gets shock ... Nd says pagal pls aisi baathen mat kar... Mera shir dukhtha heh...
Manveer:acha sry di... Ab chale...
That girls face is shown she is tanu... But now her name is tanvi...
Tanvi is wearing light blue colour chudhidaar with hair open... She is lean more beautiful ...
She believes in god but she used to ennoy every minute of her life...
Not like other janams...
She is kind hearted as always...
She is a gujarti girl and punjabi girl... Her father is a Punjabi nd her mother is Gujarati..
Tanvi:akaansha ladke waale aane se phele hum ek baar mandir hoh kar aathe heh...
Akaansha: ok di...
Par aunty jaane nahi dhenge...
Tanvi:unhe patha thodhi naa chalega...
Akaansha: aunty koh bathana hoh gaa warna...
Tanvi:aunty ki chamchi.. Chalo warna akele chale jaungi...
Akaansha: teek heh...
Tanvi takes a saree.. Goes to balcony and ties it and she jumps...
Meanwile a boy comes...
He gets mesmerized seeing her...
Nd feels as if they met before .
The boys face is shown...
He is rishi but his face is changed...
His name is dev...
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