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Ek Pyara Sa Love Story?
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This story is about the sweet little times that you have before and during and after marriage when every thing looks romantic and everything feels pleasant and everything brings a smile on your face? so, there is no negative thing ?VILAN? here ?
Its about.. how two people ? who are both reserved but good at heart? get married?. And ?. How they come out of the uncomfortableness, anxiety and excitement that is there in the first few months of marriage between the new wedded couple?which is apparently a romantic site to the people watching them?
So, I have tried to make it as romantic as possible..Although, I enjoy romantic things like romantic movies, roses, chocolates as gifts.. candle light dinners with the person you love....but donot know if I will be able to bring out the romance in my writing?
So, please give me suggestions ?if you want any thing you feel that can be added? as its our fanfiction?we can turn it the way we want it?
All suggestions are always welcome?
Shiv: The eligible bachelor of town, very reserved and very serious looking, is seen smiling only with his close friends and family. ?The most busy man with hectic work shedules in one word work alcoholic? is what one sees in magazines about him?, But no one knows who the actual shiv is like? as no one has seen him how he is at home? or how he is with his family and friends? and how he is not a work alcoholic?
He has done his studies from abroad? but, did not get much attached to the western culture and he has come back to make a mark in the Indian industry? helps his father with business and other things? and is now one of the top business tycoons in India?
Loves traveling and exploring places? he has been to almost all famous places and is waiting for the one and only person with whom he wants to share his life with?
Mahen and Nikhila kapoor?s only son.
Other characters like daksh, shyla, vivan, are all there?except palak track is removed?but they all do not live with nikhla and mahen they live near by and all go out for get-togethers and partys etc.
Gauri: Girl next door, doesnot dream of big things to happen in life out of blue. She enjoys playing with kids, enjoys humming music and enjoys all little things happening in life, very cheerful and bubbly always and gives out a smile as she thinks giving a smile doesnot cost anything and its good as other person feels good.
Always family comes first for her.
Most eligible girl in the sense ? adorable, friendly, any good guy wanting to marry would want to marry gauri as she has all the qualities one would expect ? patient in listening to things, a beautiful smile and expressive eyes, expert cook, sexy figure, respect for elders, all maners in tact.
Very introvert never expresses her feelings easily.
She is also rich and has done her studies from good universities.
Gauri chaterjee, Alok chaterjees daughter.
Both Mahen and Alok are businessmen, but both are not related in any business.
Both have their own fame in their respective areas of business.
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Part1:
One fine morning:
It was a beautiful day with a clear blue sky and birds flying around making chirpy noise, and the streets of Mumbai are busy ..buzzing with people? and we are going to the suburbs of Mumbai? and finally to a bunglow where at the gate is a security guard and as we move into the house ..its pretty calm and we can see a number of servants going around cleaning the house and keeping things in place.
Then we see the dinning area of the house where, shiv and mahen are both sitting and reading papers and nikhila is serving breakfast to them, and she sees that both are reading papers and talking about business and not interested in whether she is there are not..
She pulls the papers from both their hands and immediately?
?Nikhilaa?? ? ?Mom??..
?Kya Mom? Phle dono breakfast karlo? phir panda aaram se ?Yeh tumara Paper?
?Tum donoka kuch nahi hosaktha? Main is ghar me akeli hogayi hu?Tum donoke hote huye bhi? yeh to aisehi hai..lekin shiv!! Tum to phle mujse bat karthatha..lekin ab tubhi inke thara hogaya hai?jab se office join kiya hai? tu bhi mujhse kam bat karne laga hai??
?Mom? aap eise kyun kehrahi hai? bus thodasa busy hu? aur kuch nahi? acha? tho aaj shyam ko hum dono dinner keliye jayenge ?sir hum dono ?papako chod kar?!!!?
Nikhila gives a smile..
?I love you Mom?See you in the evening?be ready for a Date with me?!!!?
Chal Badmash!!...
Ok..bye Mom..!!!
Bye?
She turns and sees Mahen looking at her lovingly?
So, she curiously asks..
?Aaap kya dekhrahe hain??
He walks near her? holds her with his left hand and ..
?I Love You Nikhila ? and gives a peck on the cheek???
She gives a curious look and says?
?Oye Hoye!!! Suddenly ?ithne romantic hogaye..?
And mahen says..
?Nothing Just like that?? ?Ok..bye!! mujhe office keliye derhorahi hain..?
But, Nikhila knew deep down that? both of them loved her a lot?this was her world she could go no - where but here?
Shiv was mahen and nikhlas only son and their jaan? and it was the same with Shiv?
Shiv Kapoor would never smile or laugh in public, he was considered as a very serious business tycoon. That was one thing every one wished to capture. But it was nothing that real shiv was?
?????? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?* ** ** ******* **********
Please Let me know if you want me to continue...I was writing it for myself and then posted it here...
Thanks, 😉
Donot forget to comment!!!!
Part 1 : Page-1
Part 2 : Page-2
Part 3 : Page-2
Part 4 : Page-3
Part 5 : Page-4
Part 6 : Page-5
Part 7 : page-7
Part 8 : Page-9
Part 9 : Page-9
Part 10 : Page-10
Part 11 : Page-12
Part 12 : Page-14
Part 13 : Page-15
Part 14 : Page-15
Part 15 : Page-17
part 16 : Page-17
Part 17 : Page-18
Part 18 : Page-18
Part 19 : Page-20
Part 20 : Page-20
Part 21 : Page-21
Part 22 : Page-21
Part 23 : page-22
Part 24 : Page-22
Part 25 : Page-25
Part 26 : Page-25
Part 27 : Page-25
part 28 : Page-25
part 29- 32 : Page-26 (very long)
part 33- 35 : Page-29 (very long)
part 36 : Page-35
part 37 : Page-36
part 38 : Page-38
Part 39 : Page-40
Part 40 : Page-42
Part 41 : Page-44
Part 42 : Page-45
This story is about the sweet little times that you have before and during and after marriage when every thing looks romantic and everything feels pleasant and everything brings a smile on your face? so, there is no negative thing ?VILAN? here ?
Its about.. how two people ? who are both reserved but good at heart? get married?. And ?. How they come out of the uncomfortableness, anxiety and excitement that is there in the first few months of marriage between the new wedded couple?which is apparently a romantic site to the people watching them?
So, I have tried to make it as romantic as possible..Although, I enjoy romantic things like romantic movies, roses, chocolates as gifts.. candle light dinners with the person you love....but donot know if I will be able to bring out the romance in my writing?
So, please give me suggestions ?if you want any thing you feel that can be added? as its our fanfiction?we can turn it the way we want it?
All suggestions are always welcome?
Shiv: The eligible bachelor of town, very reserved and very serious looking, is seen smiling only with his close friends and family. ?The most busy man with hectic work shedules in one word work alcoholic? is what one sees in magazines about him?, But no one knows who the actual shiv is like? as no one has seen him how he is at home? or how he is with his family and friends? and how he is not a work alcoholic?
He has done his studies from abroad? but, did not get much attached to the western culture and he has come back to make a mark in the Indian industry? helps his father with business and other things? and is now one of the top business tycoons in India?
Loves traveling and exploring places? he has been to almost all famous places and is waiting for the one and only person with whom he wants to share his life with?
Mahen and Nikhila kapoor?s only son.
Other characters like daksh, shyla, vivan, are all there?except palak track is removed?but they all do not live with nikhla and mahen they live near by and all go out for get-togethers and partys etc.
Gauri: Girl next door, doesnot dream of big things to happen in life out of blue. She enjoys playing with kids, enjoys humming music and enjoys all little things happening in life, very cheerful and bubbly always and gives out a smile as she thinks giving a smile doesnot cost anything and its good as other person feels good.
Always family comes first for her.
Most eligible girl in the sense ? adorable, friendly, any good guy wanting to marry would want to marry gauri as she has all the qualities one would expect ? patient in listening to things, a beautiful smile and expressive eyes, expert cook, sexy figure, respect for elders, all maners in tact.
Very introvert never expresses her feelings easily.
She is also rich and has done her studies from good universities.
Gauri chaterjee, Alok chaterjees daughter.
Both Mahen and Alok are businessmen, but both are not related in any business.
Both have their own fame in their respective areas of business.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? **********************
Part1:
One fine morning:
It was a beautiful day with a clear blue sky and birds flying around making chirpy noise, and the streets of Mumbai are busy ..buzzing with people? and we are going to the suburbs of Mumbai? and finally to a bunglow where at the gate is a security guard and as we move into the house ..its pretty calm and we can see a number of servants going around cleaning the house and keeping things in place.
Then we see the dinning area of the house where, shiv and mahen are both sitting and reading papers and nikhila is serving breakfast to them, and she sees that both are reading papers and talking about business and not interested in whether she is there are not..
She pulls the papers from both their hands and immediately?
?Nikhilaa?? ? ?Mom??..
?Kya Mom? Phle dono breakfast karlo? phir panda aaram se ?Yeh tumara Paper?
?Tum donoka kuch nahi hosaktha? Main is ghar me akeli hogayi hu?Tum donoke hote huye bhi? yeh to aisehi hai..lekin shiv!! Tum to phle mujse bat karthatha..lekin ab tubhi inke thara hogaya hai?jab se office join kiya hai? tu bhi mujhse kam bat karne laga hai??
?Mom? aap eise kyun kehrahi hai? bus thodasa busy hu? aur kuch nahi? acha? tho aaj shyam ko hum dono dinner keliye jayenge ?sir hum dono ?papako chod kar?!!!?
Nikhila gives a smile..
?I love you Mom?See you in the evening?be ready for a Date with me?!!!?
Chal Badmash!!...
Ok..bye Mom..!!!
Bye?
She turns and sees Mahen looking at her lovingly?
So, she curiously asks..
?Aaap kya dekhrahe hain??
He walks near her? holds her with his left hand and ..
?I Love You Nikhila ? and gives a peck on the cheek???
She gives a curious look and says?
?Oye Hoye!!! Suddenly ?ithne romantic hogaye..?
And mahen says..
?Nothing Just like that?? ?Ok..bye!! mujhe office keliye derhorahi hain..?
But, Nikhila knew deep down that? both of them loved her a lot?this was her world she could go no - where but here?
Shiv was mahen and nikhlas only son and their jaan? and it was the same with Shiv?
Shiv Kapoor would never smile or laugh in public, he was considered as a very serious business tycoon. That was one thing every one wished to capture. But it was nothing that real shiv was?
?????? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?* ** ** ******* **********
Please Let me know if you want me to continue...I was writing it for myself and then posted it here...
Thanks, 😉
Donot forget to comment!!!!
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