MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: thamannamanan01

so beautiful

cute
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romantic
loved it 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

beautiful update
loved manan moments
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Nice update well done loved it

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#74

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Perfect song selection for the moment.
Nicely written update

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: NeysaSingh

Cute update but was a small one and you actually made me live the moment that took place between manan After the opening performance of musicana night.

I m glad to hear that...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: aikhma

Very interesting story

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Originally posted by: shweta6767

Lovely update

Continue soon...

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Kya baat hain...aap logo ka to nikal padhi..😆...ek hi din teen teen update.....aur ek baat..agr aap log lucky huye to I m gonna give another one...😉...agr meri padhai complete hui to..😒

Guys I worked really hard in this chapter..uff kitna kast karke maine yeh pics aur gifs collect kiye...hayee...meri to pasina hi chut gayi...😒

Anyway plz plz plzzz...do ur valuable comments...aur plz exam ka bahana maat dena...coz I went through the same and even tomorrow i have my exam...firvi if i manage to spend 3 hrs in this so I think u guys can give a extra one minutes to write a small line...😳

CHAPTER 3

IN GARDEN

Nandini came in the garden coz manik massaged her to come there...nandini astonished to see the decor...even manik came and thought that the decor was done by nandini...


Manik: Isse accha setting or chance nahi mil sakta...tell me...what do u thinking about me ???

Nandini blushed...
Nandini: Kya kahu main manik...what do wanna hear...

Manik: I wanna hear that u always shine for me...
Nandini remembered her drunken promise...

Manik:U always be my star...humesha...I wanna hear that main humesha tumhari prayers main rahunga...
Nandini blushed

Manik: And I wanna hear tum humesha mujhpe TRUST karogi...

Nandini: Aur agr main teh sab bol dia to tum kya kahoge...???

Manik: Kuch nahi...coz I won't waste my time in talking...
Manik look towards her intensely and leaned towards her...but nandini slipped from him and moved away...

Manik: Huh..nandini...if that's what u want fine...ja raha hu main...

Nandini: Jab tak tum nahi bologe main v kuch...manik...kaha chala gaya...

Suddenly manik came from behind and back hug her...


he turn her front and look towards her...passion and love was visible from his eyes...


manik smiles and say

Manik: "Tumhe pata hain...tum humesha mujhe monster manik bulate ho...lekin jab tumhare sath hota hu na simply manik ban jata hu...u make me good...nandini..mujhe andhere se darr nahi lagta jab tum mere sath hote ho...becoz u will be there to shine like a star..."

Nandini is blushing like a rose...glow of love is visible from her face...


Manik: Main tumhare har prayer main rehena chahata hu...humesha...

Both r looking towards each other...there eyes held nothing but only love...love for each other...


manik starts carrasing her arm...

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He goes close to her...he is playing with her hair...


Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb...
Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

he cupped her face...manik leaned to kiss her...

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He kiss her on forhead promising to take care and protect her...

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He kiss her both eyelids as a promise...promise for always be there for her when she will need a pair of arm to cry her heart out...

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

He looks at her to his heart content...after drinking her beauty he slowly placed his lips on her...he kissed her softly...as if she is a fragile doll...a small pressure on this doll it will be break...


Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb...

He kissed her lips to seal the promises he made in his mind for her...a sign of a new start...a relation which started with hatered ends with love...this kiss is a key which lead to open the door for many memory...of their togetherness...

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

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Note:

Goshh...I love this scene... u all noticed that dialogues r as same as ky2...to be honest I don't wanna ruin the beauty of the scene by mixing my own dialogue...fir v jaha mujhe laga meri interference se kuch nahi hoga waha maine thoora sa supervise kia...😃

This story is based on musicana night...so scene will be somewhere alike as show...do tell me how did u find it...😳

And plz do lamba comments...coz iss chapter main gifs banane se lekar sab kuch karne main bohat mehenat lagi...
So comment dil kholke... :D
Edited by manancraze - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Nice update..
Purani yaaden taza ho gyi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Awesome update ...
Lovely gifs. ..
Thanks for the pm. ..
Take care. .
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