FF:Shiv Ki Gauri chapter 32 P74 conclude! - Page 24

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kb_war

plz plz..................................................................................................update it.

hey sorry for making you wait so long but updated it now..and ansooni dastaan soon
actually planning on update that in bulk chapters cuz its only a short ff... but than k you
for waiting... jagruti
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri

wow another mystery.. and this is soo intriguing! waiting for more... continue soon
loved the whole mangal sutr scene and Shiv is so in love with her😳
great part hunπŸ˜ƒ

aw thanks for reading and commenting kuku. really glad you liked the
update..and yey shiv..lol i suppose hes fallen for her...😊
glad you liked the mangal sutra scene..enjoyed writing it too.. once again
thank you for waiting so patiently....really appreciate your feedback. jagruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: atop

hey dear,
hmmm well everything abt them is sweet,be theri conversation,lil moments,teasing by shiv or just a silence between them so was wen they were in car with shiv giving cute lil smiles to gauri.......something tensing is on it's way i guess by aolok's end.....donno chalo will wait for the mystery to reveal in later parts....haha i love gauri fumbling and shiv being all evil and etasing her..he surely knows how to give her goosebumps which infact is good........the whole mangalsutra scene was cute and simple ...with the office person totally confused for MR.SHIV chnaged his expression immediately after seeing garuei after all he's head over heels for her.........loved their night lil moment wen he comes close...poor gauri wanted anpther repeat but she surely needs tow ait for it's late from her end hehe................aha it would be nice seeing her missing shiv now great..............and also calling him........maybe she'll just give him a tight hug on his return...well am i rushing it??? chalo take your time re......abh wow mindblowing ,,,we goona have their honeymoon part yippppppeeeeeeeeee somthing am just waiting for..thanks for telling in this part...wow my request answered hehe...........hmm now we'll ahve some really romantice scenes in there but b4 that we ahve a mystery to solve...........

take care dear and am wanting more now..please update soon....



luv atop

hey thanks for reading and commenting..and as usual love reading your comments. glad you liked the update...and as for shiv and gauri they are cute well i try to make them cute πŸ˜† want them to stay like that to. yey your right mystry solving on the way..the thing is i think i was kind of missing the whole suspence thing so really had to put one in there..😊 but im sure its a good thing. yey the mangalsutra sene glad you liked it..enjoyed writing it too, and the whole shiv teasing thing..i dont think he can help it😊..and yey gauri missing shiv while hes away i supose she going to have to...😊 but then you will have to wait and see what happensπŸ˜‰ ...and yes there honeymoon but your right..theres a whole mystry to solve before that..
anyways u will have to wait and see... thank you for lovely comment really appeciate your feedback
will try and update soon.. jagruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
oooh....wow jagu!!!!
suprb updt...well...i kno u delayd it a bit bt yaar u gave us a tremendous nd lengthy updte aftrwards which really cvrs up the delay....nd v do undrstand yaar...it sure takes tym 2 updt...nd plus...dere iz other wrk...i totally undrstand bt u still made out a lot of tym nd did it wndrfully!
hatz off 2 u!
i LUV da way u portray shiv nd gauri
keep it up
luv
reeno
btw thnx fr da pm...plz pm me b4 doin da nxt updt
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

oooh....wow jagu!!!!

suprb updt...well...i kno u delayd it a bit bt yaar u gave us a tremendous nd lengthy updte aftrwards which really cvrs up the delay....nd v do undrstand yaar...it sure takes tym 2 updt...nd plus...dere iz other wrk...i totally undrstand bt u still made out a lot of tym nd did it wndrfully!
hatz off 2 u!
i LUV da way u portray shiv nd gauri
keep it up
luv
reeno
btw thnx fr da pm...plz pm me b4 doin da nxt updt

hey thanks for reading and commenting..and yey you the know the feeling
when you want to update but theres no time at all...not enough hours in the day..😊
but again thanks for your lovely comment..glad you liked the update and o yes
will pm you when i next update.... jagruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
thanks for the pm
hmmm mystery :D
great part
update soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great part
please continue soon
can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: blue_girl

hi

thanks for the pm
hmmm mystery :D
great part
update soon.....

than you for reading and commenting, glad you liked the update
yey..mystry u'll find out in the upcoming chapters.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š
thanks again..really appreciate your feedback....will try to update soon jagruti
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rongna

hey great part

please continue soon
can't wait for the next part

hi..glad you liked the update!
yey...really appreciate your feedback....will try to update soon 😊
jagruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update.. but whts the Raaz??? very curious to knw abt it............ PLzz update soon.....

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