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Posted: 14 years ago
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so der finaly marrd dats gr8!! lets c wot happens nxt so con soon!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hatred-The shade of love Part 4


Nikhila knocks at the door.
Gauri who is sleeping gets irritated:Who is this?
She:The door is not locked.Please come in.
Nikhila comes inside.Gauri wakes up quickly:Mom...you?
She smiles:Gauri...someone has come to see you.
Gauri thinks:Who is that?

Gauri comes to the front room.That was Kasturi.
Gauri is surprised:Kasturi!
K:I could not stop myself from visiting you.
Shiv:I knew that you will come to see your best friend's present condition.
Shiv whispers to her:Don't worry...Gauri is still pure.She can leave this house at any moment to get married to someone.I will be relieved.
Kasturi feels weird.
K:Now only you woke up?
S:Gauri is an ideal daughter in law who wakes up very late.
G:I could'nt sleep last night..because Shiv was snoring like hell.
Nikhila and Kasturi laugh.Shiv is embarassed.

Calling bell rings.
Shiv opens the door.Shiv is surprised:Robbie!
Robbie hugs Shiv.
All are surprised to see him.
N:Robbie...you are back from US?
R:Yes...today i landed.I thought i will give you a surprise.Hi Gauri....after a couple of fights...you both got married?Surprise.
Gauri and Shiv are dull.
Suddenly he sees Kasturi.
R:Who is this pretty woman?
G:This is Kasturi.My best friend.
R:Hi Kasturi..I'm Robbie...Shiv's cousin.
He extends his arm.Kasturi feels weird.Robbie shakes her hand without seeking her permission.He is holding her hand tightly.Shiv observes it.Kasturi takes her hand back.
K:Gauri...i'm going..bye...
N:Have your tea Kasturi.
K:No thanks Aunty...i will have it later.
Kasturi goes.Robbie's eyes are on her:Lovely!

Shiv takes Robbie to a room:Robbie..i know that you are a big casanova.But don't try to play with Kasturi's life.She is a nice girl.Don't hurt her.
Robbie has a naughty smile on his face.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
lol well nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
i really liked the Robbie-Kasturi angle introduced...interesting to see both SG n RK interaction...
Robbie the spoilt brat...wud luv to see how RK story develops further...
lovely update...
Pria
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
soon update and pm me plz whenever you update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww! shv carin 4 katsuri๐Ÿ˜ณ n gauri embarrsd shiv !LOL! dat aws gr8 so plzzz con soon!๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The hatred continues hehe..Liked the line by Shiv "Gauri is an ideal daughter in law who wakes up late" and then the apt reply by Gauri abt Shiv's snoring..Tit for tat..Both suit each other, who can combat the attitude but they....Nice part...It was nice to see Shiv concerned for Kasturei...Will be waiting for your next part.

I have a request if you don't mind, can you have the update longer please? Please please?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hatred-The shade of love Part 5





Kasturi brings a file to Shiv's house to see Gauri.The door is open.Nobody is there.
She hears someone singing "Tum ko bhi..."{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.She follows the music and reaches a room.She is surprised to see Robbie singing.
Robbie stops singing seeing her.He is surprised:Kasturi!
K:Actually..i came to see gauri.I work in her office.I came to return a file.
You sing very well.
He smiles:Thanks a lot.
He extends his arm ans shakes her hand softly.She felt comfortable.She smiles slightly.Slowly she removes her hand from his.
K:Ok..bye...
She turns back and walks forward.
Robbie sings:Kabhi alvida na kehna.....
She turns backs at looks at Robbie.Her eyes are sparkling.She gives him a cute smile and goes away.
Gauri sees Kasturi:Kasturi...you brought the file?
K:Yes.
She gives her the file.
K:Robbie sings well.Right?i heard him sing.
G:Ya...he is a singer.He does stage shows.Tomorrow there is a stage show.Are you coming with us to see the show?
K:Ah...
G:Come yaar...
K:Ok..
Robbie overhears it.He is thrilled:Kasturi is impressed by me..She is coming for my stage show.Wow!

Robbie's stage show...Robbie's etes searches for Kasturi.He sees her smiling at him.He is happy.He sings...all are jumping with joy...

Robbie goes backstage after the show.He is surprised to see Kasturi there.
R:Kasturi!
K:It was a nice show.You rocked.
R:Thanks a lot.You know..while singing you were in my mind.That's why i could sing well.
She feels strange.
R:I know that you can't believe it.But trust me...you helped me a lot unknowingly.
So you will come for all my stage shows to cheer me up.Right?
She smiles.

Robbie is standing in the rain.He sees Kasturi smiling at him.He goes near her.She disappears.He feels shy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Why no SG in this part?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
yaar no shiv gauri
but cool part
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