MANAN FF : TWO BEAUTIES OF MY LIFE# CHAPTER13,14AND15UPDATED on 8 May! - Page 25

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Outstanding enoughπŸ‘

Be it the meeting, the pair, their chemistry and the dress, and the party, all goes so well and awesomely described.
Loved it but the cliffhanger shook me like every one!
Will wait for more. Thanks dear for the updates, and so sorry for being too late. I will try to be on time from the next.

Luv yaβ€οΈπŸ€—



Thank you bhabhi :)
Plz no sorry. ... its okay I understand :)
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Nandini opened the chit and read the dare which made her eyes wide and she gasped loudly.

Nandini : M.. Man...Manik I...ca..can't do...o th...this.

Nandini blushed & stammered while giving the chit to Manik

Manik : What happened what's there in the chit ?

But before Manik Mukti snatched away the chit and read the dare aloud.

Mukti reading the chit : Fold your hands behind your back Hold a chocolate piece in your mouth and make your partner eat it thought your mouth.

It was now Manik's turn to blush and Fab4 smirked evilly and started cheering 'Manik Nandini'

Cabir : wait guys we can call Them MANAN instead of Manik and Nandini

Mukti : Manan what's that ?

Cabir : Manik ka MA and Nandini ka NAN so MANAN.

Alya : Cool. So guys let's cheer for Manan.

All started cheering Manan Manan.

While Manan stood there blushing but Manik noticed Nandini uncomfortable so he composed himself

Manik : Enough guys stop it we aren't going to do it so please.

Mukti : come on man it's just a dare. We are just asking you two to have a Chocolate Kiss

All again started cheering for KISS
Manik : Enough guys please it's a no.

Dhruv ( the good boy ) : let it be guys if they are not comfortable buddy you choose some other chit ok

All shouted NO

But in front of Manik they stayed quite and this time Manik picked up a chit.

And he read it & blushed red.

Cabir smirked : Guys we have given you discount last time but not this time so you will have to do the dare written in this second chit.

Mukti again snatched the chit : couple have to dance on a romantic song. While dancing They have to kiss their partner 25 times. And they should not kiss one spot more than once.

All shouted an Ohhhoo

Alya : that means k you guys have to kiss each other 25 times on different body parts.

Alya winked at Manik.

Manan blushed hard but All started hooting for Manan they were not given chance to refuse and Fab4 pushed them directly to dance floor whole party was not cheering for manan

Manik forwarded his hand to Nandini who gave her soft palm in his hand.

Soon whole party gathered near dance floor where only manan were standing holding each other's hand soon music started.

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya

(Manik pulled nandini in his arms placed one hand on her waist and in other hand held her delicate fingers and slowly kissed Nandini 's knuckles and crowd shouted 1, he traced lovely kisses from her knuckles to her shoulder and crowd was counting kisses)

Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

(Manan were slowly swaying with music then Manik turned her and took her in back hug and kissed her other should and trailed kisses till her neck)

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon
Bhool Ja aa

( Manik kissed Nandini 's ear lobes and temple)
Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you so much
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so much
Baby i love u +
( Manik was twirling her with Music and again pulled her close to him and kissed her forehead telling her through eyes that he actually loves her )

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein
(Manan were extremely close to each other Manik kissed Nandini's cheeks then cutely pecked her nose and chin)

Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata
( He slowly bent her downward with his hand supporting her back and in that position he kissed her throat and unknowingly Nandini moaned Manik's name both looked at each other with passion and crowd screamed 18 )

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa
( 18 kisses were already done and Manik had almost kissed all the bare parts of Nandini's body and was confused where to kiss now but just then he felt Nandini's lips on his both knuckles one by one and crowd shouted 20)

Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena isqh ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai
( Nandini kissed Manik's forehead and Cheeks one by one and this was giving Manan goosebumps and Nandini's lips were creating havoc in Manik's hormones crowd counted 23 )

Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata
(Song was actually telling how Manik was feeling at that time )

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa
(Nandini kissed Manik's nose just like he kissed hers and was about to kiss his chin to complete 25 kisses but

.

.
Before that Manik pressed his lips on hers and crowd screamed with their all power 25.

Manik started sucking her lips Nandini was totally shocked, completely numb because of sudden kiss but Manik bit her lower lip and a wave of passion hit her senses and she started kissing him back while her hands directly went and held Manik's neck and hair. +

Both were kissing each other like long lost lovers , it was not kiss of lust but it was hunger for love which both of them were deprived of.

Manan were kissing and kissing and kissing without caring about the world around them but lack of air forced them them to break the kiss. )

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you

The completion of song brought them back on Earth and just then they realized what they did. Manik smiled like a teenager who has kissed his girlfriend for the first time his cheek were hurting because of his big grin and just then Nandini got a call and she
removed Manik's hand from hers and ran towards washroom as she was feeling extremely shy.
As soon as she left Fab4 started teasing Manik about his kiss and also showed him video of their dance

Cabir : So now I got why Manik denied first dare
Alya : why ?

Cabir : because Manik wanted liplock with 24 bonus kisses Right Manik ?

Mukti : Wah Manik tu toh bada hoahiyar nikla.
All were pulling Manik's leg to the core making him blush like a girl

Nandini attended call and came out of washroom Just then Nandini saw Madhyam entering inside the party and her breath hitched in her throat, her biggest nightmare Madhyam singhania was standing some steps away from her she started shivering. She hurriedly hid behind a group of people.

She was trying her best to hide away from him just then Cabir spotted her.

Cabir placed his hand on her shoulder but Nandini jumped in horror thinking that it's Madhyam.

Cabir : You ok Nandini you look worried, everything fine ?

Nandini : Yes Cabir everything is fine actually Cabir I have to go home its emergency can you please inform Manik that I'm leaving right now.

Cabir : Nandini why don't you yourself come and tell him it will take few minutes only come. And you have not eaten anything so at least eat something and go.

Nandini saw Madhyam standing near Manik's group and nodded in no her face was covered with sweat and she was looking like a small girl who has seen a monster : Sorry Cabir I can't I'm leaving please say sorry to Manik on behalf.

Nandini literally ran towards the exit without listening to shouts of Cabir

On the other hand Manik was desperately waiting for Nandini, his love.

He saw Cabir coming alone who had gone to search Nandini. Cabir was looking tensed.
Manik : Where is Nandini Cabir ?

Cabir : She left

Mukti : it's not time for joke Cabir, where is Nandini ?

Cabir : nor I'm in mood of joke Mukti she left or I should say ran away saying a sorry for Manik +

Manik : What ? I mean why did she leave Cabir ? What did she say? Why didn't you stop her ?

Cabir : She said there was emergency so she left and I tried my best to stop her but she ran away without even eating anything.

Manik was extremely sad and he tried to call Nandini but she didn't
Pick his call.
Just then Maddy came there : Manik bro nice party

Fab5 ignored him and were worried for Nandini

Maddy : I heard that you had fun with a hot chick today. Won't you introduce her because if you are done with her I would like to have some fun with that sexy gi...

Maddy couldn't complete his sentence and was rewarded with a strong blow from Manik which made him fly in air and land on ground with thud. he started coughing and soon he saw two of his teeth on floor ('')

Manik in dangerous tone : Never ever Use your dirty mouth to talk about my Nandini and if you ever dared to put your eyes on her just like your teeth next time your eyes will lay on floor.
Manik left party angrily and drove to his house.

Next Morning Manik directly went to Nandini's office and barged into her Cabin. she was working on her laptop she was wearing plain white anarkali and her hair tried in simple bun.

Manik harshly held her shoulder : What the hell did you leave like that do you have any freaking idea how worried I was

saying so he pulled her in a bone crushing hug. Nandini herself didn't know when she hugged Manik back.

Manik broke the hug and saw her charming face was dull and her eyes had dark circles as if she has cried whole night.
Nandini's throat choked due to Manik's love and concern.
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb

amazing

lovely

hot and romantic

25 kisses... lovely..what a awesome surprise

loved it

D way they kissed each other that was so romantic and hot

too good update

bt what's d connection of Maddy and Nandini...plz don't tell me Maddy is related to Kiara...I can't see Maddy Nandini past

bt again what an end..MaNan hug..lovely..

loved d update
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update
please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great chapter...
Loved it...

Cn't wait to see how Maddy's character blends into the story.

Please update soon...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Loved manan romance
But waiting to know more about Maddy
Why nandu was so scared of him?
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Soo romantic...

More review coming... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Manan looked so cool n romantic a couple while the dance was on... 😳
Loved the dare happening n all the way the love is told to the lovers... β­οΈπŸ‘

Maddy... any relation with Nandini... ???/ Hope not... πŸ˜•
Wud love to see what happens next.. as Manik is here to know the grief of his nandini... n the hug is broken with a truth that she cried all night...
I feel the truth is about to reveal soon... will wait for it.. ! Thanks dear Eku... God bless... !


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update beautifully written thanks for pm woah its a great one
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update Eku πŸ‘
Too hot, and romantic! Loved the kisses showering and the atmosphere going red hot.
Hope Maddy is not behind Kia and Manik will help Nandu out soon!

Awesome way to give a twist though 😳 Loving it dear ⭐️
Luv ya too β€οΈπŸ€—
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