wow~ just awesome:))))
i really loving this ff!!!!!!!!!!!
cntn soonnn
It was beautiful like always...A gradual development could be seen and Shiv surely is mellowing down and there is an emotion which is leaping back yet again in him..
Their interaction in the temple and him opening up was nice as it is only Shiv who can take the first step here with boldness as Gauri is the one to keep her feelings inside..
The way he manages to fluster her is just so simple yet beautiful..The decision and the fact that he seeked Gauri's advice added another feather to their relationship..
I had a great time while I read this gradually beautiful development..
and you know what towards the end, I just was mesmerized and thought there would be more until I realized that the part has ended..
A beautiful ending with
"Woah bohaot pyaar karti hai mujse, shyaad aapke bete ko bhi woh aatchi lagne lagi hai." …………
Aww he has fallen for her and am so looking forward for further progress..You surely know how to keep me glued to your ff and keep on asking for more...
Just realized I used the word 'beautiful' quite a lot of times today hehe but yet again a wonderful job Jagruti and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Please keep updating soon and I hope the next part comes sooner..
Thank you so much for the lovely update and hope you are doing well.
Luv atop
It was beautiful like always...A gradual development could be seen and Shiv surely is mellowing down and there is an emotion which is leaping back yet again in him..
thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it. yah i guess shiv is mellowing...which is a good thing as you guys want to see more of shiv gauri.
Their interaction in the temple and him opening up was nice as it is only Shiv who can take the first step here with boldness as Gauri is the one to keep her feelings inside..
yes your right gauri is really the silent one in the relationship and shiv is drawn out to be very strong and bold.
The way he manages to fluster her is just so simple yet beautiful..The decision and the fact that he seeked Gauri's advice added another feather to their relationship..
gradual addition to there relationship i guess.
I had a great time while I read this gradually beautiful development..
thank you..nice to know this was noticed
and you know what towards the end, I just was mesmerized and thought there would be more until I realized that the part has ended..
A beautiful ending with
"Woah bohaot pyaar karti hai mujse, shyaad aapke bete ko bhi woh aatchi lagne lagi hai."
actually ive been telling everyone that i wasnt really content with my last line. i knew what i was trying to get across but i dont think i found the right words for shivs last line...hummm😕
Aww he has fallen for her and am so looking forward for further progress..You surely know how to keep me glued to your ff and keep on asking for more...
Just realized I used the word 'beautiful' quite a lot of times today hehe but yet again a wonderful job Jagruti and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
😉 i guess beautiful is a beautiful word so using it time and time again is a good thing! will try to update asap and no need for the thanks...thanking you.
Please keep updating soon and I hope the next part comes sooner..
Thank you so much for the lovely update and hope you are doing well.
Luv atop
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wonderful update... village girl's situaiton was great and it brought an excellent understanding of gauri's feeling......even the description of shiv's feelings were superb.......really a great update....
waiting for more wonderful and interesting update like the rest of the updates......
please continue soon.
Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
superb as usual!!!....
thank you very much and thanking your for reading..!really good to see that now shiv can understand gauri's feelings and emotions that she always try to hide!....especially that mandir scene...wen gauri thought that no one can ever understand that shez angry with her god but shiv understood that....that was surprising!...
i know i think that has to be the most amazing thing about people that are really close to you. they can tell what you are thinking and feeling just by looking at you and thats what i wanted to get across.love the way how shiv has started giving importance to gauri in his life and even laking decisions!....glad that he asked her opinion about that girl's life!....and the best part was that he accepted her opinion!....
yey he is slowly getting to know gauri and involving her a little more- accepting her slowly i guess.i m sooo happy that shiv has started to like her....love the last statement of gauri's wen she said that his decisions are never wrong!....love it!...
yep i loved that bit too.!😉 thank you very much will try to update asap.continue soon!
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