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Posted: 14 years ago
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The secret is going to unfold now...Nandini,Anupam and Gauri being friends is a good addition to the story and Sneha too seems to be a nice friend.....Shiv is going to regret his decision now...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 8


Nandini:Last year in july,we all went for a tour to Puna.We stayed in
Blue rose lodge.
Shiv:July tour…Blue rose lodge..?
N:Ya.It was july 6.The worst day of an innocent
girl.When she was alone in her dark room,someone came and
raped her.
Shiv and Sneha are shocked.
N:She was shattered.She did'nt even see
that rascal's face.Otherwise we all would have finished him for his big cruelty.
S:That means Gauri is innocent?
N:Gauri is innocent.This is what happened.
S:I misunderstood my Gauri.I hurt her so much.Oh
God!what did I do to her?I'm a sinner.Will she forgive me?
Anupam:You repent.That is more than enough.Gauri will be happy if you go back to her.
Sneha:Shiv...go to Gauri.Gauri needs you now.She loves you now also.She believes in your love also.She will forgive you.
Shiv runs to his house.
Shiv asks Nikhila:Where is Gauri?I
suspected an innocent wife like Gauri.
Naina:Shiv!What happened?
S:I know Gauri's truth now.She is innocent Choti ma.
Shiv runs to his room.
He is shocked to see Gauri holding some tablets.
S:Gauri!What is that?
Gauri bursts into tears.
G:Shiv...I did'nt cheat you purposefully.But I
realized that I don't deserve your pardon.You deserve a
better girl like Sneha.I'm happy that you got a nice girl like Sneha.But i can't tolerate you romancing another girl infront of me.So I'm going forever.
S:Going forever?So that means these tablets are poisonous..you want to end your life.How could you think of leaving me alone Gauri?
G:Shiv!
Shiv takes the tablets from her and puts it down.He pulls her towards him.
G:Leave me alone Shiv.I don't want to live anymore.
S:Can u go away like that?
G:I can..because it's for you..for your happiness.Your happiness is Sneha and i don't want myself to be an obstacle in your life.I'm a cheater.I don't want to hurt
you anymore.
Shiv's eyes get filled up with tears:No Gauri.You are not a
cheater.You are not spoiled.You are pure like the virgin
Mary.Nandini and Anupam told me everything.
G:No Shiv.I'm spoiled.
S:No.What has happened during that night was not your
fault.That was my fault.Then how can you be a spoilt girl?
G:What are you telling Shiv?I don't deserve you.So let me go. S:Gauri..you know who raped you?
G:No,I don't want to see that devil who made me like
this.If he had'nt done that this situation would not have been there in my life.He spoiled me.
Shiv weeps:Gauri..that guy is none other than your
husband;Mr.Shiv Abhimanyu Kapoor..
Gauri is shocked:Shiv? Do you know what you are saying?
S:Yes.I'm telling the truth.So don't think that you are impure.
G:To remove my guilty feeling you are telling such a big lie which
no one dares to say.
S:I'm not lying.I'm the one who raped did that to you.
Gauri is shocked:No.You can't do that.you are such a nice guy.I will not believe this.
Shiv cries:I'm sorry Gauri.In a bad spirit I only raped you
Without knowing who you are. With my friends i had also come
to Pune at that time.I also stayed in the Blue rose
lodge.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
I hate Shiv.He shoud be punished.A bloody rapist.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Oh! God my worst fears got confirmed.

Such double stds he himself is a rapist but if his wife was pregnant before marriage then she is unfaithful.

I hope Gauri doesnot forgive him.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
oh god cant believe this.. shiv raped her.... hope gauri doesn forgive him..
do continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
i knew something like that must have happened....shiv being a rapist himself was questioning gauris character....BAD...how easily he forgave himself but was so harsh with gauri...
nice part again👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

This story has 2 climaxes.This is the 1st climax

Unfaithful Part 9







Shiv:I was a spoilt brat.I have gone after many
girls.But I had never crossed my limit.But that day I was
alone and was drunk.I don't know how..i lost my control.I got inside your room without even knowing who is inside the room. In that spirit,I
raped you.
Gauri is shocked:No!
Shiv weeps:I'm sorry Gauri.I only shattered your dreams.I
only destroyed your life.You were pregnant with my baby.It's
our baby who died.
Gauri is petrified.
S:I'm sorry.Will you forgive me?
She is silent.
S:Gauri!..
She screams:No!You devil!You are the cheater.You are a wolf with a
lamb's skin.Why did you do this to me?Tell dammed.
She slaps him.
His tears flow down.He is quite shocked to see her new
face.
S:Will you forgive me Gauri?Please…
Gauri shouts:Shut up.No girl can forgive the person who raped her.
Shiv becomes upset and weak.
G:I want to die.
She pulls the collar of his shirt.
G:How can I digest the truth that the
person whom I loved the most is the person who raped me?

Gauri takes the tablets from the floor.
S:Gauri..what are you upto?
Shiv holds her hand.
G:Leave me.
S:No.
He pulls her back.
S:Why should an innocent
person like you die?The person who should die is myself.
He takes the tablets from her forcefully and is about to swallow them. .
Gauri is shocked.
G:Noooooo!
She snatches the tablets from him and throws it away.They both look at each other with tears.
She bursts into tears and rests her head on his chest:Please don't punish
yourself like this Shiv.I cannot tolerate something bad
happening to you.
S:Why?Still you care for me?Don't you remember what I did to
you?I'm bad.
G:Yes,still I love you..Sorry for calling you devil.You are not a wolf.Eventhough you
shattered my dreams,you colored my black and white dreams
again.You loved me like anything.That's more than enough for
me to forgive you.
Shiv is surprised:Gauri?
She smiles with tears in her eyes.
Shiv hugs her and cries:You are great Gauri.No other rape victim can forgive her rapist.I love you.
G:I love you too Shiv.

The next day...
Puja preparations are going on.Sneha enters the Kapoor Mansion.All are staring at her.She feels uncomfortable.She goes near Gauri.
S:I have come here as Shiv's friend,not as his girl friend.
Gauri smiles softly:I know that.What do you think..that i can't understand your friendship with Shiv?
Sneha smiles with relief.
S:There is one more thing to say.I'm getting engaged to the love of my life Rohan.
Gauri is surprised:Really?It's a great news.So we should celebrate the special occasion.
Sneha smiles.
G:Anyways i'm happy that you came to attend the puja kept for us.Sit for the puja.I have to arrange some stuffs for the puja.
Gauri goes.Sneha sits.

Puja is going on.Gauri sits for puja.Her eyes look for Shiv.
She thinks:Where is this Shiv?
Shiv comes and sits near her.
Gauri is relieved.
She whispers:Thank God you have reached now.
Shiv:Sorry honey.Meeting got over now only.
G:Shiv..this puja is kept for us.We are starting a new life after facing so many obstacles.Let us start our life again with this puja.
He smiles:Yes,we should thank God for uniting us.
G:We should pray to God to keep us together always.
Gauri and Shiv pray to God.

THE END
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
good ending...do update the second climax soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
I didn't like the ending.Shiv shoud have been sent to jail.Bloody rapist.
Edited by -JONAKI- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
nice update.. but really wished shiv uld hve been punished..
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