FF:'birha'chapter 8 -pg 14 (conclude! 29/04/10) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
very emotional and touching story . like shivs character a lot giving gauri an opportunity to fullfill her dreams thats what marriage is all about letting each other gow and prosper , at the same time finding happiness in each others happiness. looking forward for next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: stranger in us

very emotional and touching story . like shivs character a lot giving gauri an opportunity to fullfill her dreams thats what marriage is all about letting each other gow and prosper , at the same time finding happiness in each others happiness. looking forward for next update



hiya, firstly thanks for reading..ive got to say that you are one of my readers who has been with me since shiv ki gauri and thats something i really appreciate. the fact that you take out the time to read my ffs i guess its a pleasure to write for such friends. as for the ff its self..you know what a few people have discribed it as emotional but then..its something i didnt quite think of when i had the idea. for me it was more just a concept of two peoples love for each other even after time apart. As for shi your hes going to be the quinesential husband in all this..more of him in the comming chapters.thanks again. jagruti😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
OMG yaar datx simply emotional u know wht i felt reading ur update dat em watching BT serial kasam se yaar mind blowing i luved it the concept is too gud n very very veryyy....unique waise bhi ur fan fictions r just superb i hav'nt read unki shiddat's epilogue yet no tym yaar very very bzyyy but cud'nt resist to read ur new ff datx y finally came n read yaar SG will reunite soon na 😭 u hav written so many things in this update it's flawless n this update is my fav update it's so different well as always i want u to reunite SG asap u know na i can't see my SG like this 😳😳😳 n once again amazing FF continue soon but i think i won't b able to read it soon lol πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
wow with another ff
just reading and add comment later
when ever u update plz pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

OMG!!!many things on 1 update...WONDERFUL!!!:-)

waiting 4 more........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry guys for the delay but im planning to update this friday god knows what time but lets say i will find a slot on friday just for you guys!
thanks for waiting patiently and thank you soo much for your comments will get to replying to some later but ive read all of them and you guys are the best !! thanks, jagruti

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

sorry guys for the delay but im planning to update this friday god knows what time but lets say i will find a slot on friday just for you guys!
thanks for waiting patiently and thank you soo much for your comments will get to replying to some later but ive read all of them and you guys are the best !! thanks, jagruti

waiting for ur update😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid



you know what you are far too kind!!!πŸ˜ŠπŸ€— thank you sooo much!!!!!! what more can i say then its a pleasure writing for you and to tell you the truth its become a complulsion of mine. my brain throws out certain sences which i have to put into words and then from there it becomes an ff...just develops only because i know you guys are there to read for me other wise god knows...so moral is that you..and all my readers are the reason for my ffs so credit goes to you guys.😊 really makes me happy to know that you enjoy my ffs!!! as for having one more ff..this idea was like taking up all the space in my mind so it had to go on paper..or thread or whatever..πŸ˜†
thats the thing..you say hardwork...really it isnt..i just write and the fact is that its not hard..its probably harder trying to understand all those typos at your end.πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜› And my ffs make you cry...??????? im sorry..you see they are ment to be entertaning...they should put a smile on your face not make you cry!!o no..ok i guess there emotion although i didnt know it made you guys cry..sorry heh!!!heyyyy jagruti i mean to say is when u create a very emotional n touching scene between our shivgauri r sauri n if dont get cry then it means there is no emotion in that part.but u make me smile with cute little scenes like in ur other ff unki shiddat se where our gauri says "main fail hogayi" was soooooo cute n brings a smile on my face actually i laughed a lot while reading that part.i couldn' small my laught.n when there is a part where our shivgauri gets apart 4rm each other the way u show their emotions through ur words make me cry.they r simply words but still we can feel the emotion which proves u tobe a best ff writer.so its gud to get tears sometimes rightπŸ˜†
i am to like write so my reader can picture the scene..never intended to make them cryπŸ˜† but you see i want you to see the picture i have in my mind and to hear that..you can imagine it is an achivement for me!!!😊 thanks.. as for ideas no..i dont know where they come from..i guess they are just versions of shiv and gauri kapoor that i would love to see..and so thats where the idea develop from. and as for a new shiv kapoor in each ff...no i dont think so..i think shiv kapoor is always the same..just his surroundings that add change..not sure again it might be just versions of his character that i would love to read about..love to see. as for shashank..he is of irlanvance when you have shiv kapoor around do you not thinkπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
the break in there relationship as shiv said he has not distanced him self..just let go a little..😊but still iam scared because of this so called space which they both gave themselves to each other😲 as for gauri..well she never changes in any of my ffs..and even in this one..i guess the core character is the same as gauri in SKG..ANSOONI..or even that little bit of that was in unki shiddat...shiv i guess like you said does form a sort of change..
as for the end of my other ffs i guess shiv ki gauri was an hard one to part off with and unki shidaat was just so i could write this ff but im hoping you will enjoy not just enjoy yaar ,iam enjoying it more than the word" ENJOY" 😳😳😳this one...thank you for sticking with me now in my 4th ff!!!!..will stick to ur ff's until u urself stop writing which i dont want to happen at any cost πŸ˜³πŸ˜›hoping to update soon..thanks jagruti
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will be waiting 4r ur next part now😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

sorry guys for the delay but im planning to update this friday god knows what time but lets say i will find a slot on friday just for you guys!
thanks for waiting patiently and thank you soo much for your comments will get to replying to some later but ive read all of them and you guys are the best !! thanks, jagruti

u take ur tym πŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi Jagruti!!😊😊😊
im back once again..just read this FF..wow first thing that comes 2 my mind is u r an excellent writer.😳😳😳.just like all ur FF's this is also a wonderful one..
Once again u made me to fall in luv with shiv😳😳😳.The character of shiv is very sweet..huw he cares for his wife😳 Gauri -she is the same character,very soft..
Hope the two will meet soon..& shashank ,dunno he will be gud or not..but hope he will remain good.
i luv that u hav included anupam-very gud person.

You are very talented in expressing emotions😊😊i feels like im watching really..u are v ery talented in writingπŸ˜›πŸ˜³
continue ASAp but i will leave my comments late coz im very busy with skool works..
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jeni😳





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