FF:Anjaane Se Woh-ch14pg37/conclude! - Page 24

Originally posted by: wilddevil2010

Not fair! I wanted Gauri 2 do d dressing.Anyways d update was rocking.
hiya and thanks for the comment as for the dressing well sorri keeping you away from all the moments you want...😛
D chess match portion was awesome. Shiv is so smart. No matter whosoever win he would get opportunity 2 spend time wid his wife.
thats the thing ...the way i see it shiv has truely got the better end of the deal.. very cunning indeed😉

Dadi is so naughty. Haww they cheated. i know there had to be an element of lightness in there.

Even I'm confused abt d key. Shiv did this for gauri's future or due 2 anger. wait and find out more i guess.

Gauri's convo wid dadi was gud. Dadi can help SG. Shiv making gauri blush at every possible opportunity.
pretty much sounds like shiv kapoor doesn't it.. will try to update soon thanks!

Pls continue soon

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Originally posted by: pria4ever

Lovely update!!! n worth the wait.... glad you liked it.!

Really luved the nok-jhok between Shiv-Gauri during the 'garam chai drop' incident...Shiv is so
unpredictable😳...i thought he wud chance pe dance with Gauri...but no...he is Shiv...has his own style😉...luved Gauri's reaction on seeing her hubby's shirtless figure😉...

...your right and i kind of like that about shiv hes got a very defined personality yet he has his moments and im guessing different colors are showing. he was very firm..reluctant until now because he didnt want to be involved with gauri with the whole thakur thing yet hes willfully stepped into the world now so why not! 😉

Anupams nani...cudn't have asked for a better entry😆 (btw she kinda reminds me of Lata dadi's entry in KAA, she was too cool😉)...luved the way Anupam introduced Gauri as "Shiv ki Gauri😳

dunno wat Shiv is upto with reference to Gauri's father....however hope Shiv's action doesn't hurt Gauri...

yey she did enter at the right time but i hope she did but i didn't intend for her to be anything like lata dadi..just a sweet, simple..little gran.😉 glad you enjoyed the chess came and you guessed right by god does he know. hes the one and only shiv kapoor and he lost to his wife..! of course he knows...lol😳

The chess game😳😳...wow...luved it...Gauri won,but she cheated...n it is but obvious tat Shiv knows tat😉..n *blush*...luved the way he tells Gauri,' Mera pura din aaj tumhare naam...ab kaho kya chahti ho mujhse' ....what was she going to ask of him😳😳😳...needless to say...awaiting for ur next update!!!!

ive got a faint idea of what she wants from him yet god what would you ask for...????⭐️.!

Happy New Year!!! 😃

happy new year to you too!

Take care

Pria

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Originally posted by: -_AfridiMalik_-

OMG OMG OMG! 😲

after yearssss it seems!

Anywayss awesome update... why do particularly ALL updates have to end with a suspense?? 😆

It ROCKKSS!

the part was very well written!!

Keep it up... cant wait for the next part & THANKS FOR THE PM! 😃

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesomeeeeeee!!!!!!!........

hiya--glad you liked it.!

it was all obvious for gauri to turn red in embaraasement!...i mean a girl like gauri and shiv shirtless😆 thats true think about it ..i think any girl would blush in her situation...shes luckly married to quite an handsome man...doesnt really know him very well and he takes his shirt off!!!😉

shiv is trying hard to make his relationship with geet more comfortable and to move on with her!....

your right shiv is trying yet again gauri has stressed that she respects above all yet love ..she doesn't love him in that way.

loved to see that how close dadi and shiv are!...liked the entry of dadi!....
glad you liked it.! like to think it was sweet and simple just like the little lady herself.

didn't understand the jail part though!.... u will have to wait and see.

i m sure that shiv knew that anupam made some changes in the game and that is how gauri won it!.... hmmm well as sharp as he is..i agree with you..!

looking forward to their one day trip! in the next update for sure.

i just hope that guari wold be mre comfortable around shiv!... i do too..lol but theres something about that storyline and character that doesnt let me do that so easily ..a little longer.

continue sooN! will do.

happy new year!!!😃 to you too.

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Gauri lays eyes on her husbands shirtless figure.Hey...she is so naughty & romantic.Didnt expect it from her.

He knew she was uncomfortable and instead of expecting anything from her he walked towards the side table, picked up cotton wool?dipped it in a sort of pasty oitment and rubbed It against his chest.

I did'nt expect that.I thout Gauri will do that 4 Shiv & there will b some romance btw them.But it did'nt happen.Bad luck.

Sitting in front of the chess bored and an nervous gauri who was just about to run off shiv touches upon gauris hand just as she tries to leave. "Tum kaha jaa rahin ho gauri.?" Gauri struggles for a response "?ji wohh?"

its a simple scene,but i loved it.it had a romantic touch. Shiv spoke silently as to distract gauri? it's a beautiful sentence,i duno how 2 say how well u've written it.

As he spoke each word played in gauris mind with an echo

"Mera pura din aaj tumare naam ?.ab kaho kya chahti ho mujse?"

Wow!That's superb.Claps 4 u & shiv.He rocked in the last scene thru his dialogue.Dadi's description was lovely.Wish i could c her.Who is playing Dadi's role?

Originally posted by: karna91

great part....gauri and shiv spending time together!.....wating for next part...do update soon... ...