MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31) - Page 2

_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Don ne ek aur BOMB plant kr diya

Aur es Bomb ka natije kuch dino me hi hi India forum me dikhne start ho jayneg

Btw

Nice Concept Swarna

Waiting for update

ALL THE BEST

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Archana Vinod

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Aha! So here we are. With a different version of season 1's most interesting conflict. The break up.

There were places in this phase which I felt was not satisfactory. For instance, Manik losing his cool and forcing Nandini into accepting his apology. Well. That's Manik. 😆 He gets desperate at times. Enough to kidnap and blackmail. 😆😆

But you know what I like about your story? That Manik will pay the proper price for his actions without getting too bull-headed. That for a moment, he's going to keep aside his arrogance and ego whatever. At least, that's what I feel from the prologue. I really feel that he deserves more punches from Nandini than he actually got in the show. 😆 What say?

But whatever you've got up your sleeve, I'm game. The ending itself is promising. That Manik will need to try harder to win her back. 😆

All in all, this looks very interesting. I'd love to see how they finally bury the hatchet and gel with each other once again. Do continue soon and please do PM me 😉

Edited by Archana_Vinod - 8 years ago

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Ky21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I loved it...

really exciting..

waiting for the next eagerly...

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mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Amazing topic post musician.. Nice decision ...

Will definable love to read this Tory

Thanxx for starting

N all the best for the new journey

:)

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Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Interesting one...
Looking forward to it...
Update soon..
Thnx for pm...

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priyanka Krishnan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Aila crazy ki purse ek story Jane kitne haat he crazu tumhare chalo koi ni tum Hume stories dekar pareshan karo or hum tumhe comments karke
Wese story line pad kar lakta he ke hamare hero ne heroine ke sath kuch bure karname kiye he means intensionaly mistake ki he jiski punishment unhe mil bi rahi he par last me kisne nandhu ko bulaya or kese bulaya jisko sunkar manik ke hosh udd gaye unhe apne aas pas tare dikne lage
Dear it sounds interesting update n come back soon luv u.

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Cooki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Great idea...
It's going to be an awesome story it seems...
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts..

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Chitra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

woah awesome story and its title
loved the prologue
hanks for pm 👍🏼

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Swarna

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: gtilwani45
Hahaha .Hmarii writer multi talented bn rhiii h .. kya bat h 😆 Ek saath inni sari stories. .but its gonna be fun to read . okiee prologue is nice.. let's see who is that person.. but story h kis type ki...kuch idea milega.. ;* 😛 Thanks for pm..

Thanks for liking it...😳...will post soon...😃

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Swarna

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: shaan...
Interesting prologue...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

Thanks dear...will continue soon...😃

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