Angel- Promo@Pg145-10/05 - Page 2

sounds good...
plz go ahead and continue to write..

great intro... pls continue soon!!!

character sketch sounds very interesting, pls. feel free to start the story.

Originally posted by: amneet89

so did u guys like it.

Amnu,

Lets cut the useless q's hun, and get down to business... I'm not asking, requesting or anything of the sort... just merely telling u to hurry it up, warna teri khair nayi!!

Nice intro btw?... How did I not mention that earlier... Well anyways, sounds intruiging *rubs hands together excitedly*😳 hint hint.

Cheers,

dc

i like the concept cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

Part-1


its early in the morning.a soothing cool breeze is blowing.we see back of a girl singing aarti in one of the famous mandir of mumbai.she is wearing a simple salwaar kameez,open hairs.now we see her eyes.they are closed in deep faith.she is wearing glasses(like preety zinta in kal ho na ho).there r other two ladies who r admiring her.
lady 1- maa kya soch rahi hain
lady 2-soch rahi hoon nikhila ki agar aisi ladki mere shiv ki zindagi mein aa jaye to uski zindagi savar jaayegi
these two ladies r none other than dadi and nikhila khanna.we see that girl gives thali to pundit ji after finishing her aarti.we now see her face its none other than gauri.she takes blessings from godess durga and the priest.picks her thali of pooja and leaves.


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now we see a young guy getting ready for office.his tie is bringing up problems for him.hie now goes in front of mirror.we see his reflection in mirror it is anupam khanna.he is talking to himself
a-mujhe aur shiv ko kabhie tie bandhni nahi aayegi(he gives himself a hopeless look).mom aur dadi bhi abhi tak nahi aye...ab kya karoon..is tie ki wajah se office ke liye pakka late ho jaaunga
suddenly his phone rings.there is a big smile on his face when he sees then number on screen.its his fiaance and gauri's best friend.ipshita.he picks up the call
a- hi jaan,good morning, how r u?
i-gooood morning honey.i m very fine.hoe r u?
a- mera haal to bhaut bura hai...ye tie ne meri jaan leke rakhi hai..tum jaldi se shaadi kar ke aa jao no
i- 😆 😆 😆
a- tum hass rahi ho...well kuch din ke baad mein hassunga kyunki ek hafte baad shiv aa raha hai.tumhara devar tumhe tang karega aur main ..hassunga.
i- haan..tum aur shiv kabhie nahin badloge..well gauri aa gayi hai mandir se.so i hang up, bye, luv u
then gauri enters the frame
g- ipshita main to dar hi gayi thi ki jaane se pehle main apna apartment lock karna bhool gayi.thank god it was u.well good morning..aur aaj subah subah
i- kyun main apni dost ke ghar nahin aa sakti.well tumhare jitni buri nahin hoon main.
g- ipshita iss baat ko six months ho gaye hain aur iss baat ke wajah se mein din mein kam se kam dus baar tumhe sorry kehti hoon.
i- aur tumhe sorry hona bhi chaiye.apni best friend ki engagement jo miss ki hai tumne.waise gauri mujhe tumhaari bahaut chinta ho rahi hai.ek hafte baad tumhein do devils ko ek saath manage karna hoga
g-matlab
i- matlab ye ki ek hafte baad shiv aa raha hai.
g- mr.shiv kapoor,anupam ke business partner right.
i- right..but tum kaise jaanti ho usse,last time vo anupam ki engagement main aya thai..jo tumne miss ki thi
g- main unse mili nahin but naam suna hai.afterall he is also my boss.now i m getting late for office i have to get ready.
i- fine i will drop u
g- why will u drop me
i- relax..main koi favour nahi kar rahi hoon.mujhe office ja kar tumhaare boss ki tie bandhni hai.
gauri gives hopeless look to ipshita and then leaves.she is almost ready as she doesnot have to put any make becos she hates to do so.she just has to change her salwaar kameez.she is standing in front of mirror doing her hairs when suddenly thoughts of the co-incidence that happened six months ago strikes her mind

FLASHBACK
she was looking for a job as she has done her master's degree now.she applied at many companies.she got an letter for interview from K&K's(khanna and kapoor's).her interview was on same day when it was ipshita's engagement.she somehow told ipshita's mom and she said she will take care of ipshita's temper.her interview was taken by a high official of that company.she got the job of P.A.of both bosses and office's manager.next day ipshita came to her housr roaring and they figured out that it was her fiaance's office..she thot of leaving the job becos of that reason but both anupam and ipshita convinced her that
she got this job becos of her capability

FLASHBACK ENDS

and today is the day,she is also now a good friend of anupam.she is the one who settle thier disputes,when the couple have a fight.anupam calls gauri lifeline of his office


well guys hope u all like my this effort.plz.reply atleast to yell back at me and also to tell that i should continue or not.thanx for so much support till now.i even got a threat to continue.i luv u all



as ever 😉
amneet 😳

great part!!! will Shiv come in the next part???pls pls bring him😳 pls continue soon.

lkuvlyy amneet!i luvv ur ffs!continue this and the other one too!

wow what a mindblowing update .....yar amme.....jaldi se fatfat ek aur update karna....please...

Amazing start, pls. continus soon.