Unfaithful Shiv Gauri FF 2nd climax - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
gauri forgave him too easily...wished she had taken some time...but liked the concept of of ur ff. thanks for the pm and update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
I think Gauri shouldn't have forgiven Shiv so easily
Waiting for second climax

Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Unfaithful Part 9{2nd climax}




S:I'm sorry.Will you forgive me?
She is silent.
S:Gauri!..
She screams:No!You devil!You are the cheater.You r a wolf with a
lamb's skin.Why did you do this to me?Tell dammed.
She slaps him.
His tears flow down.He is quite shocked to see her new
face.
S:Will you forgive me Gauri?Please…
Gauri slaps him and shouts:Shut up.No girl can forgive a person who raped
her.
Shiv becomes upset and weak.
G:How can I digest the truth that the
person whom I loved the most is the person who raped me? After being so cruel to me how dare you ask me to forgive you?Men can do anything,women just forgive?You think things end very easily and you can live peacefully forgetting the bitter dirty past?Never..never Mr.Shiv Abhimanyu Kapoor.Till now I was weak.But not anymore.I'm too foolish to think of committing suicide for my husband who has no heart.I'm not a girl who can sacrifice my self respect and stay with the man who raped me without any mercy.I'm strong enough to live alone.It is better to live alone than to live with a devil and pretend to be happy before others.I can't adjust anymore.I could have filed a case against you and put you in the jail for raping me.But i'm not going to do that as i loved you once.I'm going.Bye..
Shiv pleads:Gauri..please...
His words fall on her deaf ears.She packs her bags and leaves the room without even biding Good-bye to Shiv.She turns back.Shiv looks at her with some hope.She goes and slams the door.Then she moves out leaving Naina,Nikhila and Mehen in shock.They don't utter a word as they are in shock seeing Gauri's staring look and her luggages.Gauri leaves the Kapoor mansion silently.
Shiv sheds tears in his room.He is totally depressed and he does'nt move from the bed where he sits.
Naina and Nikhila come inside.
Ni:Why did Gauri leave?
N:Is it because she is embarassed to stay here?But you said she is innocent.
Shiv's tears fall down.
S:Gauri is innocent.The real culprit is me.I'm her rapist.She suffered because of me.
They are shocked.
S:So she can't forgive me.She said no girl can love her rapist.
Ni:Not only Gauri,not even your mother can forgive you.
N:I never expected this much from you Shiv.
S:Mom..choti ma..
Nikhila slaps her.They go away.Shiv turns back.He is shocked to see Sneha at the doorway.Her eyes are wet.
S:Sneha!
She comes and slaps him.She bursts into tears.
Sn:I thought you and Gauri have reunited.I came to congratulate both of you.But i'm shocked to overhear a wicked truth.You are exposed.I never knew that you are a devil.You only spoiled Gauri.I feel ashamed to be your friend.Now onwards i'm not your friend.I hate you.
She goes away.
Shiv weeps.

The end
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
hey nice one... luved gauri's decision... perfect ending..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Same FF with two endings.i didn't get it.
I love this ending.Loving someone doesn't mean loosing your self-respect.Hats off to Gauri.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
the second climax is what should really happen...but you could still continue the story by giving it a reuniting ending of shiv and gauri...if possible do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

just read all the parts!...

superb endings!...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: karna91

the second climax is what should really happen...but you could still continue the story by giving it a reuniting ending of shiv and gauri...if possible do continue

agree with u ...there is still some scope in this story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
first endin......happy althopugh i thnk gauri did 4gve hm 2 quick
second endin..............soooo saaddd 4 shiv! buh, he deserves ih in a wy. ny wys either endins were gr8 n reqadin all togther ayt 1 made ih more intrestin. thx!! keep ih up!👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
dont get why it ended so abruptly.....
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