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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Shiv: "Tum kahi nahin jaaon gi gauri'
thanks for reading with so much attention and its always nice to know which moments my readers enjoyed t he most. the medication moment was one of my frav too.

shiv: "Agar tum mera khyal rakhna chahti ho toe mere paas raho. Is kamre mein meri patni ki tare."

Shiv overshone Gauri thru his dialogues. i think shivs dialogues are what is wooing gauri at the moment i don't think she knows what to do with herself. As for the very last scene you will have to wait and see what happens cuz i'm not too aware at this moment. ๐Ÿ˜† t
The last scene was romantic tho its abt a small physical accident.I hope it'll make them more closer



thank you very much for your comment will pm you soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deizy

whoo finalyyy:)
just one word awesome:)๐Ÿ‘
update soonn๐Ÿ‘




thanks! will try to update soon. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

well the wait was worth it. enjoyed the conversation between shiv and gauri a lot. glad he is ready to accept her as his wife . shiv - mother interaction was also cute. hope gauri overcomes her inhibitions soon and accepts shiv whole heartedly. yar what is this u stopped at such a high point. now waiting for the next part eagerly. plz dont keep us waiting for long like before and do pm the links next time.



thanks you very much, glad you enjoyed it. To be honest that conversation between shiv and gauri got to be bit of a bore for me to write. i was relived when it was over..lol. it was needed i think but because i had the justfication of both characters strongly in my mind writing it seemed a waste.
lol- to be honest shiv gauris moments were the moments i enjoyed the most yet i got to the point where i was tired of writing plus its a great point to keep you hooked. waiting for the next update. Suggestions on what should happen next are welcome.๐Ÿ˜‰ thanks again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: karna91

great update after long break....the emotions of gauri revealed were touching and so is of the scene btw shiv and his mom...do continue soon.....hope next part will also be exciting as this part......wating for next part



thank you ever so much. with your best wishes hopefully i wont let you down in the next chapter. glad you enjoyed it. will pm you when i update.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: planet387

shiv should start wooing gauri...n she should give give him hard time she desereved wooing n getting pamperd from shiv...yaar she waited for this for 5 freaking years๐Ÿคข

thanks!thanks!thanks!thanks youve said it..its time for gauri to make most of her..lovey dovey husband. ok hes not so much lovey dovey yet he has his ways! ๐Ÿ˜‰


loved shivs n nikhilas scene...so fun loving it was nice shift i think to see a different side of shiv.!
he was loosing touch with himself...lol๐Ÿ˜† aww babe u can make her fall in love with u just by ur smiles n naughtyness๐Ÿ˜ณ n also by urs gentlemanliness we all know that but he doesnt he thinks he has lost the shiv kapoor touch.. more of this to come as hes forced into thakurpan.!

๐Ÿ˜ฒ he poured the medication off the balcon..lmao loved it..Shiv Kapoor is back๐Ÿ˜ƒ

shiv n his tactics...poor gauri dont know what she gotten herself into

thats true shiv kapoor works in such a naughty way..feel sorry for gauri. that was one of frav scenes.

"Aap chahte kya hai..?"

shiv: "Agar tum mera khyal rakhna chahti ho toe mere paas raho. Is kamre mein meri patni ki tare. ...oh shiv n his demanding nature๐Ÿ˜› gauri bechari really doesnt get a say does she but i think shes demanding side is something gauri is going to fall for.


what kinda man gauris father was/is...disgusting man๐Ÿ˜ก i dont have a statement that can describe him any better!๐Ÿ˜†

poor gauri n her rough past..she deserved every eacch of shiv

he unbuttons his shirt'leaving gauri In a state of embarrassment. ๐Ÿ˜ณ well m blushing too n my Ba thinks m on high or something๐Ÿคฃ sorry for making you blush, not my fault really is it all down to shiv there as for your ba im sure she understands...lol


Jagu, thanks for update..loved ur demanding, caring shiv n also loved sweet, shy, nevours gauri๐Ÿ˜‰

will update soon...

plz update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ




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Posted: 13 years ago
Jagruti,


Wow ... the update was wonderful.... I have gone through all the others comments and everyone has said what i wanted to say......

Only one thing is...... Gauri had gone through a rough upbringing and when shiv married her she thought this is the dream come true..... knowing that Shiv is not promising a happy married life.....
But again..... She is sent into another rough patch.... where she is ignored like she doesnot exist..... for Shiv...... I am still not convinced that Shiv actually understands what poor Gauri has been throught all her life and then with him...... But I also understand why gauri cannot be angry with Shiv..... If it was not for him.... She might have been a slave to some other rich man..... here Shiv made her his wife..... and gave her all the freedom that she wants....... but Did not want to recongnize that relation itself.....

So, Gauri is very greatful and she should be in my opnion...... But I am not conviced that Shiv actually understands Gauri yet..... or understands what she has been through....... She respects him, she admires him, but I want gauri to fall in love with Shiv...... like shiv said he wants second chance at marriage...... I want Gauri to fall in love and not just give Shiv what he wants just out of the greatfullness that she is feeling for him now.....

I want Shiv to feel ignored..... by Gauri..... I want him to first realise his love for Gauri then I want him to see the difference that...... after relising that he loves gauri...... he is able to see that..... Gauri what ever she is doing now is out of responsibility and respect and not out of love for him.....

It is just my view....... that i feel after reading the part...... don't get me wrong.....

and LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST I WANT MANY MANY ROMANTIC SCENES....... MANY AND MANY..... and I hope Shiv in the next scene actually takes of his shirt and stands bare chest to embarass our gauri......

Thanks for the update...... I am always craving for more...... and you know I am a fan of your writing....

Please, update soon....... will be waiting for you next part.....

There has been major changes going on ..... because of which i am constantly busy and unable to take the time to reply back......But once everything falls into a order
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bunny_fun

Jagruti,


Wow ... the update was wonderful.... I have gone through all the others comments and everyone has said what i wanted to say...... what can i say..thank you..very much i love the way my readers totally understand what i'm trying to get though even before i have written it! you guys are fantastic and again you have got all your perceptions right about both characters.

Only one thing is...... Gauri had gone through a rough upbringing and when shiv married her she thought this is the dream come true..... knowing that Shiv is not promising a happy married life.....
But again..... She is sent into another rough patch.... where she is ignored like she doesnot exist..... for Shiv...... I am still not convinced that Shiv actually understands what poor Gauri has been throught all her life and then with him...... But I also understand why gauri cannot be angry with Shiv..... If it was not for him.... She might have been a slave to some other rich man..... here Shiv made her his wife..... and gave her all the freedom that she wants....... but Did not want to recongnize that relation itself.....

yes this is just how it is for gauri..shes had a harsh childhood...no one to care for her..no one to think of her..and even when a poweful man like shiv takes a rash decision for her its something that she has never felt or have anyone do for her.
As for shiv not understanding her...to be frank he doesnt not at this point. all he wants to do is make up for the time..i.e he was looking for his mothers list of perfections this shows that he still doesnt understand that these feelings should come from the heart.
i dont shiv can ever really understand what gauris been though...i dont see how one can understand when they havent been though it themselfs. As for gauris nature your right ... i would say that she fell in love with a imagaiery shiv..one she thought up of when he wasnt around but she has realised being around him..hes not really that shiv.
yes your right..she respects him and plays the part of a wife just because that is the right way to behave..the right way to show how greatful she is or that she cares.
love truely lacks from both sides in my view..shiv tires to make up for his mistakes and gauri has kept in mind that she owes shiv.

So, Gauri is very greatful and she should be in my opnion...... But I am not conviced that Shiv actually understands Gauri yet..... or understands what she has been through....... She respects him, she admires him, but I want gauri to fall in love with Shiv...... like shiv said he wants second chance at marriage...... I want Gauri to fall in love and not just give Shiv what he wants just out of the greatfullness that she is feeling for him now.....

shiv will fall in love with gauri and i think gauri will fall in love with her real husband..shiv that is in front of her and not the one she has thought of in his absence..i think there is some time and effort on its way before we get to that point but i think we will.๐Ÿ˜‰

I want Shiv to feel ignored..... by Gauri..... I want him to first realise his love for Gauri then I want him to see the difference that...... after relising that he loves gauri...... he is able to see that..... Gauri what ever she is doing now is out of responsibility and respect and not out of love for him.....

It is just my view....... that i feel after reading the part...... don't get me wrong.....

no your views are my views im sure we are thinking along the right track!

and LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST I WANT MANY MANY ROMANTIC SCENES....... MANY AND MANY..... and I hope Shiv in the next scene actually takes of his shirt and stands bare chest to embarass our gauri......

aw you guys are gona kill me with your want for romance..you can see the odd situation both of these bitcharas are in and you guys want romance.!!!!!! ok wish granted......you can have all the romance you want.๐Ÿ˜‰ my gift from me to you.


Thanks for the update...... I am always craving for more...... and you know I am a fan of your writing....

thank you very much for reading your comments are too kind...will try to update soon.

Please, update soon....... will be waiting for you next part.....

There has been major changes going on ..... because of which i am constantly busy and unable to take the time to reply back......But once everything falls into a order

i can understand i think im going through some stuff on the same lines...thanks again.

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Posted: 13 years ago

HEY!!! WELCOME BACK!!

14s red ch 9 n it ws FAB! i likd da part where shiv burns da paintin n tell gauri dat its a new beginin now. isghn** it ws so cute!!! con soon!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
no update ๐Ÿ˜ณ
man i like hawk...always checkin for update each day of every couples of hours...i really need a hobby

update soon Jagu๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: planet387

no update ๐Ÿ˜ณ

man i like hawk...always checkin for update each day of every couples of hours...i really need a hobby

update soon Jagu๐Ÿ˜›



will try to update soon..will pm..but if you have any ideas for this ff or requests feel free to let me know in the mean time.
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