After Mukesh Mills. My short story.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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The episode starts:

Shiv and Gauri are staring at each other. The sound of lightning strikes in the background. Shiv doesn't anything, his face is expressionless but there is no guilt on it. Gauri has quiet tears on her face, her heart is broken and her face is beyond shock. she slowly walks up to Shiv.
Gauri: Aap mere saath kuch bhi kar sakthe hain, magar meri behan ki zindagi ke saath kilvad karne ka hak aap ko nahin. πŸ‘
Gauri turns to leave. Shiv face becomes angry. But we don't really know what he is angry at. Shiv simply angrily watches Gauri leave.
Gauri outside is just walking thinking about all the sweet moments with Shiv when he was being the supportive husband. There is a sad music playing in the background. Gauri now walks on a traffic road. Now the camera switches to Shiv, Shiv is walking up to his car and angrily gets in and drives away from Mukesh Mills. Shiv is now stuck in traffic jam. He is really furious now and he makes his faces. A man passes by Shiv's car.
Shiv: Kya hoa?
Man: Ek ladki ki lash padi hai. Patha nahi woska dimag me kya tha wosne samne lorry ko nahi dekha. Bechari lagtha hai kisi badi gar ki hai.
Shiv is irritated now and he hits his steering wheel. In a couple of seconds his facial expression changes as he remembers what the man told him over and over again. Shiv is now shocked. He gets out of his car quickly and runs scared to the group of people gathered ahead. Shiv pushes everyone out of the way and sees the body. It is covered by white cloth and there is blood everywhere. All shiv could see is a hand with beautiful bangles. Shiv bends down, takes a deep breath, scared and opens the covered face. Shiv heaves a big sigh of relief. At this time police arrive.
Police: Kya aap janthe esay?
Shiv: Nahin
Shiv slowly walks up to his car thinking about Gauri in MM and what she said to him. Shiv reaches his car door. His cellphone rings.
Dadi: Shiv kahan ho. Hum Camini pe dinner ke liye jaana hai.
Shiv: vhooooooo.
Dadi: Gauri tumhara intazaar kar rahi hai?
Shiv: Kya? Dadi Gauri aap ke paas hai
Shiv (irritated): Dadi aap dinner per jaiye. Main Camini aunty ghar jaatha hoon.
Dadi: teek hai beta. See you there.
Shiv is very irritated at the fact that he was actually concerned for Gauri's safety. Everyone reaches Camini aunty's house. Shiv has just arrived. Camini aunty welcomes him.
Camini: Kaise ho beta
She hugs him
Shiv: Teek hoon.
Camini: You are very lucky. Tumhari patni bahut pyari hai. I knew Shiv kapoor gets the best but I never knew you would get the best wife. Congratulations beta.
Shiv makes his faces. Camini gets distracted by Nikila wanting to talk to her. Shiv walks around and sees Gauri sitting facing the window. Her back is towards him.
Shiv: Gauri
Shiv: Kya expect karthi ho mujse. Main tumse pyar nahin kartha. Maine tumse kaha tha na, sirf dho chaal.
Shiv is irritated and walks in front to face her. Her eyes are closed. Shiv is now shocked. Shiv tries to arouse her by calling her name. She doesn't move. Shiv is worried. He puts his hands on her shoulder and she falls down. Shiv catches her in his arms. Shiv screams out Mom and Dadi. Everyone comes running. Nikila and Dadi everyone is trying to wake her up by calling her name:
Dadi: Nikila Gauri ko hospital lena chahiye
Shiv carries her in his arms to his car. Everyone is in the hospital. Gauri is on the stretcher rushed to emergency. Shiv, Nikila and Dadi are on each side walking fast. Nikila and Dadi are trying to comfort each other. Shiv is now confused and worried. Doctor comes out.
Doctor: Mr Kapoor apki patni bilkool teek hain.
Dadi: Magar achanak wose kya hoa
Doctor: Patha nahin. Sirf vho janthi hain.
Nikila: Kya hum Gauri to gar le ja sakthe hain
Doctor: Sure. Voh abh behosh hain. Subah hosh ayegi.
Dadi to Shiv: thum pareshan math ho, Gauri teek voh jayegi.
Shiv is making his faces. Next scene. Shiv is carrying Gauri into their room. He places her on the bed. Shiv goes to the washroom and gets changed. He looks at the bed for a second and prepares to make his bed on the floor. Shiv turns the lights off and goes to sleep. Shiv is tossing and turning. But the bed is too hard for him. He can't sleep and groans loudly. Shiv is frustrated and sleeps on the other side of the bed. He places pillows as a barrier from Gauri.
In the morning. Shiv wakes up. Gauri comes from the washroom. She is getting ready quickly. Shiv is just looking at her bemused. She picks up some files from the table and leaves the room. Shiv is shocked.


Edited by maragathm - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow very nice plzzzz cantione i like it πŸ‘

Love Leena 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice i like it i hope this happens....sooo KOOOOL lol πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 fanfic its rlly interstng plz continue soon πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Really nice, thanks, I just love reading all this.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is so nice!!!!!!!If G starts ignoring him lik this sure S will go crazy!!!!!Already ada Pagal hain ab poora pagal ho jayega!!! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! itz awesome!! continue plzzz!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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One word - Perfecto!!! πŸ‘

Loved it!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW...........tht was nice.....absolutely amazing....to tell u the truth ...after thursday's epi...i cudn't even think as to wat will happen on the next episode😳....but i luved u prediction hunπŸ˜ƒ....very creative i must sayπŸ˜›πŸ‘.....once again great job hunπŸ‘.......continue soon!!!πŸ˜‰

luv,

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome story πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

would love it if it happens πŸ˜‰

shiv being ignored by gauri,knowing gauri's character i don't think she will fight with shiv,silent treatment is the best 😳 πŸ˜‰
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