#9MaNan FF: Dheere Dheere Chapter 40/Pg118/28th-January-17 - Page 81

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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update.
Like the part when jack came on manik rescue.
"Aainda bhai ki shirt mat pkarna!"
Love fab5 bond.
Next one plz 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Emotional update...

Twikle told manik abt her past n how she was tourtured...

Jack is broken when twinkle left him...

Manik told twinkle his story n he told it very beautifully...

vikram warn manik that he will take revenge...that time I was scared...hope there is no separation...

I like this part (in bold)

"Shirt chood!" I told him softly.

"Yes Vikram! Friendly advise hai! Shirt chood day!" Cabir said from behind in a funny tone and all four of us chuckled humorlessly.

"Heropanti kary ga?" Vikram asked dangerously and I pouted at him.

"Aur mjy heropanti ki zarorat he kya hai! Me tou hoon he hero! Hai na Nandu!?" I said in a calm tone and heard her gasp from my back.

Maybe she didn't expected me to joke at this moment.

"Bkwas band! Tell me where is she!?" He shouted jerking my shirt.

I took a deep breath and tried to remain calm.

"Na btaoan tou?" I asked cutely and that was it he raised his second hand to punch me but his fist never hit my face because it was Jack who held his hand coming in front of me almost killing Vikram with eyes.

"Loohhh aa gya teri story ka hero, Vikram!" Tiger commented at once again everyone started laughing and Jack pushed Vikram away. He stumbled many steps back.

"Aainda bhai ki shirt mat pkarna!" He told Vikram in a dangerous tone and hide me behind him.

"Ohh! Tou now you will tell me what should I do?" He snarled at Jack and Jack just shook his head.

"Stop messing with us Dude! You will regret!" He warned him and we all nodded."

FAB 5 will show him his real place...

beautifully written...

loved d update...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it. Superb update. Time for some action han. I'd love to see vikram suffer. Jack is love. He is my new favourite after manik. Update soon and han the best scene was manik's story and the best dialogue " ainda bhai ki shirt mat pakarna"
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome chapter
Loved it
Really hate vikram
Loved manan cute bedroom scet
For me manan scene wAs favourite
Really awesome
Eagerly waiting for next part
Plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update.. Bechari twinkle... Kitni suffer kar rahi hai..bilkul toot gayi...meri baachi...jack aur twinkle k sath bilkul accha nahi hua...kitna hurt hai dono k dono. MaNan scene was as usual cute. Vikram is really an a**-hole...jerk.. Do*****ag...mai bol rahi hu mawara agr vikram ne nandini baby ko kuch v kia na to mai story mai ghuske usse marungi.
My most fav scene was Manik wearing that shirt.. I love that. Love this roller coaster update. Cont soon..😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing
Emotional
Interesting
Ab aayega mazaaa
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow superb update
Manan nd der beautiful bonding
Jack and Twinkle bixhre i feel so bad for dem...

I so wanted al safe and vikram out of the hapternw
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Vikram is a bas***d motherf**ker
he should get a slow death by fab5
n don't let anything happen to manan
Manik will die without Nandu
n same is the case with Nandu
let the Vikram the bas***d get crushed
it time for that bas***d to pay
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update dear
Love it very much..
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Posted: 7 years ago
O God I just want that vikram to suffer ...continue soon
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