FF:GauriShiv-Saathi re..Updtd Pg:20 10thOct09 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Peepo

very good, but I will concentrate more on Kuch Pal... before joining here.

oh yes yes,,no prob polly sweety...im happy wid u being wid KP nd i luv u! bcuz of u...KP has really bcum popular thnx darlin!
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ok gyz.... here it iz...i've tried my hand on it hope u lyk it
1st part:
A warm nd breezy mornin. Birds chirping as if singing a song 2 wake every1 up all over. Gauri gtz up. Seeing da bryt..sunny..nd warm mornin nd opening up da windows of the rooms of deir bangalow....a smyl covers her face "Jaane kyun aisa lagraha hai k aaj kuch hone wala hai....kuch acha....koi milne wala hai....koi acha"
Shiv iz den seen. He is ready 2 go 2 da office Has breakfast nd zoom zoom in2 da car. He switches the radio on, the song "yeh raasta hai kehraha ab mjhse milne ko hai koi kahin ab mjhse...........yoonhi chala chal raahi"
is being playd. his mood shiftz frm gud 2 even bttr. Reaches da office.
Kaaya 2 gauri: DiDi, bst of luck!
both the sis hug
GAURI:thnx
cmz da reply frm big sis gauri
GAURI: baba, mien chalti hoon
SHASHANK: gud luck beta,(he kisses her on hr forehead), waise tum jaa kaise rahi ho? driver aagaya?
GAURI: oh...woh mien samjhi u already calld da driver
SHASHANK: oho, gauri, wait... mien bulata hoo
*gauri has dun her fashion designing course nd wz in search of a job...which she got.Now..she had 2 grab the bggst projct 4 an indian fashion designer ....it wz 4 designing clothes of india's bggst upcoming fashion show whoz theme wz "desi grl" nd she wz very eager 2 do it. INDIAN CLOTHES WERE 2 B DESIGNED FOR MODELS...THAT TOO AT AN INTERNATIONAL LEVEL!...sort of a dream projct fr her*
nd guess wat!!?? she gtz selectd fr da same!!....yup...GAURI SHASHANK MEHTA wz 2 design clothes fr india's fashion week show nd plus, she wz made the manager 2 organyz everything (the show) along wid da MAHEN KAPOOR group of industries as dey were partners......gauri'z company of designing nd kapoor group of industries were partners....major subj wz deirs
Now gauri has 2 go 2 her Mahen uncle's office. MAhen nd shashank r frnz. Gauri reaches da office. Sees Shiv. Greets him
GAURI: namastey!
he smylz baq nd utters a sweet namastey 4 reply
GAURI: ji woh..mien..
SHIV: ji jaanta hoon , aap yhaan ROSARIAN FASHION ki taraf se ayeen hain
GAURI (Smylz): ji....ap tho aise baat karrahe hain jaise pehli baar karrahe hon
SHIV: kaam k silsilay mien tho pehli baar!πŸ˜‰
gauri iz goin 2 say sum thin
MAHEN: haan haan kaam k silsilay mien ayee ho aur hum se milne nhi ayeen!
tumse bht shikayat hai...aisi kaisi beti ho...itne waqt se jaanti ho tumhare dad (points his fingr 2 himself) ka office idhar hai phir bhi nhi aati.....shukar karo kaam ka bahana mil gaya...wrna pata nhi
GAURI(Interrupts): arrey nhi uncle mien...kuch dino se sochri thi par...
MAHEN: uncle bolti ho...aur uncle samajhti bhi ho....mjhe dad bolo beta...aur samjho bhi!
(hugz her)
all dis while...shiv is smylin nd watchin. den shiv introduces her 2 some man nd sayz tht now dis man is going 2 guide her. All's well till tht tym. Bt aftr shiv goes, the man starts lukin at gauri wid a bad eye nd bad sense nd intentions. She is scared nd embarassd
GAURI: ab mien chalti hoon....kal aaoongi
THE man, his name is dhruv,
DHRUV: (whisprin)...aaj tho jaa rahi ho...kal nhi jaane denge!
bus....i hve da story....bt frst i wanna read the repliez fr dis....gimme ur repliez gyz plz........cmnt nd tell me where improvemnt is needed theek hai?πŸ˜•πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice updatee shoo gauri n shiv knows each otherr kool eagerly waitin 4r ur nxt update plz do continue asap plzz
saba
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hahaha looks like Dhruv is gonna be bashed black and blue by Shiv soonπŸ˜‰
great start hun.... waitin for their marriage now😍☺️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivgauri

hahaha looks like Dhruv is gonna be bashed black and blue by Shiv soonπŸ˜‰
great start hun.... waitin for their marriage now😍☺️

hehe....ltz c hopefully...............thnk u v much kuku nd saba
luv
reeno
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow........Reeno great!!!!.πŸ‘................ plze continue.................waiting 4 the nxt part !!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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FAB! tht ws soooooooooooooo good. varun ......... bad intension....... shiv 2 da rescu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳well ,con ASAP!πŸ‘πŸ‘
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gauri wz at her house kaaya cmz KAAYA: arey didi aap aa gaye GAURI: haan kaya im baq u tell me how wz ur day? KAAYA: myn wz really gud.....u tell me...did all go well?? howz mahen uncle?? GAURI: hes very fyn nd sweet same as before....helpful nd dear KAAYA: itz been many dayz since we met them..?? haina? GAURI: RYT KAAYA: nd yh hows shiv bhayya?
GAURI: yh...he is also the same...nt changd...v dint really talk as both of uz were bzy in our wrk
KAAYA: di...aap ho aise bolre ho jaise aap shiv bhayya se pehle bht baat krte they...ive neva seen u both talk except fr a simple namastey!
GAURI: no itz nt dat...bt itz jst wat shud v talk bout nd perhapz y shud v talk? i mean v r nt....
KAAYA: luk at me....ive also met him da same no of tymz as u hve bt still i talk 2 him...nd
gauri interrupts her
GAURI: kaaya...jst dont bring urself in2 dis topic...u can talk 2 everybdy..jst everybdy in dis wrld about ANYTHING! u keep talkin nd talkin nd chirpin nd chirpin...1ce u start...dere has 2 b a whole lot of struggle 2 stop u!
KAYA: am i spposd 2 take dis in my stride??!!??
gauri...realizing she said dis whole big sentence ina single breath..
GAURI: well yh ofcrse!πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
den gauri starts thinkin bout sumthin....dere is a strange silence in da room...gauri dznt feel so gud as she is thinkin bout...DHRUV...
KAYA: di...wat kiya hua?
GAURI: kuch nhi
KAYA: di mien janti hoon ap mjhse kuch chupare ho.......btao
GAURI tellz her da dhruv thing nd dat she wz uncomfortable wid him
KAYA: arey tho didi...go nd tell mahen uncle
GAURI: arrey kaya nono....im nt gonna tell anything 2 him...y shud i tell him bout my insecurity?... i mean hes a bzy guy lyk our father nd tellin him such babysum things wont b gud...nd i will nt at all feel comfortable tellin him
KAYA: den tell baba
GAURI: oh no no neva...he'll tell mahen uncle nd get insecure himself nd the same thing will go on.....chor na kaya...itz nt a BD (big deal)
KAYA: ummmmmm...dennn....oh yh tell shiv!
GAURI: kaya?? cmon...r u in ur senses...vr nt tht close...nd y will i distrb him fr dis?
KAYA: bt u hve 2 do sumthin....ok do 1 thing....ek aur din dekho...if tht dhruv man misbehavez again......or dz anything lyk staring also...den u wont i kno...bt i myself will tell shiv bhayya! ok?
nxt scene
shiv iz in da office
gauri enters
frst sees hre nd dere....nd den sees shiv,, he is already lukin at her she sayz "hi"
shiv utters a :"hello" nd wndrs da reason bhind such a behaviour of gauri wyl entering...as if lukin fr sum1
SHIV: u entrd in a strange way...r u lukin fr sum1?
GAURI: oh nono..ofcrse nt....umm did kaya cm hre?
SHIV (smylz):umm...noo
GAURI: acha..tho dhruv hai?
SHIV: i dnt kno...he is responsible 4 u....go nd c whether he is dere fr u or nt
GAURI: kiya matlab?
SHIV: i mean...c whether he came fr ur help or nt.......nd lisen..........
gauri trnz
SHIV: y were u askin me bout kaya in such a suspicious manner?? was she 2 come hre??
GAURI?\:umm..no..i dnt kno.....umm...can i move fr wrk now?
SHIV:yh sure dear
nxt scene:
shashank nd mahen r seen sittin in a restaurant nd talkin wid each havin a cup of coffee in hand
SHASHANK: tu theek keh raha hai....par sunn....yeh baat tho ghar mien krne wali hai...tu mjhe yhaan public place mien kyun le aya? dekh na ab yeh log pix khechenge nd newspaper mien kuch na kuch ayega....nd den aftr sum dayz...k humare beech mien alag alag feilds hone k baawajud,,,bzness rivalry hai!
MAHEN: tho yaar tjhe yeh media waalon se kiya farq parta hai? jo likhna hai inhe likhne de...humien pata hai humare beech mien kitni dosti hai aur kaisi hai
SHASHANK: haan yeh tho hai..
dey giv a hi5 2 each othr
SHASHANK: tho tu kab aara hai...yeh newz ki official announcemnt k liye mere ghar??
MAHEN: soon yaar!
baq in da office
dhruv enterz
kaaya nd shiv r watchin frm bhind...thru a blind
SHIV:kaaya...mien keh raha hoon na...dhruv experiencd hai..nd wid many grlz he has dun projcts kbhi kisi ne complain nhi ki...woh aisa kch nhi karsakta...i kno bout gauri aur is hi liye miene usey 1 innocnt aadmi k under rakha hai
KAAYA: den datz gud...par dekhne mien kiya harj hai? ltz c...btw jo maasoom dikhte hain..woh hote nhi!
shiv makez a face raising his eyebrows as if 2 say he is impressd!
dhruv cmz in gauri is sittin on the table wrkin
he goes bhind her....she is a bit concious..bt ignores
her hair r cming in frnt wyl she is wrkin...he cmz nd slightly moves her hair bhind her ears
gauri immediately gtz up
GAURI: yeh kiya karrahe hain aap
SHIV is very very angry seeing dis
he is entering when when kaya stops him
SHIV: kaya? miene dekhliya...mien usey nhi choroon ga tum sahi keh rahi theen
KAAYA:sshhhh...
KAYA: di ussey baat karrahi hain...she'll fyt...hope fully,,,,dnt go ryt now
dey start seeing again
GAURI: aap pagal tho nhi ho gyae? yeh kiya karrahe hain aap?
he is gttin closr nd closr
GAURI: dekhiye ruk jaaeeye...nhi tho...
DHRUV: nhi tho kiya? aaj tho mahen sir bhi nhi aye...shiv sir bhi nazar nhi aaye....koi unn se bara hai hi nhi...kiya karogi?
gauri has tears in her eyz now....nd dere is a dead end...he cmz nd gtz hold of hr....nd cmz frwrd jst as he is about 2.....
sum1 cmz...trnz dhruv 2ward him nd slaps him
nd yes...u r ryt...thtz r shivy boy!
DHRUV: sirr..sir aap?
SHIV: haan mien....aj mien nazar nhi aaya tho socha k kuch bi krsakte ho??
DHRUV:sir...woh tho mien...yeh madam k...baal
gauri givz him a stern luk wyl she cried...nd den again lux down nd starts cryin
kaya cmz nd hugs her
KAYA: chalo di...inhe shiv bhayya hi dekhlenge...
dhruvthinkz: "shiv bhayya?? yeh gauri k behen k shiv bhayya hain? yeh log bhai behen tho nhi hain??...par shayad jaan te hain 1 doosre ko...shit wat hve i done
shiv slapz him again as 2 get him baq 2 his senses again
DHRUV:sry sir
SHIV: get out............u r fyrd!!!
DHRUV: no sir plz...bt i
SHIV: mjhe kuch nhi sunna.....leave dis office ryt hre ryt now...tum jaise logon ki wajah se humare office ka naam bht buri tarah barbaad ho jaye ga....shukar karo dad nhi they...aggar unhe pata chalta k tumne gauri k saath........get out!...wo tho tmhien........
DHRUV: bt sir...
SHIV: out i said!!!!!!! nd he pushes him outsyd
SHIV 2 GAURI: gauri.....im really sry on his behalf...mien bht sharminda hoon
GAURI: aap kyun sharminda hore hain? iss mien aap ki koi ghalti nhi hai...par aap mahen uncle ko kuch mat btaaiye ga plz
SHIV: im sry gauri lkin btana pare ga cz miene dhruv ko fyr krdiya
GAURI: kiya? fyr krdiya?
KAYA: acha kiya!
shiv smylz along wid kaya
mahen nd shashank r standin dere itself
dey ask as 2 wat happnd nd shiv tellz dem everything...gauri hugz shashank nd den mahen hugz gauri
END!
plz gyz...do cmnt...nd suggst also yaar plz plz tell me anything nd everything u feel
dis iz all fr u gyz so it wont b any gud if i do all dis 4 u nd u only dnt lyk it so...plz leave me ur cmnt/rep asap!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lyk it no wayy luved it yaaar awesummmmm update asap plzz
saba
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sweet of u saba!!!!luv u... yup gyz i need dis encouragemnt of urz!
( i dint say thnx)<------(4 saba)*πŸ˜‰
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