"great part sweetie...its beAutiful how you portrAyed it just keep up d gud work..... "
love
nihita...
p.s:THANX fr pm....
Aw….Thanks for reading and commenting nihita! Really appreciate the feedback, glad you like the updates…😊...Jagruti
"awesumm partzzz yaar luved dem waiseeee missunderstandingzzz ki shuuwat ho hi gaii goddd noww plzzz just reveal dat phone mam plzzzzz n do gauri make sure k sam had rapedddd plzzzzz once again simplyy superbbbbbbbbb :)))))))))))))
saba"
Thanks for the comment saba!!!!😊 Glad you liked it and yey.. will reaveal all soon in the next chapters (well I think anyway😊) and misunderstandings between shiv and gauri u'll have wait and see... 😉 again thanks for reading...Jagruti
awww dear the part was beautifuly scripted liked the way you are developing their relation par yaar plz am really dying of this mystery and u sort the truth out fast..don;t want gauri to think bad of shiv wen the real culprit is samar...plz in the next part u sort this out and make this misunderstanding a storng point to bring shiv-gauri more closer..really appreciated the effort of writing 2 parts and if possible next time try updating 2 parts.....i enjoyed myself..but that mystery calls and this turn plz jaldi sort out karo adn shib-gauri ko milwa do....hehe am just aiting for it..
abh u better update the next part jaldi say..am getting restless now....
P.S.thnxs for the pm....
luv atop
Aw thanks for the comment atop!!!!..so your liking the way shiv gauri's relationship is developing.. im glad cuz I had to think about that for ages before writing it.
Will try and be quick with the mystery and yey the misunderstandings with shiv and gauri..u will have to wait and see (but don't think that will last for too long.)
Yey as for updating twice this time..it was just because I found that...it would be easier to split the update into two chapters cuz when I wrote it..it was long. Not sure if I will be updating two chapters next time..it depends..but the chapter will be long.
Will try to update soon...and as for the turn in the story..I don't intend to drag it for to long..nyways thanks again for your feedback..really appreciate it.
....jagruti
"that was amazing simply superb plz continue soon."
Thanks for reading and commenting!!!…😊 pleased to know you liked the updates…once again thanks…will try to update soon ... Jagruti
Hi…..just wanted to say thanks to you all for reading my fanfiction update!!! And for commenting (really lovely comments thanks you guys) really appreciate the feedback. I see you all want the mystry and misunderstandings sorted out…im taking all your feedback into consideration when writing my next chapter … 😉
anyways thanks again..will try to update soon jagruti
| jagruti first of all a bigggggggggggg thanx 4r informing about ur update n then a very bigggggggg sorry 4r my late reply.actually i was bit busy so didn't reply yesterday.but i hope u wont feel bad. n coming to ur update yaar woooooooooooooooow 2 parts at a time.actaually i expected this type of track i mean shiv teasing gauri n the way he is trying to make her comfort in our karam but it never happened.but it was shown in some episode shiv supporting gauri (iam talking about the episodes before leap) which i simply love.ok now i will stop talking about kaa n iam suppossed to talk about ff right.simply superb👏.the way ur trying to show shivgauri's relation is sooooooooo cuteeeee😳.keep up the gud work yaar.n now plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont make gauri misunderstand her shiv n i hate samar in ur ff.he is soooooooooo disgusting😡😡😡 but i love him in kaa he is soooooooo nice 😳.yaar some how u make him nice n responsible person.n now iam waiting 4r ur next update yaar😛😛😛. Hiya.. no need for sorry its ok…I should be thanking you for taking your time out to read and comment!!!… yey and as for the update…it got a bit over the top long so I split it into two which worked better.. Yey and thinking about it I think I know what you mean the episode before the skip.. lol talking about karam apna apna…I know I cant stop ethier….lol anyways I glad you liked the update..i know shiv gauri relationship is hard to write on..but yey was trying to potray it in a really cute way…I tried my best… 😊 like everyone else has requested the same thing…no misunderstandings.. I don't intend to drag that storyline for too long anyways. O yey samars character…well to tell you the truth..i don't like his character..but It was important to have him like that…when I came up with the initial concept….but yey I know what you mean, he can always change… well I think he could.. 😊 anyways thanks again…will try to update soon Jagruti |
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