KHAMOSHIYAN (PG 20) UPDATED - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
The intro was great as it started with their nok joke as usual .
I am still watching kumkum bhagya and a great fan of arshi so it was really interesting.congrats for ur new story .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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KHAMOSHIYAN EPISODE 2




FIRST F ALL THANK U SOOO MUCH FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS WHICH REALLY ENCOURAGED ME A LOT... AND SPECIAL THNX TO ALL WHO REGULARLY GIVE LONG COMMENT THNX DEARS...


Good mrng guyz... have a great grand day ... lets start our super duper epi...

Recap: arshi and abigya have been kidnapped...
Abhigya was brought to the same room... having plaster in mouth... they left them inside the room and went by removing plaster...,...

Goon: now u too can cont ur fight
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Abhi Kushi in right corner... abhigya in left corner
A long silence...
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Pragya: hi Arnav... long time to see u...how r u

Kushi: how he must be... By ruining everything he s super cool

Arnav gave a angry look to Kushi...


Asr: yup... I m fine.. wat abt u... I heard tat u have stopped ur...

Pragya interferes : how u caught?

Kkg: that I should ask u... I have informed u... but as always u have spoiled and get yourself and mr.abhishek here..???

Pragya: to whom are u talking?

Kkg: i m talking to u...

Pragya: so where r u seeing at?

Kushi looks at her in anger

Pragya: don't look at me like this I m elder than u... will take ur eyes and give tat in ur hand...

THEY LOOK AT OPP SIDE


Abhi: why they r talking like this?

Asr: its weird,,, I couldn't believe my ears...
While Arnav talks.. abhi turns his face to opposite direction

Asr: I m not dying here to talk with u... always u r doing this with me... I don't even know the reason for ur hatred towards me...but if it is manic.. u will pamper him...
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After a sec

Booth abhi and asr: MANIIICCCKKK

Abhi: oh no... they will kidnap him also... they showed his pic only.. he was in mall

Kushi: manic is not like u two..

Abhinav: means?

Kushi: our nandhu will take care f tat...

Pragya: u have sent nandhu for manic's rescue?

Kkg: yeah

Pragya: r u mad?... she s little girl... Oh no

Asr: she s a mad... do u still have any doubt?

Kkg: oh really.. if u r n tat position,,,,wat would have u done..

Asr: if I were Kushi.. I will go to abhi... let pragya handle manic and nadhu to handle asr... they will surely hear the matter and get saved... but u... always an idiot

Kkg: oh comeon... pragya wont even talk to manic.. after all he did tat with nandhu... and me to this abhishek malhotra... never ever,,, bcz f him everything s ruined,..

Abhi's eyes become red noticed by pragya..

Asr: just shut up.. u don't have any rights to talk abt my ... He stopped .
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Kushi Arnav starts their fight... abhi was hurt... pragya couldn't see him...

Pragya: shut up guyz... We r kidnapped here... and u guyz want to make it more complicated??? Huh...

Arshi : ok fine...
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In mall

"oh nooo where I will find him... He has gone somewhere... "; she searched for him in tension... her cute bubbly eyes starts crying... she saw some gonns with mask proceeding towards one shop... suddenly she noticed him
"maaaniiiccckkk" she screamed...

The man who wears light blue jacket .. by hearing that soft voice calling out his name... smiles widely...

He turns.. he s none other than manick malhotrammm...

Manic: nandhini...
She came running aand hugs him


Manic pov: its been 4 years... to see u...dam... she s equally pretty... her eyes r wet.. she s crying... y... and why should I care... I should not see her... ur presence wont make me feel happy ever never...wont even bother me .. mis.nandhini murthy

Manic breaks the hug: who r u?

Nandhini was shattered: manic... I know u r angry... but

Manic: enough... who r u ... just leave my way

Nandhu: listen mr.manic... I m not here to join the pieces which u have broken 4 years ago... ur life is in danger... and i just

Manic: stop it... being near u is danger...

Nandhu: manic pls... see there... those masked persons came to kidnap u...

Manic sees none... nandhu looks back and finds no one..

Nandhu: trust me manic


\Manic: I tried to trust u... but I cant... and I wont trust u... got it...
He left the place...
Nandhu follows him...
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In banglow:

Abhi: I m sure manic s in threat... what should I do?

Pragya: I m sure nandhu will also be with manic... Kushi u didn't do right

Kkg: I m very much sure tat nandhu will save herself and manic...

Asr: and I m really sure tat they two will be reaching here by any time...

Kushi stares angrily at asr...by then door opens and the goons throw manan inside the room...
They both were tied together.. while both f them struggled to get away from each other. Both fell over ground... Nandhini landing above manic.. they had an intense eye lock...

Dherrenna dherrene aaa (ishq bhulava starting music) plays...

Kushi: nandhuuu...

They break their eyelock... and look at them...

Abhi: manic.. r u fine? Who the hell r they... what they want?

Arnav: manic... r u fine...

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Now al the three couples were been kidnapped...
Abhi Arnav manic: now who will save us...

Pragya: its obvious tat in ur home ... no one even cares abt ur absence... so I guess our mom will surely try to find us...

Kushi laughs: yeah dhi... u r obsolutely right... their mom will be busy as to choose which colour cheppal...

She laughs... while Arnav burns in anger
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While pragya hearing DHI from kushi's mouth smiles with lil tears...
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Manick: bhai... ask him to untie me from this girl...

Asr laughs at maanick: manick... Ur super hero bhaiyya also have been tied up...

Manic: arnaav bhaai... pls... I don't want to be here...

Asr: u r still a kiddo... We r not here by our wish...

Abhi: stop it ... ... (looks at asr) ... and manic.. relax... I will find some way...

Kushi: yeah manic... ur brother always have some way to solve any problem...

Manic stares angrily at Kushi... But didn't say anything...

Manic: u all here?

Kushi: bcz f ur stupid bro... we r here...

Maanic gritted his teeth

Pragya: Kushi pls.. don't make it out a big issue...
Manic looks at pragya with soft look.. where as pragya looks away to show tat she s in no mood to speak with him...
Nandhu who s enjoying in manick's arms smiles unknowingly

Manic: hey anybody there?.. tie this short heighted girl somewhere else...
Nandhu looks at him angrily...
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Abhinav: I think he alone can save us...

Manic: u mean??
They nod...

Kushi: yeah... he s the one who s somewat matured and wise in ur home...

Pragya : Kushi not again...
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A flat s shown...

A young man s seen sleeping... With his bedsheet covered his face... A blurred image of some girl proceeds towards that man...

Girl: will u get up now?

Man nods in negative

Girl: I m warning u for the last time... Bcz f u I m always getting late ...
Man turns his position to opposite direction as if he doesn't want to hear any leacture...

Girl: now I m left with no option other than this...

She takes water and throws over him... he gets up in a jerk... he rubs his face... His anger glare made tat girl to run over... he gets up from his bed... and turns to set his hair...

Man: I m the raman bhalla... people will get scared of me... And here this girl s making me mad every day... Wait .. I m coming to take revenge
she heard those lines and laughs... Her cute lips are shown...

Raman runs to find her...

She hides behind curtain,,...he then slowly moves towads curtain... His phone rings at tat tme...
Raman: hello

Raman: what... how can u guyz be so careless... how can three get disappeared... Damid... Get lost... Let me find out something...

He hangs up.. and sits in sofa... The girl comes and hugs him from behind...
Raman smiles... and takes her in his arms,,,
Raman: whenever I see ur smiling face all my tension goes...


Girl: now get up and drop me in school papa...

Raman: sure madam...

Girl: and yeah... wear ruhi's fav blue shirt today... ok?

Raman nods...

Yeah the girl is ruhi...

They get ready... Ruhi lites up diya in front of some photo frame...and prays

Ruhi: mumma... Today also I m late to school bcz f papa...

Raman's reflection was shown in photo frame...
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Who s ruhi's mom... Stay tunned guyz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Awesome update, loved it.
Waiting for the next chapter, continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.
Edited by ananya2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
ARSHI fight so much.. lovely update..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
oh..all of them 2gether in the room.how will they escape?What is manan's past 4 which manik is frustrated with nandini?poor nandini wants him 2 a safe.but he cant believe her.ruhi is raman's daughter.who is ruhi's late mother?is it shagun or ishita whom everyone thinks 2 b dead?nice edit
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Nice update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
interesting..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88
Loved it dear
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89
NICE
UPDATE SOON
EVERY TIME U LEAVE IN SUSPENSE
WHO
S RUHI'S MUMMA
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

NICE

UPDATE SOON
EVERY TIME U LEAVE IN SUSPENSE
WHO
S RUHI'S MUMMA


THANKS FOR PM
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