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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Sunshine Part 5



Gauri is sitting in the bed.Shiv enters the room.She is nervous.
Shiv goes to the other bed and pretends to be sleeping.Gauri is relived,but at the same time she is upset.

The next day… Vasu and her husband Vignesh are in the room.
Vi:Vasu,now Gauri is your daughter in law.You accept her.
She stares at him.Paayal enters the room with tea.Vasu smiles at her:She is my only daughter in law.
Paayal and Vignesh feel bad.

Vignesh goes near Gauri:Gauri,you are going to the temple.Right?Today you go by car.
G:Dad…I will go by walk.
Vi:No,you are our daughter in law now.You go by car.
Vasu overhears it and phones someone:I will give you a car's number.Hit that car.
Vasu laughs:Gauri,don't think that you can live as Nanda house's daughter in law.

Gauri sees Rahul and Paayal entering the car.
G:Its ok.I will go by walk.
Gauri goes out.

Rahul's and Paayal's car is hit by a lorry.

Vasu sees Gauri entering the house.
V:You are back.I did'nt hear the car entering our compound.
G:I went by walking.Rahul bhaiyya and Paayal bhabhi only went by car.
Vasu is shocked.

Rahul opens his eyes in the hospital:Where is Paayal?Is she ok?
He is depressed.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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actually the story has just started i mean i wud love some sg senes so that we can see how story proceeds in bw the concept u hav taken is really different thats wat i liked the most so in next update hopping for more sg scense :-))))))))))))))))))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hey dea so sorry for commenting l888 well lovly starting i like it plz update soon
saba :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Sunshine Part 6












The doctor:Don't worry.Paayal is sleeping.She is alright.
Rahul:I want to see her.
Dr:Now you can't get up and go.
R:No,I have to.
Rahul goes out in search of Paayal.He sees her in a room.He goes and sits near her.He touches her.She opens her eyes:Rahul!Are you alright?
He smiles:Yes.
They both are happy to see each other.

After some time….Paayal touches Rahul's wound and cries.
Suddenly Vasu,Vignesh,Shiv and Gauri enter the room.
V:Are you ok?
R:Yes.
V:Since Gauri entered our house,problems started.
Gauri weeps.
S:Its not because of Gauri.Anything can happen to anyone.Its in God's hands.

Rahul and Paayal get discharged from the hospital.
S:We have to celebrate this occasion.Let us have a party tomorrow.
V:Sure!

Paayal is looking out through the window:What we faced is a big danger.Is it the beginning of obstacles?
She is scared.

Shiv is searching for a shirt in the cupboard.He is really irritated.
G:What happened Shiv?
S:I'm not able to choose a shirt.
Gauri chooses a shirt and gives him the shirt.
S:Your selection is good.
She smiles.
S:I will wear this for tonight's party.
She smiles.When he is about to leave the room,
G:Shiv!
He turns back.
G:You did'nt say which saree should I wear.
He smiles.He opens his box and takes a cover.
S:I bought a saree for you.I wanted to give you a surprise.
He gives it to her.She smiles.


Party…

Rahul and Paayal drink from the same glass.
All the couples go to the dance floor.Rahul and Paayal dance.
Paayal sees Shiv and Gauri standing simply.
P:Shiv and Gauri are not dancing.
Rahul looks at them.He goes to them:Now also you both are shy?Go and dance..
G:No…please…
R:No excuse…
He pushes them to the dance floor.They both dance together.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update! a long update wud be fine as it helps to keep the momentum...the stories have just started, n it is goin on the right track...u have balanced well between all the stories n characters....
n also liked the concept of a picture update...gud work!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmmmm gurl good and cute convo bw sg "sighhh"

heheheh and log sahi kaehte hain jesa karo gay wesa bharo gay........................kyun sahi kaha naa............:-))))))))))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Sunshine Part 7



Gauri is looking at the star lit sky.Shiv goes near her:What are you looking at?
G:Stars ae telling something.
He laughs.
G:Its not a joke.I really think so.
S:Yes,stars are telling you how much I love you.
Gauri looks at him.He has a naughty smile on his face.He goes.

Vasu gets the professional killer's call.
V:How dare you ask me to give you money?I meant to kill Gauri.But you tried to kill my son.Luckily he escaped.Ok...i will give you money.But do not call me again.
Vasu turns back and is shocked to Paayal there.
P:I'm shocked.You only planned that accident?I never expected this much from you.
I will tell this to Rahul.
Vasu is tense.

Paayal goes to the front room where all others were standing.
P:I want to disclose a horrible secret to you all.
All are eagerly waiting to hear it.
P:Our accident was somebody's plan.Her idea was to kill Gauri.But we only faced the accident.
Rahul:Who is behind it?
P:Mom!
All are shocked.
Rahul slaps her.Vasu smiles.
P:Rahul!
R:How could you think that my mom could do something like that?I admit that she is against Gauri.But she can't do a murder.
P:I can understand your feelings.Its not easy to believe it.But…it's the truth.
R:Is there any proof?
P:No
Vasu pretends to cry:Enough!I loved Paayal like my daughter.But she is cooking up stories…how could you Paayal?
R:Mom,don't worry.We trust you.
He stares at Paayal:apologize to my mom.
P:I have not done any mistake.Then why should i?
R:I say apologize.
P:Sorry,I can't.
R:Then leave this house.
All are shocked.
P:Rahul!
Rahul turns back.She goes and takes her luggages.
Vignesh:Paayal!Don't go..
R:Let her go dad
Vi:She must be having some misunderstandings…we will make her understand.Don't be stubborn Rahul.
R:Let her go…
Shiv:Poonam..wait…
P:No…
She leaves the house.Vasu has a wicked smile on her face.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
so shweet of shiv hehehe Yes,stars are telling you how much I love you.
awwwwwwwwwww nice one yr but feel sorry for payal................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sunshine Part 8







Rahul's leg slips and he falls down.His hand is slightly injued.He bandages himself.
A flashback scene comes to his mind:
His hand is injured.Payal bandages his hand.He looks at her deeply.


Rahul and Paayal see each other on the road.
Rahul goes near her:Paayal…if you apologize,you can stay in our house again.
P:No thanks Rahul.I'm sure that I have not done anything wrong.So I can't…
Rahul is dull.He enters his car.Its raining heavily.Her shawl is almost flying in the cold wind.She catches it.

Shiv tells Gauri:What happened in Rahul and Paayal's life is very unfortunate.
G:Yes.
S:I will reunite them at any cost.
G:You are so nice Shiv.You are always thinking of uniting lovers.But you are not able to be happy with your beloved.
Shiv is sad.Then he smiles slightly.
S:I'm happy when I'm with you.So if you don't love me also,I feel happy.
G:Who told you that I don't love you?I have started loving you Shiv.
He is surprised:Really?
She smiles and holds his arms towards her:Yes.
Shiv smiles.

Vasu falls down stairs.She is on bedrest.Gauri looks after her very well.
V:I was so cruel to you.But you are the one who is looking after me now.
G:You were not cruel to me Mom.
V:I was.I only planned that accident to kill you.
Gauri is shocked.
They hear a voice:Mom!
They see Rahul at the door.Vasu is shocked.
R:That means what Paayal said is true.I deserted her for you.I hate myself for that.

Sujal walks in the rain:What did I do to Paayal?
Somebody holds his arms.He is surprised to see Paayal.
P:When I was upset you holded my hand.Now I see you depressed.So I'm holding your hand.
Sujal's tears fall down.
P:What happened Rahul?
He cries:I'm sorry Paayal.Without knowing the truth I hurt you a lot.
She feels upset.
Rahul takes her home.
All are happy to see her back.
V:I'm happy that Paayal is back.Rahul and Paayal's reunion is a happy news.
R:Stop your drama.
Vasu is upset.
G:This is not mom's drama..otherwise she would not have confessed her mistake.
P:Yes Rahul.Mom has changed a lot.
Paayal and Gauri go and hug Vasu.
Shiv,Vignesh and Rahul smile.


The end
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Great.I liked the ending.But I think the story is too short.Anyways my favourite character is Payal and I think she is the main lead.Anyways loved it.
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