Tanshi & Ahaman ' Kyunki Tum Hi Ho ' Updt Part 5 pg 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys after you ask me to cont so here im going to present you first part of Kyunki Tum Hi Ho


Here we go do supporting me with your love





Kyunki Tum Hi Ho


Part 1


Its start with morning after two months of tanshi wedding .


Tanshi room


Tanu was being ready after taking bath ... she was drying her hair with towel ... rishi was admire his beautiful wife being ready ... how she look more pretty every morning ... he like to admire her when she be ready ... when tanu was about to tie her mangalsutre ... he stop her on saying .


" Yeh to mera haaq hai tanu ... tumhe patahai na " ... he wake from bed with his smile to her n goes close to her .


" Hmm janti hoon ... isiliye mein tabtak nahin lagati jabtak tum utt nahi jate " ... she reply back to him with smile .


Rishi who reach to her so close ... he smell her frangrance ... he stand from her back side n he admire them in the mirror n say ... " Kiya jodi hai na humare ... deko kya rub lagti ho aise bige balon se ... bohat hot lagti ho ... ji chahta hai ke tumko apne bahon mein leloon aur pyaar kar loon kya kehti ho hmm , waise dine to aaj hamare ras hai na " ... he caress her hair n face while he talk .


" Han aaj hi ke dine hum dono ek huwein teh ... do maina huwa hai aur tum abhi bhi charat ke mood mein ho ... deko aaj na hum dono mandil jaye ge puja karne kya kehte ho hmm " ... she give him back to tie her mangalsutre n was talking in a love way to him .


While he try to tie mangalsutre ... he caress her back to see what she will do if his touch still do effect her ... he saw how she get shiver n close her eyes due his touch on her skin ... he was amused n cont to caress her to her neck blow near her ear ... she hold his arm as more his touch move other place on her body more she want to feel more from him until she realize he love to torture her with his touch n then finally both end make love ... she stop him n said .


" Tum sudro ge nahin nah lafantar hi raho ge ? ... arey tum bandlo meri mangalsutre ... warna aaj mein kud mehnon gi " ... she try to change his mood .


" Haan mein azar lafantar bansak ta hoon tumpar ... kyunki tum hi ho jiss se mein betanha pyaar karta hoon ... meri jaan ho tum mere haar sans mein tum hi basti ho meri pyari biwi ... tum se pyaar nahin karoon ga to kisse garoon han " ... he finally tie the mangalsutre n saw the other chain which has two rings he ask about that .


" Tanu labse tumko mila hoon yeh chain to tumhare gale mein hi dega tum isse utar ti nahin ... aisa kyun ? aur kiya khas hai isse main han ? " ... he ask in a curious way .


Tanu know he may not remember on it that why he ask in a jealous way ... she wanted to tease him n see his jealous more ... " Yeh to kisi ki khas nishani hai ... jo mein apne dil ke kareeb rakti hoon ... usski yaad jura hou wa hain issme ... yeh mahesha mere gale mein rehta hai " .


Rishi feel jealousy n wonder who it can be who was so close to her which he is unaware of it ... as he know it only him which tanu was more close n not other person ... his curious mind want to know more n he said " Aisa kaun hai jo tumhare dil ki itni kareeb hai ya tah han ? ... jahan tak mujhe mata hai tum to sirf mujhe kanti thi na ? agr mein tum se kahoon isse utar do phir tum nahin utarogi kya ? kyun tumse utar ne ko kehraha hoon mein hi utar tah isse aur tum kuch nahin kahogi " ... he remove it without wasting time .


" Arey yeh tum ne kya kiya ab to mein ussi se hi pehna hoon gi ... tumko jealan huwa " ... she cont teasing him n hide her smile from him .


" Deko tum meri biwi ho aur kahir si bat hai mujhe acha nahin lagta ke tum kisi aur ki dihuwi chis ko inte pass lagne ki chamji aur mujhe usska naam abhi batao mein usska muh tor doon ga himat huwi kaise usska tumko istara sa ring dene ka hai naam batao bas .. tumpar sirf mera haaq hai aur kisi ka nahin " ... he show clearly his jealousy n insicure feeling ... he give her the chain .


She was very happy to see his reaction n how he is very possessive other her for him n say " Tumko janna hai woh kaun hai na to jab usse doon gi mere gale mein pehla ne ko to dek ley na bas ... tumhare hi samne kar roon gi balki abi yahan issi kamre mein " .


He was confused on her talk ... but when he make him turn to mirror n give him the chain n said " Deko mera pati hai na usse pasan nahin aya ke tum mujhe ye nichani ke tor pe diya tah aur meine apne gale mein pass ranka ab tum hi raklo isse yeh kud mujhe pehna loon " ... she smile to him .


" Iss ka matlab woh mein hi tah jiss ne tumko yeh diya tah aur mein bewaf kitara tumse pooch ra ha hoon " ... he feel relief as it was him not other person ... he tie it on saying " Tum ab isse kabhi mat nikal na meri pyaar ki pehli nishani hai yeh " ... he kiss her on her fore head .


Tanu reply she will never ever remove it now its a precious gift from him ... she will cont keep it till her dead ... the day she lost it that day will be her last day .. on saying this he cover her mouth on saying dont ever say to leave him he wont be able to live without her ... both hug ๐Ÿค—each n wish happy two months of wedding ... both was happy in other arms .


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THAT IT FOR NOW WILL WAIT TO SEE IF YOU WILL APPRECIATE THIS PART WITH YOUR FEED BACK N PLEASE DO HIT LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.


NEXT : TANSHI DANCE IN RAIN


THX
LOVE
HANSA ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Edited by --HANSA-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awesome indeed.. ๐Ÿ‘
Loved tanshi's SWeet convo..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Beautiful chapter
Awe tanshi cute morning romance
Loll rishi was jealous seeing that ring on tanu neck
But tanu tease rishi with that
Finally rishi knew it was him & always will him to close to tanu
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
So beautiful...as alwaz..
tanshi conversation mindblowing..
plz next update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
well written๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ please update soon.. and thanks for pm๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
lovely update๐Ÿ˜ณ do cnt soon..
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