Originally posted by: pria4ever
thanks fo much for this lovely update jagruti...simply luved it...👏👏👏
glad you liked it thanks!
luved the way Shiv opened up to his Gauri...he understanding her fears, her anxiety,her refusal to accept Shiv so soon-"maaf kijiyey lekhin mera dil izzazat nahi deta"....the way u've described their conversation truly creates an impact...literally cud imagine tat convo between r Shiv-Gauri😳...
aw i personaly thought that conversation was well long...it carried on from the last chapter and i couldnt wait to finish that bit off so i can move on to more fresher moments, the same with the flashback on gauri and shivs marriage concept. The thing is ive pictured that in my mind ever since the start so i found writing it a bit boring to be honest. i only enjoyed the shiv gauri moments...
u know the line,
'"Chaha toe meine bohot kuch tha lekin joe ham chahte hai vo mile woah saruri toe nahin naa." so very much reminds me of KAA title song....memories😳
yep now you mention it that line does relate doesnt it!😊
really luved the Shiv-Nikhila flashback scene...afterall Shiv is Nikhila's ladla....luved her note to Shiv...so very true....Shiv is geniunely an accha aur saccha insaan😳😳😳
the Shiv-Gauri nokjhok scene was too gud...luved the way Shiv wants to grab Gauris attention by doing wat he is not supposed to do😆😆
shiv and nikhilas flashback i quite liked i just wanted to established how disintrested shiv was in matters of love after ippshita he didnt really care and i think this moment shows it.
hate Gauri's father😡...how cud he? the way Shiv accepts Gauri as his wife ...his honestly...apparently tats wat is special abt Shiv-Gauri...the honesty in their relationship...
gauris dad hai hai!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆lol
wow Gauri shifting to Shiv's room...Shiv unbuttoned😳...Gauri embarrassed...how could u do this Jagruti...now common update jaldi...don't keep me blushing n getting wild thoughts😆
eagerly awaiting ur next update Jagruti....luved this one😃
yep i did this on purpose i think, i wanted you all to come back and read on so i thought i would put a moment in there that would hook you to come and read again.
your suggestions on what should happen next are more than welcome. 😉 and thanks!
Pria
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