Unfaithful Shiv Gauri FF 2nd climax - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
AWWW! con sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!! i wanna no gauris raaazzz!!!FAb upd8! feel srry 4 shiv
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the PM. Gr8 story. Wonder what secret is Gauri hiding from Shiv. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
wow really nice part!!!
Pleaseeee make Gauri tell him the truth [which i can guess what it is!] 😉
nd make shiv still Love her and stay happy wid her!
Awesome concept! Keep it up nd update ASAP!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Wow I am loving it.But why didn't you PM me?
Edited by -JONAKI- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
wow u still managed to keep the suspense intact...hope gauri doesnt avoid him like this and tells him everything...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 3






Gauri is infront of the mirror.She is trying to
remove her necklace.Shiv comes:Shall I help you?
K:No thanks.I myself will remove it.
Shiv becomes dull.Gauri removes it.
Shiv goes out.
He thinks:How much I dreamt about
my life with Gauri?Is it shattering? He becomes upset.He goes back to the bedroom.There Gauri is
sleeping. He looks at her with sad eyes.Shiv is sleepless and walks out.
Gauri opens her eyes and tells in her mind:I'm
sorry Shiv.I love you,so i can't cheat you.Please forgive me. Poor guy.He loves me very much.But he is
not getting anything from me.


The next day,Gauri and Shiv go to stay in her house.
Avantika is happy.
A:I'm happy that my daughter has come with my son in law to visit me.
Anupam comes.
He is surprised to see Shiv and Gauri.
An:Wow!What a pleasant surprise!
G:Shiv...this is Anupam..my best friend.
S:Hi anupam..nice to meet you.
They both shake hands.
Anupam puts his arms on Shiv's shoulder.
An:I'm Gauri's best friend.That means i'm your friend also.
Shiv smiles.
An:We are happy to see you happily marroed to your dream man Shiv Gauri.Thankyou for not forgetting us eventhough the honeymoon period is not over.
Everyone laughs.

Night...
Gauri tells Shiv:Shiv,can I sleep with my mom tonight?
S:What?
S:Gauri..who is Shiv Abhumanyu Kapoor ir myself for you ?
G:Husband.You tied mangalsuthra around my neck.You put
vermillion on my forehead.
S:Jusat because of that I became your husband?
Infront of public we are a couple.But actually...
Gauri can't listen anymore.
S:As you wish you go with your mom.
Her eyes get filled up with tears.But she hides it from Shiv.

She goes near Avantika:Mama,tonight I'm going 2 sleep with you.
A:What are you saying?Shiv will be alone.Not only that your honeymoon time is not over.
G:Mama!I really missed you all these days.So i want to be with you.
Avantika smiles.

The next day at a park...Shiv looks at Gauri.
S:Gauri,don't you love me?
G:Shiv!
S:Please don't avoid me.
Tears dwells in her eyes.
He sings:Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
Meri jaan mere dilbar,
mera aitbaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo..{Dhadkan}.
Gauri also sings:Tum bhi mujse pyar karlo..
S:You don't have to tell me to love you.I love you Gauri.
Within a second he realses that it was a
dream.Gauri watches him with pity.Shiv wipes his tears.

Shiv and Gauri travel in the car during night.A couple of
robbers appear before them.
The robbers point their guns toward them and make them get out of the car.They:Give the ornaments,watch etc.
They give them everything.Then those guys:Who's this superb model sab…?Girlfriend or…
Shiv becomes angry.Gauri gets scared.She goes closer to Shiv.
G:Shiv!
When they try to touch her,Shiv shouts at them and beats them.
S:How dare you guys try to misbehave with my wife?If you hurt her,I'll kill you all.
A robber:What's going to happen if your wife is hurt?
S:If something bad is happening to your life,will you be able to live?No!My wife is my life and if she's hurt,how can I live?

Gauri is is shocked.
One robber:You gave everything including the precious
ornaments.Then why are you hesitsting to give your wife?
Shiv beats him:Will anyone give their wife to others?
The robbers move away silently.Gauri is upset.
S:Nothing will happen to you when I'm
alive.So don't get scared.
Her mind is full of the words Shiv told the robbers.

Gauri climbs the steps.Her leg slips and she falls down.
Shiv is shocked to see Gauri lying down unconcious.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Really nice part...
bt PLEASEE dont make gauri like dis! Let her tell him the truth nd be close 2 him aswell!
Pleaseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor shiv! 🤔 m
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
again a very well written update...waiting for gauri to disclose her past to shiv...hope she does asap...cant see them hurt and away from each other like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Feeling sorry for both.I thnk I can guess Gauri's problem.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
wow nice updates.. very curious to knw abt gauri's past.. really felt bad fof shiv... do continue soon..
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