FF:Shiv Ki Gauri chapter 32 P74 conclude! - Page 22

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

2 updatess n wo bhi itne longgggggg luved dem emm speechless da way u hav written goddd so both hav conffessed their luv now i m really happy lukin fwd 4r ur nxt long long longggggg............. updates 😉 n these 2 updates r awesummm n ur writtin skills simply superb huge round of applause dear 👏 n cumin 2wardz ur new ff i like da preview lukin fwd u r doin gr88 work on diz ff n i know u will also do it in ur new ff eagerly waitin n once again amazingg update just put more more n moree romancee 😳😳😳 n yesh u hav updated late diz tym but seriouslyy after reading da updates it's nothinggg u hav put much effort thnxx a lottt chaloo now update asap 😛

saba

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Thank you saba for your lovely comment..lol yey long updates...i suppose i dont really intend to write such long chapters but when i do start writing i get carried away..and i guess you guys like long updates .and as for putting effort in..well i dont really see it as effort..i dont think i can help myself really enjoy writing..and when i start i cant stop..😆.but im really really glad you liked the updates thank you very much!😊

as for my new ff..yey its just a consept i came up with randomaly...just a short ff and o yes and as for romance in my ff..i will try my best..but you know i have a tendensy to create suspence so you know..cant really say. will try my best though....😉😛😊.... anyways thanks again...will try to update soon.. jagruti

Originally posted by: superstar15

hey just read ur parts really goo, it was so cute how they

were confessing their love, i loved it thnks for the

pm, oh the new ff sounds good too wen r u planning on

starting it, cant wait for the next part, thnks again for

the 2 parts, plz cont soon

Rhea😛

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! tht ws so sweet n so romantic. ur writin vocab is so good.shiv confessd his lv n so did gauri😳😳must say, our wait is worth ur effort. do con soon jag (rlly lik da siggi u postd above part 2) gud luk!👍🏼

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! tht ws so sweet n so romantic. ur writin vocab is so good.shiv confessd his lv n so did gauri😳😳must say, our wait is worth ur effort. do con soon jag (rlly lik da siggi u postd above part 2) gud luk!👍🏼

1st i'd like to say srry that i cldn't reply earlier because this week has ben soooo busy 4 me!i came here today and saw that u had 2 parts posted! i was so happy!! well abt the ff... it was AMAZING... loved the cafe sceen in 1st part and 2nd part, i loved the way shiv organized the party! And of course icing on the cake, both gauri ang shiv told there feelings. just awsome. plz continue asap. oh n abt ur new ff, it sounds intresting and i would love to read it! so plz cont soon!

Originally posted by: nine2

1st i'd like to say srry that i cldn't reply earlier because this week has ben soooo busy 4 me!i came here today and saw that u had 2 parts posted! i was so happy!! well abt the ff... it was AMAZING... loved the cafe sceen in 1st part and 2nd part, i loved the way shiv organized the party! And of course icing on the cake, both gauri ang shiv told there feelings. just awsome. plz continue asap. oh n abt ur new ff, it sounds intresting and i would love to read it! so plz cont soon!

hey dear,
how are u doing..........hmmmm ahhhhhhh can i say it was mesmerizing and simplicity personified.........teh last tw parts just had the continuous flow of emotions and a planned route...one thing i like abt your way of writing is you are clear cut aout wat you want..there is not any sense of confusion and nothing is just forced..it sails smoothly...i liked the way you showed MR.KAPOOR alll messed up with himself and in gauri's thoughts for it's noteveryuday u can see him this way..loved the part that he listened quitelyabt gauri's wishes and he fulfilled them too.......ahh birthday part was juystso nicewith him goi9ng slwoly abt the things and giving her space forherself at thesame time cornering her thoughts and makingher realise her true feelingswhich wwas a must for gauri ...the entire scene from the stairs till eating the cake was so nciely scripted for shiv was best at his mischeiveness.....ahah welll gauri lookscutebeing nervoushehe...and i really liked the convo betwwen shivand gauri in the temple..it was very understanding,true and straight from the heart and atleast gauri accepted that she lovesshiv...........and thiercloseness wow that was nice..........chalo but then gauri had bend herhead heh....wellsheneeds more time i guess...hmm wen are yopu planning to send then on honeymoon sinced they wouldcome together thereas both willspend all the time together and understanbdbetter and gauri's hesitation will also justslwoly melt away........looking forward for yournext partand i realy appreciate your effortsfo putting together 2 parts...............post soon dear.......

and ya i checked up with your bew ff...need i say it is just too good...by the looks of it ..i guesss it's another good one..looking forward for it tooo par do continue with your this ff and haan i liked the title ansooni dastan..............

good luck............
take care

luv atop

sry double post.............

luv atop

Originally posted by: atop

hey dear,
how are u doing..........hmmmm ahhhhhhh can i say it was mesmerizing and simplicity personified.........teh last tw parts just had the continuous flow of emotions and a planned route...one thing i like abt your way of writing is you are clear cut aout wat you want..there is not any sense of confusion and nothing is just forced..it sails smoothly...i liked the way you showed MR.KAPOOR alll messed up with himself and in gauri's thoughts for it's not'everyuday u can see him this way..loved the part that he listened quitely'abt gauri's wishes and he fulfilled them too.......ahh birthday part was juyst'so nice'with him goi9ng slwoly abt the things and giving her space for'herself at the'same time cornering her thoughts and making'her realise her true feelings'which wwas a must for gauri ...the entire scene from the stairs till eating the cake was so nciely scripted for shiv was best at his mischeiveness.....ahah welll gauri looks'cute'being nervous'hehe...and i really liked the convo betwwen shiv'and gauri in the temple..it was very understanding,true and straight from the heart and atleast gauri accepted that she loves'shiv...........and thier'closeness wow that was nice'..........chalo but then gauri had bend her'head heh....well'she'needs more time i guess'...hmm wen are yopu planning to send then on honeymoon sinced they would'come together there'as both will'spend all the time together and understanbd'better and gauri's hesitation will also just'slwoly melt away........looking forward for your'next part'and i realy appreciate your efforts'fo putting together 2 parts...............post soon dear.......

and ya i checked up with your bew ff...need i say it is just too good...by the looks of it ..i guesss it's another good one..looking forward for it tooo par do continue with your this ff and haan i liked the title ansooni dastan..............

good luck............
take care

luv atop