Adhuri kahaani tanuja aur rishi ki ff 29

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi friends as we are confused about the leap i am going to write an new ff based on five years leap

New characters
maharaj raj pratap singh a maharaja lives with his wife vandana pratap singh his son madhav pratap singh , rohit pratap singh younger bro of madhav, shaurya pratap singh younger bro of madhav and rohit ...

Paanch saal baad
Netra was shown she was wearing a light blue saree mangalsutra in her neck and sindoor in her head
Netra:john arrange the break fast table fast
John:ok madam
Rano:netra what happend kuch kiya usne
Netra:nahi but dont worry it will happen
Rano:ok
Manpreet :pls iam feeling hungry john give me paratas
Beeji comes for break fast
Beeji:aalu ke parata jaise tanuja banathi thi
Everyone gets sad hearing this
Rano:koi uske baare meh baad nahi kareh gaa samje aap
Beeji gets up
Manpreet:beeji break fast
Beeji:nahi man nahi heh
Netra:rano mom aap keh liye mene parata banaya heh
Rano gets happy nd eats it
Manpreet gets up and goes
Rano:iss tanuja ne patha nahi kya jaadoo kiya thaa
Ahana was shown in Smiley's room where she was feeding sanya (Smiley's daughter)
Ahana:pls beta have some
Sanya :ok. Nani i will
And she have her break fast

In palace
A lady was shown who was wearing a grand saree like maha rani asking shanky kaka(a workert but he is working for many years so he is like a family member)
Lady:shanky kaka pps arrange the break fast
Shanky kaka:haan raniji i will
Lady:kaka dont call me rani u are older than me and if u call me rani then i will punish u . u r punishment is u need to call me beta and not rani ok
Shanky kaka:ok rani sorry beta
Madhav:shanky kaka pls call my wife
Shanky kaka:she is in garden with vandana madam
Madhav:ok kaka but where is my wallet
Lady:woh aapke right walle drawer meh heh
Madhav turns around and the lady is shown she is none other than tanuja .. she is in a royal look looking beautiful in that saree
Madhav laughs and says i cant live without u a single day
Tanuja laughs and thinks about rishi
At that time vandana comes
Vandhana:tanuja beta u know naa kal kya heh
Tanuja: haan maa i knew and i will go

I hope friends u like it,.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love this gf also like ur other gf.Please continue.
But I will not day show mai asia hi ho because I not want leep now.But love ur gf.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow very interesting concept
yippee tanuja got married to madav good for her 😃
rishi got married to that chipkali good for him he deserve her 👏
rishi doesn't deserve wife like tanuja he never value her 😡
want to see him suffering for his deed 😡
continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice update soon but dont want tanshi get married with different partners😭but show mein to aisa kuch na ho but you continue waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice starting but sad tanshi married to anyone else not with each other. Anyway update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Continuation..
Vandana:i am so lucky to get u as my bahu sorry bahu kum beti zyaada ..
Both tanuja and vandana smiles.. And hugs like mother and daughter
Madhav:kisi ki bhi nazar naa lage.. Meanwhile madhav gets a calland leaves
Next morning everyone comes down for pooja
Tanuja sings main aarti teri song .. And gives aarti to everyone
Vandana:beta tanuja sab ready hena..
Tanuja:haan maa sab ready heh
Vandana:aaj meri beti kaa janam din heh aur woh zinda heh bhi yaa nahi humhe nahi pata and cries
Tanuja:maa woh waapas aayegi humara pyaar use waapas lekhar aayega
Every year on this day both tanuja and madhav helps poor people by giving them some money, clothes .
Tanuja:madhav mene waada kiya thaa that i will go for picnic with ngo children ..
Madhav:tum maharani hoh aur tum kuch bhi kar sakti hoh
Tanuja:lekin madhav
Madhav keeps his finger on her lips and he was mesmerized to see her
Suddenly tanuja gets a call from ngo
From ngo:mam where are u we are waiting for u..
Tanuja:haan i am on the way
And she cuts the call
Madhav calls someone nd he asks some one to arrange private plane
Madhav:tanuja plane ready heh u may go
Tanuja:i will go by car madhav
Madhav:agar tum plane meh gayi then u may reach pune by one hour
Tanuja agrees and she reaches pune
She picks ngo children and goes for picnic
In bedis house
Rishi comes out from bathroom and he gets ready
It was 10 am
At this time everyone will be busy in their work
Rano and netra will go for kitty party
Beeji will go to mandir
Raj , manpreet, uv to office
Ahana will be busy with her grand daughter
Along with smiley
Nakul will go to his college
Rishi comes down for break fast
He turn towards the wall nd sees tanujas pic hanged in the wall with mala
Rishi:tanuja kyun tum mujhe chod kar chali gayi iss duniya se abhi bhi woh din yaad heh and remembers that day but that fb was not shown
Ahana comes down nd sees rishi seeing tanujas photo
Rishi:ahana
Ahana dosnt see him and moves
(Actually something happened five yrs back and they all think that tanuja is dead and due to this ahana stopped talking with rishi She was so upset becoz once again she lost her sis becoz of rishi)
Sanyas gets a call from her friend who is in ngo and she asked her to join in the picnic
Sanya request rishi to drop her there
Rishi agree s and takes her
On the way to pune
Sanya:do u know a mahrani from rajkot used to spend time with ngo people .
Rishi: really then surely i will meet that lady
Tanuja reaches the picnic spot and everyone makes tent
Madhav was unable to concentrate in his work and vandana suggest him to meet tanuja
Madhav agrees and he reaches the spot
Meanwhile rishi along with sanya reaches the spot
Rishi:sanya tum jao meh abhi aatha hoon
Sanya runs towards her friend and she meets tanuja
Sanya was shocked to see tanuja and runs towards rishi
Tanuja was little bit confused as why that girl ran away on seeing me
Sanys runs towards rishi
Rishi: wht happened
Sanya:nothing and thinks sach meh woh zindaa heh .. Yaah i was wrong
Rishi:chalo lets go
They both went inside the spot
What will happen next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update.Ahana stop taking to rishi.Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Madhav enters the picnic spot suprising tanuja ..
Tanuja:madhav tum yahaan..
Madhav:haan woh socha bachon ke saath todhi time spend karle
Tanuja:we are going to play foot ball
Tanuja was wearing a light pink saree madhav was in his casual outfit
Madhav:teek heh i will also join u.
Both started to play (remember our sharukh and kajol kuch kuch hota heh scene ) the same scene takes place here
Madhav sings
Ladki badi anjaani hai
Sapna hai sach hai kahaani hai
Dekho ye pagli bilkul na badli
Ye to wohi deewani hai
Tanuja sings
Ladka bada anjaana hai
Sapna hai sach hai fasana hai
Haan haan ye pagla bilkul na badla
Ye to wohi deewana hai
Tanuja remembers rishi and sings
Paas rehke bhi thi doori
Jaane kaise thi majboori
waqt wo bhi ajeeb tha
Jab tu mere kareeb tha...
Madhav sings
Kho gayi tu ye kis jahaan mein
Main yahaan hoon dekh to zara

Ladka bada anjaana hai
Sapna hai sach hai fasana hai
Dekho ye pagli bilkul na badli
Ye to vohi deewani hai

Hum bheed mein bhi thi tanhai
Yaad har pal teri aayi
Roke koi mujhe zara
Bhar na aaye ye dil mera
Tanuja sings
Behke behke mere kadam hain
Aise mein tu sambhaal to zara

Ladki badi anjaani hai
Sapna hai sach hai kahaani hai
Haan haan ye pagla bilkul na badla
Ye to wohi deewana hai

Tumne na jaane kya sapne dikhaaye
Jaage na sota hai
Kuchh kuchh hota hai
Kuchh kuchh hota hai
tanuja was about fall but madhav saves her and rishi was seeing all this and shocked to see her alive
But he was jealous seeing tanuja singing and dancing with some one
But onthe other side rishi was happy to see his lady love alive
Tanujas was playing with her hair and madhav was mesmerized to see her
Rishi was seeing all this and walks forward but security guard stops him and says he is not permitted to go inside
Rishi:but kyun mujhe apni biwi se milna heh
Body guard:kon heh aapki biwi
Rishi:wohi jo pink saree meh hena woh meri biwi heh
Body guard :tum jaanthe bhi hoh woh kon heh
Rishi:meri biwi
Body guard:nahi maharaja madhav pratap singh ki biwi maharani tanuja madhav pratap singh
Rishi was shocked to hear this that his lady love moved in her life
Sanya comes and asks the body guard to leave him inside as madhav gave the permission
Bofy guard agrees and leaves there rishi started to cry .. And thinks kyun tanuja meri liye wait bhi nahi kiya apni zindagi meh aage badgayi ... And starts crying..
Sanya wipes his tears and says koi baat nahi meh unhe waapas aapki zindagi meh laakar rahongi yeh nera waada heh kasam aapke pyaar ki
Rishi wipes his tears and hugs sanya and thanks her
Next epi:tanshi meet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😭 buhat touchy update thi finally rishi know that tanuja is alive and happy that rishi feel jealous ab maza aye ga and precap was interesting waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful... So touchy story. Just can't wait for Tanshi meeting.
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