RAVIKA OS (CONFESSION) new update pg 8(consumation) - Page 6

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Wow
Great start 👏
Mesmerizing
Splendid write up Riya

Finally Devika confessed her love for Ravi
It's just romantic and thrilling
I visualized every thing. 😳 😳

You wrote it beautifully 👏 👏
I throughly enjoyed it.
Keep writing and share with us.
Bohot bohot bohot muzza aya perhne mein

Thanks a lot Riya.

PS: Thanks for the PM. 👏

He he.. Thnx buddy.. Aap logo ko pasand aagya bus or kch ni chahie..
Mere vision ko aap log visualise kr pa rhe h itna kafi h mere lie..
Thnx for appreciation

Na ha next update won't b delayed qki abto mai velli baithi hu.. Will b back aid continuation in 1or 2 days..

Originally posted by: Praarvi

Loved the confession! Great imagination and great writing waiting for the next post eagerly Riya

Think u dear..
Next post coming very soon..

Originally posted by: Eera01

Great!! 👏 Loving the way u r bringing this story to the high point!! My anticipation is increasing day by day! Can't wait for the next update !!!

Yeah..slowly unfold hoti hui story hi actually readers ko hooked up rakh pati h..
Apni to high point pe pahuch hi gai h almost.. Oops.. No more hints..
Keep reading and enjoying..

Originally posted by: lalli36

Wowieee...!!! 👏 this is just...i am speechless. Not getting any word to describe this story.

It has everything. Its complete package. Its flawless and complete.
Even the Chotu Chotu cute phn conversations have so much love and romance that I feel butterflies in my stomach reading that. I also loved that bike wala part.
Actual serial needs to be like this only. U portrayed Ravi's depth of love and emotions so well and perfectly. Each and every word n situation and scenario were perfect.
Even u touched show's theme also jisko cv's b bhul chuke h.

Great imagination buddy. Cv's should read this. I really want actual confession in show to b somewhat like this.

That pendant part was also superb. Very creative. Confession was so touching. Itna wait Marne k baad finally ravi has got something awesome in return. For d first time u include nivi here. Hope there is no trouble coming in further part.

Really want to no what's next in spare for us. Is it what m thinking? The consumation

If so plz do update soon. Really want to read more and more.

Great job. Well done. Do write more..

One thing want to ask do u write professionally? Or its just hobby?

Aahaa..was actually waiting for this detailed analysis by u.. It feels great when ppl like ur work.. Yes u understood me right. Mai yei portray karna chahti hu k love is not only abt intimacy btw couple life k chote chore cute moment b utne hi imp hote h.. Actually yei chize hoti h Jo aapko lively rakhti h.. Though intimacy also holds esp importance vo b jaruri h.. Lekin srf voi San kch ni h..hope u r getting my point..

Abt nivi u HV to wait and follow and let story unfold itself..coz aage k parts Maine b abi soche ni h..

Next update won't b delayed dats all I can say for now..

Professional writing..he he...no buddy its just my hobby.. Professionally unfortunately m a doctor..a field in which u CNT even persue ur hobbies..

Originally posted by: lalli36

Look at d views man. Its almost reaching 4k. No doubt this is the best topic here to be followed. Can't wait for next update.

I m actually disappointed with silent readers here. Guys she is really doing great work. If u want her to continue and if u like her work do take some effort to appreciate and encourage her. I request u all to share ur views also. Even u can suggest what u want next. I don't think she'll mind. 😉

Hehee thnx dear.. Really touched wid this gesture of Ur's.. But I don't mind silent readers here.. Its actually my setback if my work CNT compell ppl to comment and appreciate..m totally ohkay wid it.. M happy even if being silent readers they are enjoying..m doing my part of work wholeheartedly and dat gives me immense satisfaction..
Thnx for ur efforts..

N yeah suggestions are always welcomed..at d end m writing for u ppl only..even if u guys don't like something u can comment.. Criticism is equally imp.. I don't mind that also..

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thnk u so much dear.. Ur comment has great importance..
Yeah abt suhaagraat its not far away.. So keep following..
Feels great to hear u guys want confession to be like this in reality also..

Buddy m not actually net or mobi kind of person.. I don't no hw to edit title..I hv already tried so many times but in vain..can u plz help..??

Its very easy .. under your post , u hv options like profile, search , PM , buddy , edit ... from there click on that edit option and u can easily edit the title and then click on update post 😃

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Its very easy .. under your post , u hv options like profile, search , PM , buddy , edit ... from there click on that edit option and u can easily edit the title and then click on update post 😃

Ohkay...will try.. Thnk u buddy..

Wowww... What a creative idea for their confession. U nailed it buddy.


Even want to see the same kind of confession in show too.


I could specifically imagine the scenario and everything going on there.. Ur writing skills are very good. M totally impressed. I must say the convo u write here are so cute I just read them again and again. And the words are exactly those which ravika use mostly in show. I even imagine the tone they used to say coz the words are also same.

So hatts off for that.

Keep writing and sharing dear. Want read more and more of ur story.

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Ahem..ahem.. So now m back with the much awaited continuation part which is actually the 7th part of my OS.. So without wasting much time in intro part I'll start with the story.. Don't forget the feedback..

RaVika are going home in bike.. Devika is clutching ravi tightly right around his waist..one thing here which is very adorable is smile on both of their faces..they cannot hold back their smiles..

Ravi is still lost in those moments when devika finally spoke those 3magical words ravi was dying to hear.. Devika's ILU is echoing thousand times in his ears..his bike's glass is adjusted on devika's face..he notices devika through it who was also smiling.. There was a sense of satisfaction and relief in her face after pouring her heart out in front of her darling husband..it feels so much relaxed after letting out those things she has kept in heart from so long..

Suddenly there comes a sound "thhaaakkk" with a jerk and both are shaken up..some car has hit Ravi's bike from behind and ran away..bike unbalances and both fall over ground and get hurt..thankfully nothing major has happened to any of them..it was just minor bruises that has just tinge of blood ozing..

Ravi being xtra protective towards his lady love so he was worriied abt devika..
R(extremly worried): devika tum thk to ho na? Kahi lagi to ni?
(He continues blaberring ) m really dry devika pata ni ye kaise..vo mai..pata ni mera dhayan kaha that drive karte waqt.. M really sry
Devika is on the other hand smiling and exploring each and every inch of his face..she is admiring him in heart..not even listening him..ravi is moving his hands in air and saying some or other thing she is not listening..
Finally ravi shook her and breaks chain of her thoughts..
R: devika tum has q rhi ho? Tumhe kahi lagi to ni?
D: ni ni ravi mai bilkul thk hu.. Tumhe kahi lagi to ni?
Ravi smiles and slams her head wid his hand: paglu.. Girne k baad b Haas rahi ho or mujhe puch rhi ho lagi to ni..
She also smiles at her stupidity and then they procced towards home

Nivi is sitting in the same car that has hit the bike and looking at them from far..she is extrmly angry looking the happy couple..

later that night..in their room..
Devika is sitting in front of mirror removing her ornaments and trying to avoid eye contact wid ravi out of shyness.. She sneeks peek through mirror at ravi who was adorably staring her wid all his love and passion..she blushes
Ravi gets up and goes towards her..she became nervous and drops the earing..ravi notices he picks it up and take up the charge in removing other earing..while devika shyly gets up and leave still trying to avoid his intense looks..
She is back facing him..he goes near her and hold her from back near her shoulder..
She suddenly winces in pain saying "Aahhh" loudly..
Ravi(worried) : kya hua devika?? Dkha tumhe chot lagi h..
D: ni ravi aesa kch ni h tum tnsn mat lo..mai thk hu..
R: devika mujhe check karne do..mai ointment laga deta hu..
Devika moves away out of nervousness..
D: ni ravi tum kaise..(stammering) ravi mai thk hu..
Liitle did she say ravi realised wound was near shoulder for which she'l hav to remove her blouse to apply ointment.. Devika was dying out of nervousness..ravi calms her down..
R: devika ointment lagana jruri h.. Ni lagane se dard badh sakta h.. Abi k lie lagwa lo kal mai tumhe doctor k pass le chalunga..
Finally after lot convincing she agrees but still was reluctant.
Ravi comes closer and hold her from back..gently he puts his hand near her bare back.. Devika feels his touch..finally ravi manages to undoe strings of her blouse..devika's heartbeat paces up.. Out of embaresement she turns and hugs him tightly trying to avoid making eye contact..
Ravi breaks hug pulls her back and again tries to attend to her wounds..ravi finds her being uncomfortable.. He moves back..devika realises he's going away and turns to see ravi going to switch off lights in order to make her comfortable..
Devika is touched by his gesture..he again comes near her and back facing her..devika is constantly admiring his good deeds and just now what he did..now she 's bit comfortable..ravi's hand is approaching towards her blouse..finally he slides her blouse from shoulder down the sleeves..devika sensulises at slightest touch of him..ravi is applying ointment at her wound..she gathers some strength and manages to turn to make eye contact wid him..it was when she finds ravi has already closed his eyes..she realised his goodness..she knew he did it sensing her uncomfortable..she realised how lucky she was..
Within a jiffy she turns, faces him, leans more closer and kisses him over his both eyes one by one..
D: itna pyaar karte ho mujhse??
R: (opens his eyes looks her wid love and gratitude) : isse b kahi jda..
Ravi pulls her closer..she has aalready made all her inhibitions go and was ready to give in to him completely..ravi was coming closer inch by inch..she could feel his warm breath.. Her hands already approached where they should be right in front of his chest and near his neck.. Ravi cups her face and gently leans to make his lip meet wid her..she feels the warm puckering on her lips and presses her lips against his..and the simple kiss started to become passionate..ravi's hand is near her waist and devika is gently moving her fingers near his nape of neck..ravika's love is sealed wid the lip lock kiss..

Both moves back and breaks kiss.. Devika shyly turns away.. Ravi approaches her touches her bare back playfully and smiles.. Devika feels his touch and a wave runs down her spine and shivers her..
Ravi was not in a mood to stop and picks her in his arms..devika holds him and keep her hands near his neck like garland and made herself comfortable while in his arms.. She watches him in anticipation..

Ravi makes her lie down on bed and himself is on top of her.. His gaze is so intense that its boring deep inside her.. He caresses her face and gently slides her hair flicks and tuck them behind her ears..ravi leans forwards and kisses her forhead..he slides down gently and kisses her neck while devika is playing aid his long curly hairs and pulling him more close.. The sexual tension and longing desire to become one was evident..
Ravi removes her saree pallu away from her chest and tickels her near naval by playfully moving his fingers over her belly..she shivers and sensulises his touch..he then bends down kisses her in belly near naval part and tickels her more by gently moving his lips there..devika cluches bedsheet tightly..
Ravi unbutton his shirt..his perfectly toned body and abs make devika fall for him allover again as this time she notices him and stares him wid full wifey right.. He approches and tries to remove her blouse down her sleeves from other side but she shys away and turns..devika is lying in bed while ravi is back facing her..he comes more closer gently kisses and caresses her back.. Finally he slides her blouse sleeves from other side which is now hanging away from her body.. He tries to turn her holding her bare shoulder towards him so that he can face her but she quickly hugs him tightly out of shyness.he responds and hugs her more tightly.. He then picks sheet from bed and covers them both..realising this devika feels comfortable and breaks hug..both lie down on bed over each other looking directly in one anothers eyes deeply and they conssumate.. Slightest of lights dat was present goes off and they finally dozes..


To be continued...
PS- its really tiring to write intimate scenes..ufff..today I was feeling to be short of words.. nyways tried my best.. Hope u guys like it..pardon the spelling mistakes..

Loved this part .. U hv written it so well without going too much graphic with the scene yet making it as sensuous and aesthetic as possible ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ .. Loved the whole oinment idea which eventually leads to their consummation 😳 .. Ravi is a dream hubby any girl can ask for ..no wonder Devika was so overwhelmed with his gesture 😳 .. would love to see a morning continuation of the scene 😳

Wonderful updt 👏👏