MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31) - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kd83

Chaala bavundi... anni chapters oka saari chadiva...

Waiting for next update...

Thank u 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anika_Dreamer

WOW!!! Mini date n all...really sweet...nandu's dialouge was too good neha radha...& then manik said radha nahin radhika😆

IT was so sweet n romantic...loved it
waiting 4 next and yeah Thanks 4 the update

Thank u dear 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
U know my readers..."U GUYS R LOVE!! ❤️" Seriously...meri late update karne k baad v u guys read it and comment made me feel so overwhelmed... Jab jab mai sochti hu ki I should discontinue it but then remembering ur response I chucked those kinda thought. Thank u so so much for ur corporation...🤗means a lot. 😳
Now let's move on to the story...😃

RECAP:
MaNan's mini date.

CHAPTER 7

LOCATION: Mukti's Bedroom

Mukti is standing facing mirror. She has pills on her hand
Mukti: This is last time..Swear to Fab5. I won't take this from next time..this is last..
She gulps one and throw the rest in dustbin. Suddenly her phone rings, it shows a notification from Manik's instagram Account.

" Sometimes I do feel eating people too. Lucky thoose boys jiske paas laadoo jaise GF hote hai (**wink wink**). Proud to say I m one of them :D "

Mukti: Wahh Manik..aab alia hotty tujhe laaddo lagne lagi..accha hai...karoo apni romance


SCENE CHANGE
LOCATION: Raghav's home

Raghav: Cabir tumhare phone..
Cabir: Thanks love.
Cabir sees Manik's post and began to think something. Seeing him lost Raghav asks him

Raghav: Kya hua Cabir..is there any emergency?
Cabir: No..it's just Manik ne kuch post kia..nothing important. Come love let's chill ourselves

Cabir's POV:
Manik Malhotra...what r u upto? Kya mai jo soch raha hu woh to...nope. One thing is sure this "GF" isn't Alia..then who is she?


SCENE CHANGE
LOCATION: Dhruv's bedroom

Dhruv: Manna padhega alia ko...mere liye taiyari k sath sath apne liye v kar rahi thi. Wow..God..plz do something..jaise buddy aur alia ek sath hai waise Nandini aur mujhe v ek sath kar do.
He takes his phone and message alisa
"All the best partner. Enjoy u both"


SCENE CHANGE
LOCATION: Alia's home

Alia is crying clutching her phone. She gets dhruv's message. After reading it in anger she throws her phone away
Alia: Aahh..Nandini...tumne accha nahi kia..bilkul v nahi..Manik is mine...Trust me u Murthy soon u will b out of Manik's life and I will make sure to do that


SCENE CHANGE
LOCATION: Nandini's room

Nandini is blushing remembering tonight's event. She is tosing and turning on bed but sleep is far way from her. She takes her phone to call Manik but being a shy girl she stopped herself

Nandini: Monster Manik..kya kar dia tumne..arghh..I hate u. I m sure woh aab aram se kharate marke so raha hai..par mera kya...ayappa..!!!

Suddenly her phone rang and a message pop up. "I m not sleeping Miss Murthy ;-)" . Nandini began to look here and there. Again another message pop up "Looking for me??"
Nandini: Ayappa...isko kaise pata chala? Arre manik ka call...hello manik

Manik: Wohh...itna jaldi aap ne phone utha liya miss murty...not bad...
Nandini: Woh..mai..nahi meri paas hi phone ta tha iss liye...aisa nahi hai k mai tumhe yaad kar rahi thi
Manik: But miss murthy maine kab bola k aap mujhe yaad kar rahi hai..hmm...

Nandini bite her lips in embarrasement...On the other hand Manik is having fun imagining nandini's situatuon
Manik: Miss Murthy agr aap itna hi yaad kar rahi thi mujhe to ek bar bol dete...banda apke liye hajir hota
Nandini: Manik stop...phone kyu kia..koi kam tha
Manik: Ha..bohat jaruri..
Nandini: Kya?!?!
Manik: Yeh hai ki "I LOVE U"
Saying this Manik cut his call leaving Nandini blushing.
Nandini: Ayappa...yeh ladka fir se phone cut dia...kab sikhega yeh monster. Phone to rakh dia but my monster I love u too.❤️Can't wait to tell u.
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Kaisa tha yeh chapter...jaldi mai likhi hai..no prof reading...pardon my grammatical and spelling error 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Itna chotu update after such long time. Not fair. I want a lamba update then only I will tell ki how I felt this update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow..It was awesome..Haha parthu ka insta post ab manik ka bangaya..It was the best part..Sab ka reaction was amazing..Mukti pagla gayi kya..Alia kaha se laddoo lagti hain isko..Woh alia to hari mirchi jaisi dikhti hain..Manan scene was so cute..Chota hain par bohot accha hain..Update soon but after finishing study's for your exam's..Thank you for the PM..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ufff.. such a cute update ... loveddd it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update.. but chota tha yaar.
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Posted: 7 years ago
short but full of emotions!! nandini's twist n turn on bed was really cute...alia will surely do something,,,on top of that,,dhruv...its getting intresting
update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great update baby
Manan chat is soo cute
Thanks for pm darling
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Posted: 7 years ago
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