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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

i rlly liked it alot! especially dese 2 parts! sooo touching!!con soon!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ




Me too.... I loved writing it....... thankyou for liking it...... I will surely try to continue it......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -_AfridiMalik_-

Hah! none of us is too little Bunny! ☺️ ermm... listen... do mention bt as a note tht this is 18+ πŸ˜ƒ




πŸ˜‰....... I know I just thought .... that would scare you and you wouldn't ask for more.... Hahaha....

But..... I will post the next part...... just one more part to this......

as I mentioned in the title.... this is romance...... so there will be only romance...... mostly.... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†......... Just romance and no story to it..... and no *Ahem* *Ahem*....... ( I hope.....).


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

finally u updated thnxx dear n plz update soon n this update is ..... ahhhh lovelyyy

saba




I know.... Finally.... *Sigh!!!*...... I was planning not to come back..... as i told you..... But I couldnot stop myself anylonger..... The creative side didnot stop..... and I can only write..... anything only on Shiv-Gauri.... I cannot imagine writing on any other jodi......

So... Back to square one..... and Thankyou for your comment..... I appreciate.... your patience.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi bunny!!
Wht a beautiful ff.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ.im loving it..I love romanitic stories very much...This is upto the mark yaar😊😊😊...love this ff very much...very well written...infact im blushing 😳😳😳😳..
continue ASAP....waiting for lot of Romances😳😳😳😳....
jeni

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue-jen

Hi bunny!!
Wht a beautiful ff.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ.im loving it..I love romanitic stories very much...This is upto the mark yaar😊😊😊...love this ff very much...very well written...infact im blushing 😳..
continue ASAP....waiting for lot of Romances😳....
jeni




Hi Jeni,

welcome to this Post.... Actually, It was like a one or two part Post.... and not an actual FF... but I will be posting another part...to this.......

Thankyou for your comment..... and Thankyou for liking it....

Mee too.... I love Romantic stories.... all kinds of romantic stories...... But "ROMANCE" is Key.... Its a very nice feeling..... and I think it keeps you feeling young..... and chirpy......

If you like more Romance.... I had written a few romantic parts..... in my FF.....

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/782436

Let me know how you like it....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for msging me the link yaar...started reading it...:-)well going..i will cmment after reading all parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue-jen

Thanks for msging me the link yaar...started reading it...:-)well going..i will cmment after reading all parts




Did you like my FF.... you have not told me...yet...????
Surely let me know how you felt about it..... I would love to know....



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!! i just luved it...

SG relation is so special...luved the way u descibed both SG and their feeling towards each other...still blushing😳😳😳...luved the terrace scene...also luved the way you described Shivs restlessness till he sees his Gauri..gosh their special momentsπŸ˜³πŸ˜‰...

must say, u're just too gud wen it cums to descibing 'romantic moments'...literally cud imagine SGπŸ˜‰...

Sorry for the delayed response, was reading ur other ff-pyaara sa luv story😳 ...too gud, mindblowing n awesum!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Pria
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pria4ever

Wow!!! i just luved it...

SG relation is so special...luved the way u descibed both SG and their feeling towards each other...still blushing😳😳😳...luved the terrace scene...also luved the way you described Shivs restlessness till he sees his Gauri..gosh their special momentsπŸ˜³πŸ˜‰...

must say, u're just too gud wen it cums to descibing 'romantic moments'...literally cud imagine SGπŸ˜‰...

Sorry for the delayed response, was reading ur other ff-pyaara sa luv story😳 ...too gud, mindblowing n awesum!!!!πŸ‘
Pria



Thankyou Pria, I am glad you like it..... I Love Romantic scenes.... I could watch a romantic film any number of times.... and the most part I like is when they make you Blush....😳😳😳...
and I also watch something romantic to feel light and airy.....

For some action works, for some suspense works when you want to relax or take a break or something.... but for me Romance works.... so thats the secret.

Actually everyone is referring to it as the terrace.... but In my imagination It is entrance to the garden from the house.... a sliding door into the garden..... Shiv has entered into the house and his servant comes to take his bag.... he looks for gauri and gets to know she is in the garden... so he walks to the door.... slides open the door.... and there is a swing to sit outside.... and then garden..... this was my view.... when i was writing the scene.... Just wanted to clarify that's all ....

Thankyou for being able to imagine and read....it gives me immense pleasure when someone says...they like the scene to the extent ... they are able to imagine the scene.... as a writer I feel i have achieved my goal..... Thankyou so much....

Now you are making me blush.... I am just a normal writer who likes romance thats all.... there are many excellent writers in this forum who have written many great works of art.... which cannot be compared.... just cherished.... I keep reading many FF's in this forum over and over again.... to just cherish those scenes again and again...

Hope you liked 'Pyaara sa Love story....' It is my only FF that I have written.... in these 3 years.... which is very close to my heart.... as it is only romance and cute and hot romance..... I write it for myself more than anyone else...it is my little collection of romantic scenes.... that comes to me....

Thankyou once again for the wonderful words.... I am planning to post another Romantic tit bit in this section..... Will let you know when I do....

Bunny.
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