FF:Anjaane Se Woh-ch14pg37/conclude! - Page 16

Jagruti nice update. Shiv is starting to like Gauri and soon he is really going to fall in love with her. Loved the part where he asked her opinion. It is good in two ways one as she is his wife in every step that he takes in life he must include her opinions in decision making and secondly he is not used to the village life to uderstand the situation 100% Gauri's insights will help him to take the right decision.

first of all a big big SORRY for the late reply

Originally posted by: Anuhia

Jagruti nice update. Shiv is starting to like Gauri and soon he is really going to fall in love with her. Loved the part where he asked her opinion. It is good in two ways one as she is his wife in every step that he takes in life he must include her opinions in decision making and secondly he is not used to the village life to uderstand the situation 100% Gauri's insights will help him to take the right decision.

Would love it if you could write a flashback scene about how they got married that would be nice.

Thanks and continue soon.

thank you very much- glad you liked it. and yes he is falling in love😉.
yah the bit where he very much involves her in his decision i think shows he is very 21th centrey thakur 😆 no but i was trying portray the fact that shiv is different from the normal thakur and that for gauri to see to. actually putting the whole hearing thing in the update was a bit of a risk but it worked well if u liked it.

aw as for a flashback i was going to put that in anyway--its comes along in the next one or two chapters.
thanks again

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

first of all a big big SORRY for the late reply

coming to the update...it was amazing ...good to see the caring side of shiv ...esp the mandir scene...also liked the way he asked gauris opinion when he was hearing the matter related to the village...gauris reply was too good ...and the shawl scene was also very touching...all in all a very well written update

one request...is it possible for u to pm me the links as well the next time...

aw no theres no need for sorry, but thanks for taking the time out to read. really makes me happy to see you guys liked my update so thanks. i thought it might be a bit of a drag but seen as you guys liked it all is good. 😉
yep i will add the links next time--😊

As usual ur dialogues r awesome.

I liked it.

Shiv: "Meri maa kehti thi –batchpan mein jaab kabhi bohot pareshan hota tha toe aise hein bimaar hota tha."

First of all m reaaaallllllllllllllly reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy soorrrry Jagu ,.... i havent been able 2 catch 2-3 updates! 😔

im really sorry...

im still 2 read the last part... nd i will.. really soon!!

Its reaaaaallly a TREAT 2 read it all together u know.. wid da flow!! im glad i misd sum! 😉 i cud read the whole thing all over again!

Thanks a lott fr giving us such a treat!

im just off 2 read the last part... and IM LOVIN IT!!!!!!! 😃

Continue soon!! 😃

Gauri left with a touching statement that melted shivs guilt that was questioned within.

Turning to the framed picture of his mother shivs expression took to an innocent ease.

"Woah bohaot pyaar karti hai mujse, shyaad aapke bete ko bhi woh aatchi lagne lagi hai." …………

Hayeeeee Yayyyyy!!!! kuch kuch Hora hai! :P

AWESOME update BYGOD! nd HUGE at tht too!! 😃

Thankss a lott Jaguu... PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!! 😃 😛

really Nice one...

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

As usual ur dialogues r awesome.

Shiv: "Ek aurat ke nazaryey se mein jaana chahta hoon ke tum kya soch ti ho."

I liked it.

Shiv: "Meri maa kehti thi 'batchpan mein jaab kabhi bohot pareshan hota tha toe aise hein bimaar hota tha."

Could feel a lot of innocence here.

"Woah bohaot pyaar karti hai mujse, shyaad aapke bete ko bhi woh aatchi lagne lagi hai." ''''

This is too good.

o thank you very much glad you liked it and my dialouge is just what comes to mind at the time..lol
im sure some if it is really uncalled for but thanks for your feedback about to update shortly.

Originally posted by: -_AfridiMalik_-

First of all m reaaaallllllllllllllly reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy soorrrry Jagu ,.... i havent been able 2 catch 2-3 updates! 😔

im really sorry...

im still 2 read the last part... nd i will.. really soon!!

Its reaaaaallly a TREAT 2 read it all together u know.. wid da flow!! im glad i misd sum! 😉 i cud read the whole thing all over again!

Thanks a lott fr giving us such a treat!

im just off 2 read the last part... and IM LOVIN IT!!!!!!! 😃

Continue soon!! 😃

wow so you read them both together..wow thats far too much to read lol😆 anyway glad you liked it thank you very much.