#4 Pyaar Ka Imtehaan, pt 110@38 27th jan - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing
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Beautiful update
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Awesome update..
Manan romance
Manik proposed nandu..
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Awesome so manik want get hitched with nandini he is scared to losse her
Keep them together
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Cute cute super cute
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Congrats for new thread
Was buzy so I am late sorry for that.
Awesome update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Hello Hi Bye Bye

Kaise ho app sub... studies and papers kaise chal rahe haan...?


Sorry in advance for mistakes

Pt 90 (a)

After celebrating whole day with each other all couples gathered at xyz club at night for their celebration as decided earlier...

Manan. Arykki,Madti,cavya and dhrulia all came in couples and after meeting each other...all started enjoying...

Manan notices the change equation between the new couples and feels happy for them...

All couples spent some time in different corner with their partners... and after their lovy dovy momets all gathered again at one place.

Cabir came to mukti and whisper: Arey yaar yeh party kuch bore type nahi feel ho rahe...

Mukti with lopsided smile said: Exactly... Itni pheki wo bhi valentine party...lagta hai sarey buddhey isi club me a gaye haan... No fun... No drinks... Nothing...

Cabir: ya... (then gave her thoughtful looks) Valentine party... No fun...(smirk) No Drinks

Then their eyes meets with eachother having that same naughty glint in it... and cabir asked: so ho jae(he wink )

Mukti while controlling her smile said: Hmmm ho jae...

Both ran towards bar counter and made 2 spiked galsses and 8 hard shots for others and bring that tray to their gang...

With a teasing smile mukti handed those spiked glasses towards Navya & Nandini , and then offered remaining glasses to others...

Navya and Nandini looked at mukti and she told: Arey yaar simple drink hai...

Navya started sipping that drink whereas Nandini was only holding her glass... Aryaman left from there without taking his drink to attend an important call...

Others finished their glasses in 1 go... and that cabir ordered to bring it for the 2nd round...

They had already taken 7 to 8 shots when aryaman came back...they all were under the alcoholic effect at that time... except Nandini...

He looked their conditions with horrified expression and then his eyes travelled towards Nandini who was standing on some distance having the same shocked expression on her face...

He marched towards her and while shaking her shoulder asked:yeh ... yeh sub kya hoa... Itni jaldi in ki yeh halat...

Nandini came out of her shock and said with taunting smile: Cabir and mukti... U know them na...?

Aryaman's eyes stopped on nikki...and on seeing her condition he said: I think hame party ko yahan hi finish kar k inhe ghar le jana chaheye... Coz ab party karne wali in ki halat nahi hai...

They were talking about their return when cabir's voice reached in their ears...

They looked back in that direction and was shocked on seeing cabir with Navya on dance floor

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chadh gayi

Dhruv also holds Aliya's hand and moved towards dance floor while dancing...


Patang si lad gayi oye
Kudi patang si lad gayi (x2)

Maddy pull Mukti in his arms and sang with seductive looks...Aryaman noticed this with shock and for confirmation he looked at Nandini which gave a smiling node in answer...

Aise khenche dil ke penche
Gale hi pad gayi oye

Manik saw Nandini standing on 1 corner so he moved to her and while grabbing her hand pulled her to him... in his talli state he traced a line on her facial features while singing

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chad gayi
Patang si lad gayi oye
Kudi patang si lad gayi

Maddy while enjoying with mukti sang while Mukti was also dancing in his arms... Aryaman got a naughty idea and he started recording their dance in their talli state

O udti patang jaise
Mast malang jaise
Masti si chadh gayi humko turant aise
Lagti current jaise
Nikla warrant jaise
Abhi abhi utra ho net se torrent jaise

Cabir again sang...

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chad gayi
Patang si lad gayi oye
Kudi patang si lad gayi

Manik also played with Nandini while dancing

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chadh gayi

Nashe si chadh gayi
Patang si lad gayi

Dhruv sang along with aliya... Aryaman placed his phone on a table to record all this and came towards nikki who was still there on her seat while her body was swinging in rythem... He pulled her up and sang these lines while dancing with her

Khilti basant jaise
Dhulta kalank jaise
Dil ki daraar mein ho pyar ka cement jaise
Akhiyon hi akhiyon mein jang ki front jaise
Mil jaaye sadiyon se atka refund jaise

Manik enact like kissing Nandini while singing these lines and Nandini eyes came out on this open flirting she pushed him back and moved away from there...

Zubaan pe chadh gayi oye
Kudi zubaan pe chadh gayi
Lahu mein badh gayi oye
Kudi lahu mein badh gayi

Manik holds her hand and with a pull drag her on his chest... Her back landed on his chest with a thud and her eyes popped out on his action...He traced a line on her ear to her cheek and then his fingers reached on her lips...Nandini immediately grabs his hand ... But he in his talli state started spinning her in his arms...

Kamli kahaaniyo si
Jangli jawaniyon si
Jamti pighalti hai pal-pal paaniyon si
Behti rawaaniyon si
Hansti shaitaaniyon si
Chadh gayi hum pe badi meherbaniyon si

Aise khenche dil ke penche
Gale hi pad gayi oye...

Aryman while controlling this talli nikki in his arms sang... A flash back of their childhoon came infront of his eyes...and then with a smile he looked at her who was his GF now...

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chadh gayi
Patang si lad gayi oye
Kudi patang si lad gayi

Kanniyan o katte kadi
Dil de chaurahe langdi ae

Kanniyan o katte kadi
Banniyan o tappe kadi
Dil de chaurahe langdi ae

Maddy also looked at Mukti in dazed state ...she was laughing while taking one more shot...he also sang these lines in his dreamy state...

Hansi kadi thatte kadi
Galliyan oh nappe kadi
Hans ke kaleja maangdi ae

Ton sourire m'ensorcelle
je suis fou de toi.
Le dsir coule dans mes veines
guid par ta voix. (x2)

Nashe si chadh gayi oye..
Patang si lad gayi oye..

Nashe si chadh gayi oye
Kudi nashe si chadh gayi

After enjoying their time with their partners Nandini came out of Manik's arm and started looking towards Aryaman...

Aryaman saw her and after making nikki sit on a chair he came to her...

Nandini with worried and helpless expression looked at him ... and here Aryaman after understanding the meaning of her unsaid words said: Don't u worry main dekhta hoon...kuch karta hoon main... tum Manik k pass jao...

Nandini: Thanks Aryaman...

Aryaman called Malhotra Mansion and asked them to send 2 cars in this club...his own car was also here...

After sometime when cars reached there he shifted this talli gang in 2 cars... and then told Nandini that she and Manik can go in 3rd one...

Nandini with gratitude once again thanked him...

Whereas Aryaman told her not to say thanks to him... after this he left...

All came back in Malhotra Mansion and with the help of helpers all reached in their rooms...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Part 90 (B)


Nandini along with Mnaik came in his room and after settling him on his bed she was about to leave from there when Manik holds her hand and requested in kiddish voice: Plezzz Don't gooo...(while making cutest puppy face)


Nandini's heart melted on this and she decided not to leave him ... she placed her other hand on his and said: Manik I am not leaving from here... but door to band karne do...

Manik left her hand like an obedient kid ...


Nandini after closing the door came back to him and sat besides him...


Manik in drunken voice said : U r sooo preety... So beautiful...(by grabing her hand he pulled her near his face) U r my Nandini... My Angle... My Sunshine... (he hugged her like a kid hug his teddy) and said u r mine... Hai na... I love you sooo much... ... Sooo... Sooo Much...

He broke that hug and looked in her eyes while asking: U love me na?


Nandini nodded in yes...

Manik with extended lip pout widely open his arms and said in droopy voice: Then hug me na... tum aise itna dore kyo bethi ho... tum ne movies nahi dekhi kya... jo love karte haan wo to itnaaa (he pulled her on himself and their faces were just 1 inches away from each other... itnaaa (he encircled her in his arms again)itnaaa pyaar se aik sath bethte haan... but you...(then said in complaining voice) You don't love me...


Nandini came out of his arms and asked: who said I don't love you...


Manik like a kid: U...tum mujhe pyaar nahi karti... mujhe se dor rahti hooo... Dekho hug bhi nahi kiya mujhe... No hug No kiss ... then how is this love...?

An adorable smile came on her face... and she pinched his cheek on this cuteness and said: how cute u r Manik... Now she said like she was treating a baby: Awww mele Manik baby ko hug chaheye... and she encircled her arms around him ...


Manik like a kid increased his demand: Kissi bhi plzzz...


Nandini thought for a while and the whole day with him flashed infront of her... he did so much to please her ... so...

Without thinking anyother thing she cupped his face and then kissed her on his forehead , then his eyes then on his cheeks one by one ...when she reached near his lips she saw in his eyes and his eyes were still demanding her that kiss... so she placed her lips on his... and softely kissed him ...


After receiving those kisses Manik happily pulled her on his legs and made her sit there...

She rested her head on his chest while sitting on his lap... and Manik's head was rested on the headboard...


He encircled his arms around her on her stomach... And then leaned fwd and put his chin on her shoulder...


Nandini also placed her hands on his and while massaging his skin said: Manik... I love you... I love you sooo much... (with tilted head she looked at his face and saw a wide droopy smile there)...

She asked: U believe me na...


Manik nodded on her shoulder... and then said in drunken voice: I know meri Nandu meri star hai... you know she told me ... If I'll be with her na... she will shine for me ever...hai na?

Nandini with a smile said yes: I'll shine for your hamesha...


Manik asked but naughtily pinched on her throat: Nandini promise

Nandini with tilted head saw this and with a smile replied: Yes Nandini's promise...


Then she made him sleep but he was not ready to leave her... he placed his head on her shoulder and then sleeps in her arms like a baby...

Next Morning Nandini left for Murty's Residence after leaving a note for Manik...


Manik gets up with a headache... He saw a glass of lime water with tablet was neatly placed on the side table...

He tried to remember the reason of his heavy head and then he remembered about the party and those drinks...

Manik holds his head with hand in irritation .


Then his eyes travelled again towards that side table and now they stopped on a paper...


With raised eyebrows he picked that paper and read it...

Mnaik: Oh Shittt... She has gone... How can she...mujh se mille bina...


With his closed eyes he shook his head in frustration... Damn Ittt...

After this he drank that glass of lime water along with that tablet and on next momet he was dialing her number...


Murty's Residence


Nandini was with Rishab on breakfast table when she heard voice of her phone...

A smile came on her lips and Rishab noticed that smile and knew who was calling her...

With a naughty smile he nudged her with his elbow and with his eyes he said to go a head and take his phone...

Nandini showed her Big angry eyes to rishab but rishab said: Take it na... nahi to... phone band ho jae ga... and with this he himself pressed On button for her... and left from there with a teasing smile...


Nandini surprisingly saw her kid brother teasing her ... her trance broke with Manik's voice which was coming from her phone...

M: Hello Nandini... Nandini... r u there... tum thek ho na...? Hello...?


Nandini takes a deep breath and walked towards a lone corner of her house...then...

N: Shuuu Mr Manik Malhotra... Brake lagao... early morning marathon me participate karne ka irada hai kya...? Non stop ... Bole hi ja rahe ho... I am perfectly fine...


After a long sigh Mnaik said: Tum early Morning aise kaise ja sakti ho... mujhe bataya bhi nahi... Mili bhi nahi...

Nandini mockingly laughed on him and said:awww Mr Mnaik Malhotra for your kind information early Morning milne k liye Early morning uthna parta hai na... aur jis condition me tum kal they... Early morning uthna to kya mujhe to laga tum afternoon tak nahi utho gey...


Now Manik once again relaxed on his bed and said: I know but tum wait to kar sakti thi na... main tumhe khud drop kar deta ghar...


Nandini felt his restlessness but with a smile said: Manik Amms ki subha call ayi thi... unhe mujh se milna tha... And then Manglore wapis jana tha... so mujhe aise itni jaldi... tum se mile bina ana para... but main ne note to chora tha na tumhare liye...

Manik tried to tease her: ya wo pheka na note... na hi , na hello, na koi love you jaan... aur na hi koi kiss ... kitni boring GF ho tum Nandini...


Nandini heard his words and a surprising look appears on her face... with that she mumbled: Unbelievable ...

Manik heard her and laughed inwardly on her response...


Nandini then said: So u think I am a boring GF... Huh...?

Manik: Ya... Nandini Murty is my Boring Gf...


Nandini thought to equal there score in this game so she said innocently: Ok Mr Manik Malhotra if u think that I am a boring GF... To thek hai main abhi Amms ko phone kar k mana kar deti hoon...

Manik s one eye brow raised on her statement so he asked: Mana kar gi...? amms ko...? Kis k liye?


Nandini pressed her lips inwardly to suppress her laugh coz she knew that Manik will get a shock on hearing her words...

Nandini thought to play along for sometime so said: well ab main kyo bataon...?

Manik in threatening voice: Nan...dini... bol rahe ho ya...?

Nandini s mouth open on his threating way so in anger she told him: Hawww Manik ab to pakka mujhe tum se koi engagement nahi karni... Pahle boring... and now yeh threatening way...Nahi karni mujhe tum se engagement... main abhi amms ko mana kar doon gi... Bye...


And in anger she ended the call...

Manik looked at his phone in pure shock and asked to himself : ENGAGEMENT?

On same moment he heard a knock on his door and Mr Malhotra entered in his room...


Mr Malhotra saw him with smile and came near him...

He sat besides him and while ruffling his hairs in love said: Manik... main ne Nandini ki amms se baat kar li hai beta... and hum dono hi yeh chahte haan k ab tum dono ki engagement ho jae...


Manik in his mind: So she was saying truth... Amms ne os se baat ki ho gi jaise abhi Dad mujh se baat kar rahe haan...

Mr Malhotra: main to chahta tha k yeh engament 17th ko hi ho jae... but Nandini objected on this date... So now its 18th of this month... I hope u r oky with this...

Manik: Ya Dad I am oky...


Mr Malhotra with a smirk looked at him with corner of his eyes: wo to mujhe pahle hi pata tha... k merey betey ko is date ki koi objection nahi hoga... kyok jitni jaldi mujhe hai apney Mnaik ki shadi ki os se bhi zyada jaldi merey is pagal betey ko hai... Nandini ko yahan lane ki... hai na?

Manik with genuine smile hugged him and said: Hmmm.

After this Mr Malhotra left from there and Mnaik with a smile imagine that Big Day...


But something disturbed his thoughts and that was Nandini's face...


Manik came out of that lala land and mumbled: Oh Shittt Nandini... she said wo Amms ko mana kar de gi... Oh No... os ko tease karne k chakar me yeh main ne kya kar diya... oh no oh no ohno...


He ran out of bed and rushed for a quick shower after getting ready he picked his car keys and his phone and again ran towards his car...


Next

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Edited by cute-aly - 7 years ago
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Hahaha awesome update...
Sab talli... Drunk Manik is too cute ..
Nandini ki tease kar ne chala tha Manik...hehehe...
Nandini played well...after all she is would be Malhotra...
Continue soon...
Eagerly waiting for their engagement...
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