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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
thanks for your feedback sonia...really appreicate the feedback..and im happy to know my ff reminds you of old times...shiv and gauri....πŸ˜ƒ an dead happy that you liked the update!!!! will update soon...jagruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehehehe shiv is so cute! nice part...pls do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehehehe shiv is so cute! nice part...pls do update soon

Thanks for reading and commenting kuku...glad you liked the update..shiv being all cute..lol.. well yey..i will update soon..busy ready your fanfiction at the moment.πŸ˜›..its brilliant..cant get my head out of it... anyways thanks again

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

hehehehe shiv is so cute! nice part...pls do update soon

Thanks for reading and commenting kuku...glad you liked the update..shiv being all cute..lol.. well yey..i will update soon..busy ready your fanfiction at the moment.πŸ˜›..its brilliant..cant get my head out of it... anyways thanks again

jagruti


hehehe thank you so much for readin it hun... i am so glad u like it😳😳
waitin to read the next part to this fanfic... hope u clear the phone person mystery soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehehe thank you so much for readin it hun... i am so glad u like it😳😳
waitin to read the next part to this fanfic... hope u clear the phone person mystery soon😳

no need for thanks your fanfiction post is great!...yey and as for the phone thing im planning on revealing all soon...πŸ˜‰.
.....jagruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

hehehe thank you so much for readin it hun... i am so glad u like it😳😳
waitin to read the next part to this fanfic... hope u clear the phone person mystery soon😳

no need for thanks your fanfiction post is great! hehehee thanx hun...yey and as for the phone thing im planning on revealing all soon...πŸ˜‰.thank GodπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
.....jagruti

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jagrutid

Shiv Ki Gauri

Chapter 7

Dadi: 'aap dono kya bate kar rahe hai'yey koi vakt hai.

Dadi's comment both prateek and Shiv to take a look at their watch. It was 11.30pm.

Dadi: Shiv aaj tumari shaadhi huee hai aur tum yaha bhet kar bate kar rahe ho''

Shiv: 'Dadi'hum woh gauri ke bare mein baat kar rahe the'

Gauri: ( yeh gauri kaha se aagay!???LOL!!🀣 )'mein janti hoon par tum ne vakt dekha hai'yey saab bate toe baad mein ho sakti hai'

Prateek: 'dadi theek khe rahi hai shiv, aur kal subhe kaam..woh bhi early in the morning so I should go.' With that prateek gets up from the sofa ready to leave.' oh yeh 'gauri ko remind kar na'kal appointment hai uska..'

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Prateek passes the phone to gauri and smiles 'shiv ka phone..'

Gauri:'mere leiye'

Prateek: 'aur kis ke leiye hoga..lo' Gauri takes the phone.

Shiv: 'prateek kehra tha..ke appointment acha raha'good, aur this moring kuch kaam Agayatha is leiye hamari bate puri nahi hue, vaise jo drink tumne muje diya tha..coffee (OH NO!! AB KAYA HOGA GAURI???)woh agar tumhe yaad ho toe '.muje chai chayetee..(yes we no shiv ji)

Shivs tone of voice was fairly serious which enforced the nervousness in gauri. Vaise coffee kafee ache thi..magar galti toe tumne ki'is leiye saasha bhi meiligi. ( sazaa!!😲oh no ! bach ke rehna gauri!!)πŸ˜‰

Gauri: 'ji..??'

Shiv: kya saasa hogi' voh tumhe mein ghar ake bataoonga

Gauri kept silent' she was slightly embarrassed as well as scared, she was going all nervous just by listing to shiv's voice.

Shiv: ab mein rakhtaa hoon,'meri baat yaad rakhna ' ( bulhaane wala kaun hain shiv??)😍

Shiv puts the phone down and sitting in his office smiles to himself on how innocent gauri really was and how much his presence effected her behaviour.( yeh, it soon get ovr) There was that one sweet side to it but also a worry that what Samar did to Gauri has effected her badly'what would it take for her to recover???( ummmmmmmmmmm......... i dont no... u think.....😍.)

WOW! Amazing part as all ways jag( ill call u this 4 nick name, hope u dont mind) rlly touchin. plzz do con asap wid da same length upd8.gud luck!πŸ₯³
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW! Amazing part as all ways jag( ill call u this 4 nick name, hope u dont mind) rlly touchin. plzz do con asap wid da same length upd8.gud luck!

Thanks for you feedback!!! starfan.shrk .. yey i dont mind the jags thing very much used to it...by the way ..loved the way you

Annotated the bits that you liked!😊..thanks for reading..and i hope my following chapters can live up to your expectations..will update soon thanks again....jagruti

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very well thought and written plz update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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"very well thought and written plz update soon."
thanks for the comment...glad you liked it !!!!!😊 im a bit busy at the moment but thinking of updating sometime today...uk time... anyways thanks again really appreciate the feedback.... jagruti
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