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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey nice update... do continue soon..
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nice......
well....i really can't understand that y prerna iz over reacting?
so itz anupam!.....nice.....poor gauri she was sooo scared wen anupam was making fun of her!
can't wait 2 see shiv and gauri's reaction wen they will meet each other!
continue soon!
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Nice part.Plz reveal the secret.Solve d mystery.Waiting 4 Shiv-Gauri's meeting
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lovely update.....luved Anupams part...awaiting for Shiv-Gauri meeting...plz update soon....
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r e s e r v e d .. m sorry Aroosa! will read soon!! 😃
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Hey all!!

tx 4 ur lovely rplies i jus hve 1 more exam n den hopeflly done so pllzzz bare wid me till dis its ovr n expect a gr8 upd8!tx alllllll sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
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plzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon.....have been waiting for the next for soo long..
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Nice one... loved it....
next shiv's entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HY GYZ!!! M sooooooooo (x 100) sryy I cudnt upd8 due to my stupid laptop bein broken 😭😭😭 (watr spilld on ih) well enuf da wait so eres da nxt part—hope u all like it n 4gve me! Lol read on n enjy!😛

Precap: The girls (Ippy nGauri) wundr bout Prenas behaviour n Ipy suggests 'mysteri 2 b discovrd'. Ippy takes Gauri 2 meet Anu who plys a prank on both.

Part 3:

IN GAURI'S HOUSE:

Da birds chirp in the sunlight while the soft breeze plays with da trees. Through a window, 2 girls r shown – 1 slightly paniky yet the other quiet nervous.

Ippy: GAuri! Kuch kahoo na kya pehen na hai…

She held up a pair of hangers each displayin a different suit

I: in mein se koonsa zayada acha hai? …(no response) hmm?

She scanned the wardrobe- or erather- she scanned the floor desperately searchin 4 a pair of perfect clothes 2 wear on this dy n nearly missd it until the 5th glance

I(holding it up): YESSS! Milgaya! Ok kaisa hai?

She asked but without ny reply she handed it ovr to Gauri, shoving hr in2 da bathroom 2 gt changd.

………………………………………………………………………..

I: Phew.

Gauri steps out of the bathroom n looks at ippy.

Jus den **HONK**HONK**

I: loh, aagay Anu. chalo

Da 2 girls go down 2 leave wen suddenly gauri stops n walks 2wrds Prena hu ws sittin on the couch

G: thnk u badi maa, apki waja se mujhe university miein jaane ka mooka mila

She bends down 2 take arshirwad n prena gives it n den dey leave.

ON THE WAY:

Ipp : *cough**cough*

Anu looks @ ippy hu gestures 2wrds gauri

Anu understands n says: Ipshita, aj gaari mein mein itni roshni kaha se arahy hain?

I: kaha se

A: Gauri g se

Gauri surprised: jee

A: ajj app bohot achi lag rahy hai ke sooraj bhi appko compliment deraaha hain app kay upar apni roshni de kar

G (blushin): thx u, yh sab ipshita ke waja se hai

I: haan, wo toh hain

Dey all laugh at dis

I: waise, hume gauri ka dehaan rakhna hoo ga,(lookin at gauri) kahi koi ispe latoo na ho jain

n dey laugh again

IN CLASS:

The teacher comes in n evry1 settles dwn. Gauri is introduced n told 2 sit nxt 2 an empty seat near the window. Gauri wundrs whos seat it is n ippy whus sittin behind her explains-

I: hes always 98% l8. kabhi time per nahi aata.

Anu (whus sittin nxt 2 Ippy turns 2wards gauri): gauri jee, app se ek darkwaist(wish) hain, app iss per koi jaadoo kar ke usse time per phoonch jaane ki aadat dalde warna Mehen uncle ke samne mujhe phir uski maafi ki darkwaish karni paregi.

LUNCH BREAK

Ippy n Anu r introducing Gauri 2 der oder friends which include Kavya, Angali, Prem, Mukti, Prachi, Neev and…(deese lot may nt cum in da story much due 2 it bein focusd on da main characterz but when needed, dey will make entry- srry people!! )

Anu: or jo abhi yaha nahi hai…

Suddenly sum1 comes 4rm behind n grabs Ippy with their big, muscular arms-pretendin 2 tke hr awy

I: AAAHHH

Evry1 startld

The person strts laughin n lets go of Ippy hu by now ws also giggling n hittin hm.

S: ok. Stop yaar. Itna bhi nahi daraya tumhe

I: haa daraya nahi balke tumne to meri jaan hi nikaal di

Evry1 stats laughin while gauri takes in the appearance of this new person. He ws vry handsome, hazel eyes, short black hair tht fell carelessly ovr his 4head,muscular shoulders, arms, and face feutures. She ws taken aback.

Person stops n looks at gauri n gauri suddenly realizin she ws starin looks awy

Anu: Shiv-Gauri, Gauri-Shiv

S (smiles n extends his hand): hi

G (refusing): hi

S: haath nahi milaogi

Prem: tumse haath milane ke bhijai wo namaste pasand karengi

S: really?

Anjali: really

Shiv lifts both hands n claps em 2gethr. Bendin a bit 4wards he says: namaste in a different accent n stands tall again.

G (😳): namaste

I: Shiv! U gyz! Kham-a-kham mein sharminda kar rahe ho isse.srry gauri

Gauri smiles n nods no as 2 sy 'don't mattr'

Anu: right! Waise shiv. Itni der se kyu aii ho, kaha the itny der se

Kavya: lemme guess, phir se kisi ko phasal liya

Neev: or kaam hi kya ata hain isse

S: not tru yaar, itna bhi nahi hoo mein

Mukti (😉teasingly): right, gauri ke saamne iski betzi karna, it hurts the reputation, kyun shiv?

S (throwin an imaginery dart): BULLES EYE!

Jus den the bell rings n all leave 4 da nxt class

Shiv n Gauir were in da same class dis time separate 4rm da rest of the frndship group.

'Good' thought shiv. 'Ab baat karne ka moka mile ga. Dosti bhi shayad…' but b4 he cn talk, gauri took hr seat n sat down wid only da front seat empty so shiv hd no choise but 2 sit in front of hr.

S (sat down n turns 2 speak): hi

G lookin up: hi

S: first dy?

G nods 'yes'

S: toh, kaisa tha

G: OK, I guess

S 😲: TUMHE ENGLISH BHI ATI HAI!

G bit offends looks up

S: nahi, um, mujhe laga ke shayad… u .no… namaste…

G looks down agen

Shiv ws jus bout 2 sy sumfin but the teacher interrupts

T: shiv, warning

S: sorry

n turns 2 da front. A few minuites l8r he turns around agen

S: waise,

G looks up agen

S: Im srry, agar tumhe meri kisi baat ka boora laga ho

G looks down agen n shiv asks

S: laga tha?

G looks up n replies: laga to tha

S: im srry

G: ur 4givd

S: Gr8! actually, mein to bas mazaq kar raha tha

G: jaanti hoon, Ipshita ne mujhe sab ke bare main bataya, especially u

S: really? Kya kuch bataya? All good I hope

G smiles n plys along wid hm: not really

S: hmmm… yane ke impression sahy nahi. Is ka matlab mujhe apka view apne bare mein badal na ho ga- make it good u see

G 😊: Good Luck

S 😊: thxs. Aur shuruwaat dosti se

He extends his hand out agen

G looks down at his hand n thinks. She smiles a sweet mischievous 😛smile n says: impression ke baad?

S (surprised n happy): challeng huh? Ok. Impresson ke baad

N wid dat he turns around n da day goes by

ON DA WY HOME (walkin)

I: toh sab kaise lage?

G: achay the sab, I rlly likd meetin them

I: experience kais tha? Hain na alag home tutor se?
G (😃): bohot alag. Itna alag ke poochoi hi mat. Yaha doste hain, madad milti hain, sab haste, mazak kar te and dey get along so well, mujhe aisa laga ke main sab ko bohot pehley se jaanti hoon

Den she looks down n saddns a little. Ippy notices n conforts hr

I: maza toh aya na. ab iss kushi ko jee bhar kar jeena or kabhi meri zaroorat pari toh, u no im alawyz dere

G smiles: jaanti, issi liyey toh aj yeh kushimujhe milhi hain. sab sirf tumhari wajha se

Dey both smile n hug

I: kal tayar ho jaana time se, Anu and me will collect u

G nods yes n dey part ways.

GAURIS HOUSE

G: auari enters n take arshirwaad 4rm Prena.

P: kaisa tha?

G: bohot acha laga. Sab bohot ache the.

P: bas ek baat gauri, kabhi kisi gher pe barhosa na kar na

G bit confusd: jee

P leaves da room

SHIVS HOUSE

Shiv enters da house n drops on da couch where dadi is sittin.

D: Shiv, ajj ka din kaisa tha,

………..

D: Shiv, dhaant parhi kya, subha to uta bhi nahi tha, lunch time main universisty gaya

………..

D: Shiv

S: >>>>MOAN>>>>

Nikilah enters

N *sigh*: kya Shiv, abhi hi aakar thak gaya, chal utt or kuch kaa le

S: bhook nahi hain

N wid dat he heads 4 hs room leavin both dadi n nikki behind

IN SHIVS ROOM

Its night time bt for sum reason shiv cant take gauri out of his mind.her sweet smile, calm voice, beautiful long hair but her challenging behaviour is wat caught hm most of gaurd. He likd it in a wy, no1 hd evr challngd hm so opnly b4 exept myb hs frendz bt she ws new and she ws tough. She ws some1 intrestin 2 shiv.a smile spread acrss hs face. He thought she was a fiction until he talked to hr. He had hardly ever met ny1 like hr b4. Thinking bout hr, he lies on his bed n tries to shut his mind by goin 2 sleep bt it dosnt work. He got up to do what he always does in this case, listen 2 music. He took out his ipod n plugd in da headphones. The first song on da list starts playin n 4 some reason it took his mind bck 2 gauri. (srry, cant think of a song so u cn fill da gap)

Now, as he listend 2 da song, he though it ws all fiction, dat gauri myb didn't even exsist n dat it ws all in hs head. He had 2 mke sure of wat ws tru so he decidd on a plan 2 prove himself of gauris exsistance. Da ending of the song also took his mind 2 an endin as he fell asleep n waitd 4 da night 2 finish.

Dats it 4 nw. hope its long n dat u gyz enjyd it. soooooooooooooooooooo srry 4 da delay evry1.

Plzzzz rply bck.thx 4 all ur support n cooperation wid me n 4 waitin 😡😡😡a long time! Hope itz rlly worth it!😃

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