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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Reeno!!wonderful FF.πŸ‘πŸ‘..loved sG parts...very cute😊😊..i was completely smiling reading the parts..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
πŸ˜ƒcute & caring husband shiv..complementing him caring wife gauri
im in love with this shiv..😳😳😳
Loved anu & ippy part too..just love this story..😊😊
continue ASAP & ya i need more romantic parts😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reply to the ff - reserved.

Reeno, your SG Sig *faints*...

Cheers,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pria4ever

lovely update!!! really luved the SG scenes...curiosity abt Ipshita....n ya, more SG scenes😳😳...

plz update soooonnnn....

Thnakss Dii, & yeah, more SG scenes comingg soon! ☺️
ermm.. just a lil too busy wid my sister's wedding preps and stuff...
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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

ohooo madam kia ho gaya hai longg long updates πŸ˜ƒ well such a nice update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘yesh yesh i want SG scenes hun plzzz do update soon ⭐️⭐️⭐️

saba😊

yh thnxx..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

theres something not quite right about ippshita is there..my gut feeling is giving off bad vibes from her side..πŸ˜† anyways.. really like the shiv gauri side of the update..they are very sweet arnt they!
as for more s,g...you are the writer go with the flow..i will sit back and enjoy whatever you write
and thanks!

LOL... Ipshii????
hhe Letss see...
ermm cant say anythingg...
Thankss for relying on me thoroughly Jagu!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@asunaik94s: Thankss alott! will update ASAP! m busy these days! πŸ˜•
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Originally posted by: blue-jen

Hi Reeno!!wonderful FF.πŸ‘πŸ‘..loved sG parts...very cute😊😊..i was completely smiling reading the parts..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ Thankss soo much!
πŸ˜ƒcute & caring husband shiv..complementing him caring wife gauri
im in love with this shiv..😳😳😳 LOL Thankss! me 2! πŸ˜‰
Loved anu & ippy part too..just love this story..😊😊 Thankkss yaar! ☺️
continue ASAP & ya i need more romantic parts😳😳😳😳 Ohh Suree! πŸ˜ƒ

Add me too in ur PM list suree!!
luv
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!
gr8 start!
glad that ispshita and anupam are staying again with shiv and gauri!
shiv iz sooo understanding!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -_AfridiMalik_-

Part 1
She sat there, by the window, looking out at the only star in the sky. Suddenly hearing a aloud thunder. She clutched the cushion in her hand... tighter by the grip.

Maybe that was the reason there was just the 1 star in the sky' all the stars' scared of the reigning thunder had hidden themselves' behind the moon, or probably the sun!.

It soon began to pour. The thought of this already scared her. She got up to stand closer to the window to see how hard it was raining.

"Ohh God, Please don't make the storm get any people into danger. I hope Shiv comes back home, safely & soon!"

She closed her eyes and prayed' her heart getting either faster' or rather skipping a beat with every loud thunder she heard and every lightning flash she saw.

Her mansion, let alone with all the thunder and lightning looked as Glorious.. Spacious and Magnificent as ever, yet very simple and totally like a dream of any married couple.

She was very content with her life.

She quickly glanced at the GrandPa clock just beside her, turning her neck to have a look, it was 16:30, Shiv should be home any minute. I hope he doesn't decide to stay there longer because of the heavy rain' she thought'

He wont be able to call her either, as the lines are usually disconnected while it rains that heavily.

She suddenly hears the door, sees the knob turning, and someone enters. As soon as she sees him, her eyes lit up and a quick smile appears on her face.

A man dressed in a Dark grey suit, now a little blackish as it dripped wet, enters, cleans his shoes on the entrance mat and smiles at his wife, Gauri'

"Home!" he says with a cute, content and wide smile on his face.

He was Indeed Shiv'. 'Her Shiv'

Walking inside, towards her with a smile, a naughty 1 πŸ˜‰ and 1 raised eyebrow was her Dashing, Smart and Handsome hubby'. Shiv Kapoor.

He came to her, kissed on her forehead. She smiled, took his coat off.

"Its raining heavily'" He said, with an amuzed expression at the weather. Gauri knew he didn't like rains' specially these heavy ones. He rather preferred a warm sunny day or a cold weather with cool breezes.

"I know, I was worried you might not be home on time'" she said.

"How couldn't I sweety" Hi winked at her. She smiled.

"Shiv, go and freshen up, I know how hungry you are'" She giggled.

"Yes Sir'" He laughed and went up through the stairs to the room.

Gauri kept some food in the microwave and went up to the room. She opened Shiv's closet and took a T-shirt and trouser out. She kept it on the bed and started digging inside her own closet. She took some old clothes out and started putting them in a bag.

Shiv came out of the Washroom, in his usual towel style, which usually annoyed or rather amuzed Gauri, but he loved it' and she loved the fact that he loved it. She didn't know that he had already come out and was just staring at her, with a smile playing on his lips. She was busy sorting her cupboard, she turned for a second and saw him staring at her, smiling.

He, in his white towel, ofcourse looking as HOT as he usually does, stood there, leaning by the wall. She smiled

"Arey, aap aagaye'" She said.

And then looked at him completely. Top to Bottom. Again in his towel. She admitted she had the Hottest and Handsome gentleman as her husband. But this amuzed her. She shook her head. "Shiv, aap bhi naa'"' and sighed.

He smiled .. they both chuckled.

"Jaldi chaliye khana thanda hojayega" Gauri informed.

Shiv started walking out of the room.

"rey, kahan jaare hain aap, aise.."

Shiv turned. "Tumhi ne tho kaha ke khana thanda hora hai, tho khane jaara hoon, aao". He said, acting innocent as if he knew nothing.

Gauri makes an 'Ohh-I-so-know-what-ur doing- kinda face and says:

"Aap aise jaayenge??"'

"Tho kaise jaaoongaa??"He said coming closer to her.

"Wear your clothes shiv'"She said turning away from him, with a smile.

Shiv came closer' kept coming closer, even closer' and more' raised his hand, Gauri let out a deep breath, he raised his hand, and took his clothes and turned away. Happily smiling as he was content he had managed to increase Gauri's heartbeat, once again.

Winked at himself and went into the changing compartment to change.

Gauri let out another sigh and shook her head. She took the bag downstairs and Both of them went to the dining room to dine.

At the dining Table:

"The house seems so quite Shiv. Eversince Anupam dada nd Ipshi have left, its more like a haunted place. You know how much I Love it here, and I direly miss the days when we all were together'" Gauri said all this quite fast, in one breath, as if taking some kinda burden out from inside her.

Shiv looked at her. His eyes having a tint of understanding, calmness, and sensibility.

Gauri took hold of Shiv's hand from the table. "Is Ipshita still angry, Shiv?" She asked, with concern in her eyes' and a little of pain, curiousness and temptation to bring the ones which meant family to her back.

Shiv held gauri's hand, above his, by his hand that was free.

"Don't worry Gauri, They'll be back soon' I promise, Dada cannot live without us for long and Ipshita neither. I promise I'll bring them back' For you, For us!"

H e smiled showing relief, contentment, truth and consolation in his eyes.

"Just don't worry, Theek hai?" He said and smiled.

Kissed her hand and helped her clear up the dining table.

Shiv was a PERFECT husband. Gauri often cursed herself as to why she didn't see ALL the positives in Shiv before she fell in love with him. He was always Humorous.. Caringg.. Lovingg.. Releifingg, and Handsome. 🀣 But, she had just a few months back realized all those qualities of him, before that, they were just Husband & Wife.

It was 6 months since they were married and they today were Proud couple.
This was it guys, do tell me how it is and whether i should continue or not.
Actually i seriously wanted to continue Saathi re, but since the thread's locked and i lost touch, so this idea struck my head whilst reading 1 of the AK FFs recently.
Its ok? i know the ending of the first part is abrupt... but ... ermm cdnt help.
Sabz... this is long naa??
This is going to be a Short FF, Inshallah! πŸ˜†
Do comment guyss!! 😳



Reeno, firstly, I am HUGELY sorry for the delayed response. Secondly, O-M-G... I am loving this. Now this is what I'm talking about - our SG, the eternal and forever... Loved the whole towel scene *sighs*... I wish we would have had the pleasure of seeing something like this. Your writing style is very consistent, which is very nice. Also, I second all the plus points on Mr. Kapoor's aptness as a husband, I would like one too plz. Lovely work hun, ⭐️

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thankss soo much everyone!
DC Dii, ur awesomee! Yaar.. Thankss 😳 Im Over whelmed!!
Thankss.. will continue soon!
Just busy with my sisters wedding for quite sometime! 😳
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