FF:Anjaane Se Woh-ch14pg37/conclude! - Page 13

Hi :)

I have to say this was an awesome update....the beginnings of them coming closer are starting to show :)
I absolutely loved how he uncovered that room, and saw her paintings of him....and how she herself viewed her life story....totally amazing. and i loved shiv's reactions to that too....
my favorite part of that would obviously, definitely, be the torn painting of her in his arms....i hope he shows it to her later when they are together...like a couple 😉

aww i loved how he apolgizes to her for mahen's little trick...but i wish she was a tad bit more responsive....hoping to see a more outspoken gauri as she opens up to him slowly😆

hmm. and defintiely the ending was AmAzInG! i absolutely enjoyed reading about how she was worried for him, and how he went to her because she hadn't eaten :)

do continue soon and thanks for the pm!

~Naina

Shiv looking at d paintings was a cute scene.I duno y i liked it very much.Shiv Gauri's soft interaction was lovely.

wow!!!!!!!!!

I love reading your updates, really, they make my day. Especially with my last year in highschool and all the tension of getting accepted in a good university, your fic makes my day.

Originally posted by: pria4ever

hmmm...luv is in the air😍.... thank you didnt mean for anyone to be left blushing!

luved it Jagruti, trust me i'm still blushing😳.... its all good.! 😆

so true...SG never needed words to express their luv, their silence n their eyes do the needful...😃...

i think silence always says more than words so glad you liked it.

Shiv finally saw Gauri's paintings...luved his reactions wen he was viewing the paintings...luved the way he took the torn painting with him....Gauri embraced in Shivs arms😳....memories😍😍 yep he saw them so he knows very much of gauris love.

i particularly luved this line,'In these past five years shiv never thought upon gauri yet gauri had filled her days with him'... yep the line kind of sums it up glad you liked it.

the silent flirting by Mr Shiv kapoor....luved it...luved Gauri's reaction wen she heard Shiv cough...uff their interaction is something unique.... flirting what flirting??😉?

Gauri...wat do i say...her luv is so pure ,i really luved the way u have described her in this update Jagruti...how could Shiv resist her n vice versa.... its true both are a right pair but gauri is innocent.

i also enjoyed Anupams interaction with Ria...n Shiv's conversation with Ria....

Eager to read the next update, Gauris concern for Shiv, taking care of him...already in dreamland...luved this update!!!!gr8 work!!!!

Pria

thank you ever so much that was lovey to read!

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Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

lovelyyy part!...

really good to see that shiv is atleast making an effort to improve his relationship with gauri!....

really love the last part wen shiv was really concerned about gauri!...

now the story is getting more interesting as shiv is trying to understand gauri!....

i think that even gauri should try to open her feelings alittle bit to shiv!...

cotinue soon!

thank you thank you thank you..you are the best and im about to continue now so please read ....😉

Originally posted by: wilddevil2010

The update was beautiful

There is a strange kind of serenity in ur writings making them very captivating. Every emotion d character feels is felt by d readers 2.

SG relation has started progressing. Thankfully Shiv is making efforts 2 know more abt Gauri.

SG scenes were gud especially d balcony scene. They didnot talk much but observed & absorbed more.

The idea 2 use paintings, especially d torn painting, 2 convey Gauri's feelings is quite unique.

Pls update asap
I'm very excited abt d next SG scene

thank you very much what can i say your feedback means so much to me glad you liked it i am going to update asap so stick with me if possible.

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

very nicely written...enjoyed it completely.👏each and every scene was beautifully described👍🏼

nice to see shiv and gauri getting close to each other.

finally shiv has also started caring about her😊

waiting for the next part

thank you very much glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: karna91

You truly have fantastic imagination and I liked the development in this chapter.....especially the sg confrontation....s-a confrontation....eagerly waiting for your next chapter....Don't keep it pending for long...do continue soon.....

thank you very much your feedback means alot will try to update soon . thanks again!

Originally posted by: Anuhia

Great update. LOved Shiv taking the first step.

Pls update soon. Thanks 4 the pm.

thank you very much