FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: akaur

the last 3 updates were really good
poor shiv he has got it bad
i hope gauri soon falls in luv with him 2!

Thank you.... yes , poor shiv...he is going through a tough phase... i hope so too... Gauri...please donot make him more upset... šŸ˜› .... keep reading... i love to read the comments... keep posting comments...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Shiv abb toh tu gaya kam se..... šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
shiv has already fallen for her!!!waiting to see them romance!!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
Wow Bunny enjoying this on!! šŸ˜ƒ šŸ˜ƒ

love the song šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

shiv has already fallen for her!!!waiting to see them romance!!!pls continue soon


you need to wait a little long before you can see both of them romance...but there are lot of encounters...so keep reading... i hope i keep with the curiousity... with which you are reading this...FF... thank you so much.... please keep reading..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
arre shiv ke saath saath main bhi gayi kaam se šŸ˜³ šŸ˜³ šŸ˜³ ...bunny dear this was an fantsctic update...shiv's eyes spotting her everywhere she goes...well can't wait to see more romantic parts...love is in the air... i m in love with this ff

pls update dear...don't kill me
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Asever šŸ˜³

Amneet šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am posting parts 8 and 9 at a time as both are small.... Hope you enjoy reading it...!!!

Part : 8

Then, everyone was enjoying the party and food and gauri was chatting with some of the guests at the party standing with Nikhila when some one went by pushing herā€¦ and the food spill on her dressā€¦ and Nikhila said her to go wash her dress and change into some of her saree or chunidarā€¦ for nowā€¦in her roomā€¦ so gauri made her way to nikhilas roomā€¦ and she was going by shiv's room looking at her dressā€¦and shiv who was sitting on his bed with his glass of juice saw some one go by and came out of the room to see and foundā€¦ gauri walking by humming a song
'Tum bin jiya jaye kaiseā€¦
kaise jiya jayea tum binā€¦
sadiyonsi lambi hain rateinā€¦
sadiyonse lambe huye dinā€¦
aa ja lotkar vapasā€¦
yeh dil keh raha hainā€¦'

thinking that no one was aroundā€¦as she only hummed songs when she was aloneā€¦

She was singing really sweetly ā€¦and there was no one in the houseā€¦ due to which the song was beeming in Shiv's earsā€¦

Shiv kept watching her go to nikhila moms room and he was listening to the songā€¦ and felt his heart jump with joy listening to her singā€¦he wanted to listen to it moreā€¦ 'but ā€¦why did he want to listen to it moreā€¦' ā€¦ 'why he was feeling this unusual feelingā€¦from the time he saw herā€¦'

Then she went into nikhila's roomā€¦ went into washroom and washed her dress and then went to nikhilas cupboard and took out a light peach color sareeā€¦ which had embedded light embroideryā€¦ in itā€¦ and took it changed to saree and came outā€¦ and Shiv stood there for some time.. and then went to his bed and sat down againā€¦ and recollecting the song gauri was singingā€¦ and thinkingā€¦ 'why is all this happening to meā€¦ ' he was feeling confusedā€¦

Then Gauri came out of nikhila's room and was walking to the stairsā€¦ when she passed shivs roomā€¦ again shiv cameoutā€¦ to here her singā€¦


'Hum bewafa hargiz na the ā€¦.
par hum wafa karnaskeā€¦
hum ko mili uski sazaā€¦
hum vo katha karna sakeā€¦'


and shiv saw her in saree from behind and then when she got down the stairs he saw her from sideā€¦she looked adorableā€¦in the peach color sareeā€¦ and he thoughtā€¦ 'Wowā€¦ She is so beautifulā€¦ šŸ˜› ' and then immediately thinksā€¦ 'what has happened to meā€¦??' 'I have seen more beautiful girls beforeā€¦.???' šŸ˜•

He took his empty glass and came down behind herā€¦ gauri did not know shiv was there in his roomā€¦all the whileā€¦

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Part : 9

Gauri came back to the partyā€¦ and found most of the guests have left and it was nikhila's family and relatives that were thereā€¦ and then looking at them talking..she went to nikhila and said 'aunty I will leave now..i will bring this saree tomorrow..' and Nikhila said..betaā€¦ 'Thodider aur rukjao.. phir jaanaā€¦ aaoā€¦mere sath beytoā€¦aur yeh saree tumpar bahut jachti hain..' and Gauri couldnot say anything just nodded and smiledā€¦

And then all the young crowd from the relatives joined together and all girls and boys started playing 'Antakshari' (the famous game..right)

And they took gauri in too..and shiv and vivan and all were thereā€¦ in the boys gangā€¦and gauri along with others in the girl gangā€¦

Gauri was sitting behind everyoneā€¦ as she did not know anyone..muchā€¦ and was feeling a little lostā€¦but she enjoyed songs and hence was enjoying all the songs that were being sungā€¦ and Shiv who was sitting along with vivan in the first row was looking at her from the corner of his eye from time to time..

The girls were stuck with 'tha' letter and not knowing what to sing..


and were confusedā€¦so one of them asked her and she said 'tujhe dekha tho ye jana sanam' and every one started to singā€¦and our shiv being shiv ā€¦said.. 'jiska gana hai..vahi gayeā€¦ varna koi aur gana gaye.. šŸ˜Š ' and every boy supported himā€¦ and all girls requested gauri to sing..but she was all shy and not willing to sing..but finally she sangā€¦ and the moment she started every one became calmā€¦

Gauri's eyes were down cast as long as she sang the songā€¦

'tuje dekha tho yeh jana sanam ā€¦
pyar hota hai dewana sanamā€¦
ab yeh hase kaha jaye humā€¦
teri bahome marjaye hummā€¦.
Tujhe dekha tho yeh jana sanamā€¦.'


Gauri closed her eyes in the end and shiv was looking at her as she sangā€¦and the moment she completed every one clapped for her and girls said..you have a sweet voiceā€¦ and gauri was in smilesā€¦ šŸ˜Š

They played for some timeā€¦then every one started to leaveā€¦ and gauri also left after some time with alokā€¦ and shiv kept on looking at her all the while ā€¦ from the corner of his eyeā€¦ without anyone noticing himā€¦ and smiling to himself from time to timeā€¦ šŸ˜³

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Thankyou all for your lovely comments...i am trying to reply to all your comments but work keeps me busy... Please donot get disappointed if i donot reply back to your comments...

Please... keep commenting... your comments are my inspiration.... šŸ˜Š

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

me firstšŸ˜ƒ

gauri dear let me tell you that you have secret fan who is totally fida over your singing...loved when shib said, "jiska gaana hai wohi gaaye."šŸ˜³šŸ˜³and i would die to have those glances from him...well i still imagine shiv as iq...so i always imagine them with him...lord this would have been so cool with them

FANTASTICšŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ‘update soon dear

AseveršŸ˜³

AmneetšŸ˜‰

Edited by amneet89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
loved the parts!!
it's so amazing the way story is progressing slowly and shiv falling for gauri more n more as he kept stealing glanes at her! love is in the air yet our gauri is unaware she has a secret admirer šŸ˜³
ontinue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
aww that wz so cute
gr8 parts
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