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reserved...Yay! me first,,
Am just gonna go and read it right away,,
btw, thnxs dear for the update..
reserved...Yay! me first,,
Am just gonna go and read it right away,,
btw, thnxs dear for the update..
Okay, Finally I finished reading it..
Jagruti, I must tell you that you are really fantastic and kinda unique with the developments in a relationship..I like the way you project the slight uncomfy feeling mixed with the eagerness and the initial hitches and awkwardness...You truly have quite a imagination in such things and I liked what you offered in this chapter...The developments are gradual and I liked their confrontation..Looks, like Mr.Rigid is going to make the first move this time, after all it's Gauri we are talking about and him talking the two pieces of painting...Well he is going to unite the pieces soon..So eagerly waiting for your next chapter....Don't keep me waiting for long as I can finally see the much awaited development in S-G's relationship..
Take care.
Luv atop
Okay, Finally I finished reading it..
Jagruti, I must tell you that you are really fantastic and kinda unique with the developments in a relationship..I like the way you project the slight uncomfy feeling mixed with the eagerness and the initial hitches and awkwardness...You truly have quite a imagination in such things and I liked what you offered in this chapter...The developments are gradual and I liked their confrontation..Looks, like Mr.Rigid is going to make the first move this time, after all it's Gauri we are talking about and him talking the two pieces of painting...Well he is going to unite the pieces soon..So eagerly waiting for your next chapter....Don't keep me waiting for long as I can finally see the much awaited development in S-G's relationship..
Take care.
Luv atop
Originally posted by: jagrutid
thank you for your kind comments, I'm really very pleased that you liked the chapter- personally i wasn't too convinced after i had written it but its all good if you enjoyed it. your right in saying shiv is about to make the first move and from how i see it he should too. He has neglected her enough so i think its his guilt after realizing how much she really loves him.
As for keeping you waiting😉 only until i manage to work out the next chapter. hopefully it will be soon. again thank you and your comments are greatly appreciated.
I was damn excited about this chapter yaar and I can't tell you how much I was waiting for S-G's developments and you quite lived upto my expectations, in fact going by your past writings, I had quite imagined the developments to be in this manner. And which in fact was gradual, I mean I can't expect a very sudden confession and then a lovey-dovey scene, not really seeing the story this is. It is quite natural and gradual what you portrayed and I was quite happy to see it come out this way. Yeah it is Shiv indeed who needs to make the first move as 5 years is a long time and I know it will take time from both sides to shun inhibitions, Shiv because he had been in lobe before and now he has realised what he did with gauri was wrong but still he needs to realize love for her. Gauri needs time because all these years, she has not even experienced a careful look from Shiv so to come close, she needs to first spend time with him and be assured that he loves her...
Yeah, please dear..Just write the next part soon, I will not be able to hold up for long😉...
No problem hun, You deserve all the thanks for etching another beautiful story...Loving it..
Thanks a ton for taking out time..
Luv atop
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