FF:Anjaane Se Woh-ch14pg37/conclude! - Page 18

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Anupam teasingly comments ? "Admiring the view shiv vaise?.gauri mein kuch baat sarur hai."

That is true.Gauri has something which attracts everyone. yes i guess your right-put that in there for some light moments other wise its just rona dhona all the way through.
Instead he opts for the shawl gauri had given him.

That is so sweet. i guess change is slowly happening he just doesnt know it.😉

"Hummn waoh tume dekhe jaa raha hai..aur tum use .. ? kya pyaar hai."

This is love..eternal love which is silent. i don't know about eternal love but its surely one of anupams cheeky comments-- uncalled for 😆

Anupam finds it amusing but gauri is not convinced that shiv has feelings for her nor does she expect anything from him.

Gauri..see Shiv's feelings... i think its selfless love on gauris behalf but she should see shivs love...look gauri!!😆

Anupam: "Patni ho uski..haak se uske paas jaa sakti ho?haak se dekho.. "

Yes,i agree with him. yes why not!! agree too.

Shiv : "Pyaar dekha hai tumari aankhon mein."

Not only Gairi's eyes speak love,Shiv's eyes are also full of love. yep i dont think he knows though.

Shiv: "Paanch saalon mein aise ehk bhi din nahin hai naa gauri jaha tumne mere bare na socha ho..ya tumare yey asoon na bahe ho?"

This is nothing other than deep love. 😉😉😉😉

Gauri's painting....its so significant in their luv life. yes i think its a huge step for them..and she went and trashed it.!

"Jab aapne mujse shaadhi ki hi toe kuch dino ke baad meine yey tasvir baanayi thi..yey sapna dekh kar ke kabhi naa kabhi aap muje aapnayeynge aur mein aapna saara dard..apni saari taaklif aapko gale laga kar saahir karlungi woah aasoon jo meine chupa kar rekheh te woh aapki baahon mein aakar behehte."

This is so touching.Shiv...make her dream real.Gauri in Shiv's arms..waiting 4 tht.
do you think it will happen??? 😳 i think this had to be the best moments even if i do say so myself. glad you liked it though.

Shiv: "Ab tume kaon roak raha hai gauri?.,mein tumare saamne hoon."

That was so touchy.Finally shiv opens his heart slowly i guess

This is 1 of d best parts u've written thank you very much glad you liked it im off to read bk on your ff now...thanks for taking the time out. will update soon.

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beautiful update Jagruti!!! Shiv-Gauri....they are a dream...i simply luved the interaction between them...

luved the scene where Shiv watched Gauri teach the kids to dance...and luved the way u put it ,'but this moment captured the million moments that were to come..." so i can expect alot in ur future updates😉..

Shiv mentioning Gauri's name was enough to make her heart skip a beat...it was so cute...could imagine tat...n the manner in which Shiv gave her the earring was too sweet...i luved his indirect way of flirting with Gauri...n then the" main chai nahi coffee pita hu"... flashback time for me😉

luved the confrontation between Shiv-Gauri...the manner in which Shiv put forth his views and his opinions and the way Gauri was reaction was awesome....u have perfectly defined Gauri in this line: "He saw emotion in gauris eyes, he saw devotion, respect, attachment and more clearly then anything there was selfless love for him."...i have also believed tat Shiv-Gauri relation is more abou that emotion of love, its about respect,devotion n trust they share...

Gauri's reply to Shivs question also highlights her expectations on being married with Shiv, but then she gave up on tat...but now its Shiv's turn...

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

OMG what an amazing update...loved it completely

good to see shiv and gauri getting comfortable with each other...stealing glances at each other was so nice.

amzaing dialogues which touched my heart...but the last part was the best ...hope gauri hugs him 😍

very well written

Originally posted by: pria4ever

beautiful update Jagruti!!! Shiv-Gauri....they are a dream...i simply luved the interaction between them... what can i say your too kind..thank you.

luved the scene where Shiv watched Gauri teach the kids to dance...and luved the way u put it ,'but this moment captured the million moments that were to come..." so i can expect alot in ur future updates😉.. yey o that means i have to now back my line up with lots of these moments don't i..😕 humm...creating more work for myself. -- but glad you liked it.

Shiv mentioning Gauri's name was enough to make her heart skip a beat...it was so cute...could imagine tat...n the manner in which Shiv gave her the earring was too sweet...i luved his indirect way of flirting with Gauri...n then the" main chai nahi coffee pita hu"... flashback time for me😉

flirting..its was not filirting ...😲 ok maybe a little but in his own way😉 i intended that to be a line that kind of told gauri that she was more then welcome in his room..just said in a very sutle way.

luved the confrontation between Shiv-Gauri...the manner in which Shiv put forth his views and his opinions and the way Gauri was reaction was awesome....u have perfectly defined Gauri in this line: "He saw emotion in gauris eyes, he saw devotion, respect, attachment and more clearly then anything there was selfless love for him."...i have also believed tat Shiv-Gauri relation is more abou that emotion of love, its about respect,devotion n trust they share...

o glad you liked it..i guess i just wanted to show gauri from shiv point of view but i think your right shiv gauris relationship has always been about more than just love.

Gauri's reply to Shivs question also highlights her expectations on being married with Shiv, but then she gave up on tat...but now its Shiv's turn...

yes..kind of shows that ..she had expectation but when years passed by she kind of lost a little hope hence she tries to distroy that painting..but shiv bringing it to face again reminds her of those dreams more deeply. -your right i think it is shivs turn now and he's made a start i think.

even Anupam was too sweet... yes i know i didn't intend for anupam to be too much involved in this ff but i can't help it..my ff misses something now if he isnt around.😆

waiting...waiting...eagerly waiting for ur next update Jagruti...really beautiful...

you guys what can i say...just complete reading my update and your already waiting for the next hufff... ..without your feedback it wouldnt be worth writing so thanks! will try my best..asap.

Pria

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Originally posted by: karna91

.great part........loved it

Originally posted by: Deizy

heyy! simple loved the update
loving their relationship:) gauri's words are are so touching....
cntn soonn
thanks

I have been waiting for you to update since so long and to be honest, now a days am not active on I-F but the moment I saw your PM, I just rushed to read it and somehow today was a low day for me and this update just refreshed me..

The pain, the anxiety, the longing was all so clearly mentioned. I can so very clearly see Shiv falling err not falling but rather he has fallen for Gauri deeply and as the matter of fact, there is no one who could handle their awkward silence this beautifully.

The entire ambiance of the location of Gauri dancing and Shiv just looking on while Anupam's slight tease was great and not to forget my most favourite part of Shiv-Gauri interaction. Right from removing the shawl to Shiv's confrontation abt him knowing Gauri enough to him asking her question and the Loveliest line which ended the FF...

Him saying that he hasn't stopped her and my heart skipped a beat, it was just so great and I was really looking forward to read more but sadly it ended soon..

Please continue soon and just want to read on abt this enchanting couple.

Luv atop

Originally posted by: atop

I have been waiting for you to update since so long and to be honest, now a days am not active on I-F but the moment I saw your PM, I just rushed to read it and somehow today was a low day for me and this update just refreshed me..

aw thank you very much really appreciate the fact that you come bk to i.f for my ff. -really thank you.Yes totally understand those down days but i hope my ff made you smile 😊

The pain, the anxiety, the longing was all so clearly mentioned. I can so very clearly see Shiv falling err not falling but rather he has fallen for Gauri deeply and as the matter of fact, there is no one who could handle their awkward silence this beautifully.

yes ur right shiv has fallen for gauri, he does not quite know it right now yet i think silence is a huge part of this ff. A lot of interaction between the two is done with an understanding silence. I think out of the two both of them understand each other enough to feel silence and know what it indicates. i.e gauri knowing when it is right to enter the room ..so on.

The entire ambiance of the location of Gauri dancing and Shiv just looking on while Anupam's slight tease was great and not to forget my most favourite part of Shiv-Gauri interaction. Right from removing the shawl to Shiv's confrontation abt him knowing Gauri enough to him asking her question and the Loveliest line which ended the FF...

yes i think the room interaction between shiv and gauri was something i really enjoyed writing just because i could write it with ease as all the silence did my job. glad you liked those particular scenes though.

Him saying that he hasn't stopped her and my heart skipped a beat, it was just so great and I was really looking forward to read more but sadly it ended soon..

aw..gauris heart skips a beat i didn't expect my readers to miss one too.

Please continue soon and just want to read on abt this enchanting couple.

will try to continue soon. -thanks

Luv atop

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