Unfaithful Shiv Gauri FF 2nd climax - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Aww Shiv luvs Gauri so much. She really means d world 2 him.

Gauri should tell Shiv whatever is bothering her.

Pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Nice Update......
Whts up with gauri???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
i cant remember if i have commented already but heh comment again. dont think i have anyways i loved this ff of yours. very much like both shiv and gauris characters --waiting to see the way in which the story unfolds, the reason behind gauris distance and shivs reaction to what ever it may be.
Thank you very much for this lovely ff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 4


Gauri is admitted to the hospital.Her leg and hand are fractured.
Shiv:Please be careful while climbing up the steps.
G:Yes.
S:My life was lost when i saw you unconscious.
Gauri thinks:Shiv is forcing me to accept him completely.
Shiv gives her fruit juice:Drink this.Be fresh.
Gauri takes it and looks deeply into his eyes.
G:Thanks a lot Shiv for being so caring to me.
Shiv smiles:This is my love for you Gauri.A husband's love for his wife.
She smiles.
Shiv goes out.Nikhila is standing out with a smile.
N:I'm surprised to see your change.I can't believe that once you were a slack irresponsible boy.I'm prowd of you my son.You are taking care of your wife very well.
S:Gauri's love changed me a lot mom.
Nikhila smiles.
Gauri gets discharged from the hospital.
Shiv helps her to walk.Gauri tries to walk without his help.But in between she loses her balance and is about to fall down.Shiv holds her tightly.Gauri feels secure in his arms.They both get lost in each other's eyes.
After a few weeks she becomes completely alright.

Night...Gauri enters the room with a smile.Her face
becomes dull seeing Shiv sleeping.

When Gauri gets up from the bed,she does'nt see Shiv.She looks around.She sees the clock and is shocked:10 o'clock?Oh!
Nikhila comes:Good morning Gauri.
G:I'm sorry mummiji.I'm late.
N:It's ok.
G:Where is Shiv?
N:He went to the office.I
thought of calling you before he went.But he did'nt want me to do that as he wanted you to have a good sleep.
Gauri smiles.
N:Today is his birthday.
G:Really?
N:Ya.But we don't celebrate it.
G:But we must celebrate it.It's his first birthday with me.
Nikhila smiles:Shiv is lucky to have a wife like you.
Gauri smiles.Slowly her smile disappears.
She thinks:The truth is that i don't deserve Shiv.He could have gotten a better wife than me.But now i can't think of losing Shiv at any cost.My mind is out of my control.I can't control myself.I need Shiv.

Gauri wears a grand violet saree and diamond ornaments.


Gauri enters Shiv's office room.Shiv is surprised:Gauri!
G:Why are you so late today? you are still in the office?You know what's happening at home now?
S:What's happening?Is everything ok?You look tense.
G:Now itself we have to go home.Otherwise it will be a problem.
S:Ya,now itself we will go home.
They reach home.They get inside the house.Shiv is
surprised to see a big party there. He looks at Gauri with
wonder:This party…
She smiles:Happy birthday Shiv.
Shiv smiles.
G:We thought of giving you a surprise.
S:It is truly a surprise.
Nikhila:How is the decoration?Everything is done by Gauri.
Shiv smiles:Thankyou Gauri.It is beautiful.
Gauri smiles.
Shiv cuts the birthday cake.He gives a piece to Nikhila.She puts a
piece into his mouth.He gives a piece to Mehen.He looks at Gauri.
Gauri in her mind:Won't you give me a lovely piece Shiv?
He hesitates to do that because of my
behaviour.
N:Shiv,give a piece to Gauri..
Shivlooks at Gauri.She smiles.He feels confident seeing her smile and gives her a piece.
Gauri smiles:Thanks Shiv.

Gauri takes the mike:I would like to sing a song for my husband on this happy
occasion.
Shiv iss surprised.
She goes near Shiv and sings looking at him:
'Aye ho meri zindagi me tum bahar banke
Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke
Ankho me tum base ho sapne hazar banke
Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke..'{Raja Hindustani}.
Shiv smiles.
Nikhila:Play a romantic song.Let Shiv and Gauri dance together.

The song 'seene mein dil
dil mein dhadkan
dhadkan mein kya hai
teri pyaas hai
har pyaas mein
dard hai sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hai..'{Koi aapsa}is played.
Shiv and Gauri dance together looking deeply into each other's eyes.
S:Thank you for giving me a surprise grand birthday
party.I never had such a nice birthday party in my life.My parents are too simple for that.I don't know how to express the happiness i had when you sang specially for me.Thanks a lot Gauri.
G:No need of thanks Shiv.It's my love for you.
Shiv is excited.
S:You know how long i waited to hear this from you.Tell me again.
She blushes:Not here.Others will hear it.I'm shy.I will tell it in our room.
S:I wish the party gets over fast.So that we can move to our room and have some private moments.
She becomes shy.

After the party Shiv and Gauri enter their room.
S:Tell..
G:What?
S:Tell what i long to hear from you.Please don't delay..
She blushes:I...i...
Shiv's heart is hungering to hear sweet words from Gauri.
G:I love you Shiv.
S:I'm so happy now.This is the most wonderful moment in my life.
He takes her in his arms.
G:Shiv!
He puts her down softly.
S:Are you not feeling sleepy?
G:When we are madly in love,we won't be able to
sleep.Right?
Shiv smiles in a naughty manner.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
So Gauri is accepting Shiv.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Lovely update
Happy 2 c Gauri confessing her luv.

When will Gauri's secret b revealed?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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liked gauri's confession... wanna knw abt her past.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good to see things improving between shiv and gauri...hope gauri discloses her past quickly before any misunderstanding crops up...
nice update and very well written👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the updates were great...hope gauri discloses her past quickly before any misunderstanding comes up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 5



Shiv goes closer to Gauri and looks into her eyes deeply.His fingers go
through her face.Suddenly the bitter past comes into
her mind.She gets scared.She moves away from him.
S:What happened Gauri?
She is sweating:Nothing.
She lies down. Shiv becomes dull and tries to walk out.
Gauri feels sad.
G:Shiv!
Shiv turns back.
She smiles:Are you leaving me alone?Come near me.

He smiles.He goes and carries her in his arms.

Shiv and Gauri go to Singapore.They enjoy a lot.
They sing the song 'Chote…'{Ishq vishq} and share romantic moments.
They return home after the trip.
Shiv:Choti ma..mom's younger sister has come.Mom messaged me.I'm longing to see her.I'm going fast.
He runs inside.Shiv is surprised to see Naina there:Choti ma..
Naina smiles:How are you Shiv beta?
S:I'm fine.But I'm sad that you did'nt attend my wedding.
N:What to do?It was an important tour to States.I had committed it earlier.I still hunger to
do new things in the field of medicine. Ok,your mom told me about your wife.Her name…I forgot.Where is your wife?
Gauri comes in. Gauri and Naina are shocked to see each other.

S:Gauri..this is my choti ma Dr.Naina.
Gauri is shocked:Choti ma?
She is shattered.
S:This is my wife.Her name is…
N:If I'm right Gauri Chatterjie..?
S:Yes.So you could remember her name.How did you like my wife?
N:I can say 'yes' for not making you upset.But since I don't
want to see you heart broken later i have to tell the truth that I did'nt like your wife.
Gauri becomes sad.Unexpectedly Shiv laughs:Choti ma is joking.
Gauri gets confused.
N:I'm not joking.I'm serious.How can I like this
cheater?
S:Choti ma?
N:This girl is cheating you.Don't trust her.This girl had
come to my hospital.She was pregnant.She had miscarriage.
Shiv and others are shocked.
N:How can I be happy about you marrying a spoilt girl who became
pregnant before marriage..however modern we have become,I don't agree with this.

Shiv stares at Gauri.She gets tense. He goes near her. G:Shiv..
S:I'm not misunderstanding you.But...i need to ask you...please don't misunderstand me.
He sweats.
S:Is it true?Or choti ma is misunderstanding you?
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