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Posted: 8 years ago

After exchanging byes Manik and Nandini left.
Nandini didn't know that where they were going.
"Hum kahan jaa rahe hai..." Nandini asked.
"Airport..." Manik answered.
"Airport.. But why... There's no luggage... No clothes to change.. And hum just yesterday hi Tou aaye hai..." Nandini Shock level was in a different floor. She is getting surprise after surprise.
"Oh ho Tum kitne sawaal puchti ho...This is a surprise.. You have to wait a little more to know it.." He said.
Nandini waited. They reached a small airport and their car drove all the way towards a private jet. Only Manik and Nandini were traveling in it. It was exclusively booked for them by Mona.

Private jet


The driver escorted both of them to the jet and one of the crew member received them lead them into the jet.

Interiors


After they were settled side by side on one couch like seat the crew member welcomes them.
"Welcome abroad sir , ma'am. And happy birthday ma'am... Your journey will be five and a half hours long... As you have plans for lunch there , we will be providing you snacks and beverages.. If you need anything let us know... Have a wonderful journey ahead... Thank you..." The crew members went away.

Nandini was dumbfounded and awe and was out of the words to say anything. She never expected that she will be traveling in a privet jet with him , let alone she never dreamt of it. Her mouth was left opened all the while. She was trying to digest the fact that she is in a jet. Until now she didn't know where she was going. Because no one gave a single hint about their destination.

When all of them were settled and the jet took off and up in the air , than Manik thought of bringing her out of her deep and unexpected thoughts.
"Sweetheart... Are you ok... Since that time you didn't say a single word..." He said getting closer to her.
She was still in a state of shock and disbelief.
He bend down to her cheek and kissed her. She came out of her deep thinking.
"Haan... What..." She said blinking her eyes.
"Are you alright... Tum theek ho na..." He asked with a slight smile.
"Main... Haan... I am alright..." She cleared her throat.
"Am I dreaming... I still don't think that this is real..." She Said in a hazy voice.
He cupped her face turning her towards him and pressed his lips to hers. He poured his love and devotion into the kiss.

He broke the kiss and gave a light peck on her forehead.
"You are not dreaming... And this is 100% real... You are traveling with me your husband , your LIFE PARTNER in a private jet for a lunch date... Specially for your birthday... It's a birthday gift and our wedding gift from my friends to you and us..." Manik makes her believe what she is experiencing.
She rest her head on his chest encircling her arms around his waist.
"Kahin Meri in unlimited kushiyon Ko Meri hi Nazar na lage... I'm so so blessed... Mujhe ab bhi yakin nahi aa raha hai Ki main aapke saath private jet mein hoon..." Her eyes started to flow.
He heard her sniffs.

"Yakin karlo... Warna Mujhe yakin dilane ke Aur bhi tareeke aate hain..." He kissed her head diverting her mind.
"Anyways it's a long journey you go and change... Tumhara ek spare dress Maine rakhwa diya hai..." He breaks the hug.
"But aapne bataya nahi... Ki hum Kahan jaa rahe hai..." She asked innocently.
"Hmmm... Tumhe Abhi Aur thoda wait Karna padega... Kyunki Woh tumhe pahunch ne ke baad hi pata chalega..." He said smirking.
She hold his collar and said.
"Please batayiye naa..." She makes so many cute shapes out of her mouth.
"My sweet little darling... Your cute faces is not gonna make me spill the secret... But Kuch aur Zaroor ho jaayega... Aisa na hoke plane mein I couldn't control myself... And..." He nuzzles his face in her neck for a wet and open mouth kiss.
"You know... Kya ho sakta hai..." He whispered.
Her whole body shivered like a leaf by his warm breath dancing on her neck.

"Let... Letme change the... Clothes...atleast..." She tried to stop him but pulling her apart.
But he never left her instead he moved his hand behind and held on to her back searching for something and than he unzipped her.
"You know I just couldn't keep my hands and myself away from you... " he roamed his fingers at her bare back after unzipping her.
"Par... Hum... Aise... Theirs no privacy here..." She observed the openness of the place and got shy.
He got up from the couch and make her stand he make take few steps and both of them entered a small but a very cozy room with a comfortable bed and a neat bed in the middle.

Room


They both stepped in side and Manik locked the door.
He turned the lights dim and took off her frock and grabbing her spare dress that's a spaghetti strap full length floral dress and make her wear it.
"Sweetheart if you stay in front of me a little more without anything on than I couldn't control myself so you better be careful... " he said brushing his lips with hers.
She was still wearing her heels so her height was almost matching hers.
She encircled her arms around his neck and she too pecked his lips with a hint of naughtiness.
"But I don't want you to control yourself.. I want you to love me... As you want.. This will be my most memorable day in my life... You loving me up in the air... What more can a girl ask for..." She was being very bold and frank with him today...
He too framed his hands around her.
"Wow Mrs Malhotra.. Tum Kuch ziyada hi bold nahi ho rahi ho... Din ba din..." He kissed her cheeks.
"Jab itna pyaar karne wala husband ho tou thoda bold hona banta hai..." She rest her head on his shoulder.
"But seriously.. I want you to make this day more special..." She said.
Without anymore talk he started kissing her from her neck to her shoulder. His lips is trailing soft and seducing kisses all over her body.
Not leaving any single inch , he makes her lay down in the bed and took of his clothes.
Continuing his work he make love to her in most passionate yet lovable way again.
They relaxed once again after their most memorable lovemaking session as they were up in the air.

Nandini was resting her head on his bare chest wrapping herself with a satin sheet that was available.
"I wanted to ask you something.." She asked.
His eyes were closed and he was holding her with his arms.
"Hmm.. " he said.
"Aapke friends Aur kahan kahan hai... " she asked very innocently.
He laughed out loud.
"Kya hua..."
"Nothing... Tum sach mein kitni cute ho... " he said tightening his hold.
"Why.." She asked with a frown.
"Because my love... The way you ask was very innocent... Anyways... Mere friends almost all over Europe mein hai... And some from USA and I think a comment of them from Australia too , When I was doing my MBA we created a musical group other than Fab5... Only my college friends.." He took a deep breadth.
"And only I know good Hindi... Others know how to play instruments... So I was the lead singer and my friends used to play..."

"That's how I became famous... And people wanted to join our group as friends.. So we formed a very huge group... And That's how everyone knows me... But only few of them were close to me..." He explained.
"So in that group of yours girls bhi hoti thi..." She asked
"Haan.. Bahut saari.. Kyun.." He asked too.
"Phir itne saari beautiful girls mein Aapko koi pasand nahi aayi..."
She asked again in A very innocent way.
He smiled at her innocence again and said.
"No... Because I was very ambitious at that time.. And was very busy in settling my life... Aisa nahi hai ki ladkiyan achi nahi thi , the girls were very beautiful... But how should I explain..."

He got up from the bed and she too got up pulling the sheet closer to her.
"You can say ki , My heart was not ready to accept any of them until I met you... Tum movies nahi dekhti..." he looked at her.
"Shah ruk khan ki Ek movie ka famous dialogue hai naa... Remember...' Tumhare liye jo bana ho agar Woh saamne aa jaye tou Woh upar waala ishara de deta hai... Ki yahi hai who is made for you...'.." He said in a filmy way.
Her lips spread wide for a hearty smile hearing him.
"Aap inn sab baaton mein believe karte hai..." She asked.
"Karta nahi tha... But when I saw you for the first time in the mall I fell in love with you... I started believing... I couldn't stop thinking about you... And I was also planning to stop mom and dad that from going to see any girl... But when I saw you again in your house... Than that's it... Rest is history..." He said.
"Mujh mein aisa Kya nazar aya Aapko... Main Ek average looking girl hoon.. And meri height bhi choti hai... " she asked again.
He laid down again making her rest on his chest.
"Tumhara innocent face , bas you won my heart with that... Aur your height is not choti... It's cute... Which fits perfectly with mine..." He smiled and pecked her head.
She felt out of this world hearing him.
"Aap ko meri koi bhi cheez kharaab nahi lagti..." She asked again.
"Abhi tak tou nahi... And maybe aage bhi nahi lagegi... But you know we just started our lives... And we will learn about each other's habits and natures every passing day... Than we will figure it out what we don't like about each other... Hmm..." He answered.
"Aur agar Aapko meri koi cheez ya habit pasand nahi aayi tou..."she asked again.
"Tou my love main Phir bhi tumse itna hi pyaar karunga , balki mera pyaar Aur increase hoga Samjhi..." He nodded.
She hugged him more.
"I love you the way you are... I don't want you to change... Be yourself all the time..." He gave soft kisses on her head.
"Acha ab thodi der relax karo... Let's take a power nap... We will need it later..." He closed his eyes.

It was almost time for landing but Manik instructed the crew and pilots before that just take around and show the Ariel view of the place where they were going.
After getting fresh and eating something Manik took Nandini near the window to show something.
"Nandini look out from the window... You'll know where we are..."
Nandini leaned and look out to see where they actually are and searched the area , and her mouth fell open and she covered her mouth to suppress the scream coming out.
"Oh my God , oh my god , I don't believe it... Is it for real... Am I really looking the real place or... Oh my... Aiyyappa..." She looked at Manik with eyes bulging out.

"PARIS.."



"Seriously..."
"Is it really really real..."
She was blabbering and ranting in disbelief.
Manik held her from her shoulders from the back.
She turned around and jumped with joy and hugged him hanging on his shoulders.
He was so glad that she likes it.
"So you like it..." He asked.
"Like it??? Are you serious?? I loved it... This is amazing... Explicit... Unimaginable...al the adjectives in the dictionary for amazing will get short for this surprise..."
"Wait till I tell Navya... Woh to paagal ho jaayegi sun kar..."
She kissed his right cheek and said
"I love you..."
She kissed his left cheek and again said
"I love you..."
She brushed his lips with hers and said
"I love you..."
He returned her kiss with another peck on her lips
"I love you more... And happy birthday honey..." He answered.
"Excuse me sir..." Their moment was distributed by the crew member.
" sorry to disturb you... But we are going to be landing in few minutes... If you kindly be seated and tie your seatbelts... Thank you..." He requested.
"No problem..."they Settled down and in some time they were on the ground..

A car was already arranged with a driver to take them wherever they have to go.
First they went to a very beautiful open terrace restaurant to have a good and delicious meal for lunch. The restaurant was such that they can see the full and clear view of the Eiffel Tower. Mona knew that they will be craving for Indian food so she somehow arranged the Indian food for them.

Restaurant


The members of the restaurants also sang a happy birthday song for Nandini in French. She was elated with the treatment she's getting.
Manik make her cut the cake again. It was Avery good and delicious chocolate cake. Nandini's eyes got moist being treated like a princess wherever she's going.

Cake


She cuts the cake and fed the first piece to Manik.
"Happy birthday sweetie... May you have many more like this..." He fed the other half of his piece to her.
"Only with you..." She smiled.
After done with the lunch they went for site seeing. They climbed the Eiffel Tower , and drive around the roads of the city...

Driving around


They shop in the name branded shops of the world as Paris is called the hub of shopping. Nandini brought clothes and accessories and different things for all the members of her families. She also got so many things for Manik hiding from him so that even she can plan surprises for him.
At end of the day both of them went to a nearby park and settled themselves in a grass. They were sitting side by side resting their heads on each other's shoulders.

"Suniye..." She called him in her ever sweet voice.
And he is always taken aback with her honey filled voice.
"Hmm..."
"How will I thank you... For this ever so memorable birthday..." She asked being very grateful to him.
"And why do you think you have to thank me..."
"Because no one have ever done this much for me... I mean Papa always treated me like his princess... But this much... This is so huge... Every girls dream... To celebrate her birthday like this with her partner... And you fulfilled it... So there has to be a way to thank you..." She explained.
He hold her hands and entwined their fingers.
"We are soulmates , LIFE PARTNERS , my existence is completed with you , without you I'm incomplete... Same goes with you... Your soul existence belongs to me , every single detail of yours is mine... If I do anything for you , you don't have to thank me... Because when you feel happy , it means I'm happy... " he kissed her knuckles.
"In other words... I'm making myself happy seeing you happy... Samjhi..."
She nodded her head.
"And if you really want to thank me than be with me always... Main tumse dur nahi reh sakta... Not even for a single day... So never ever leave me... " he pulled her closer.
"Ab Tum Mujhe chahe... Paagal kaho ya call me mad or crazy... But I am one... Madly in love with you... Crazy for you... Whatever you call... But this is the fact... The most important truth of our life..." He concluded.
Her face lit up again with the beautiful confession.
"I promise you that I will never ever leave you... The day I will leave will be the last day of my life , when my breadth will leave my body... When I die..." She said.
"Don't say like that... Even I will come with you... Wherever you go..." He tighten his grip on her hands.

"Look over there..." He pointed up in the sky to see the fireworks.

Fire works.


She looked over to the sky and mesmerized by the fire works going on. Her day was well spend with a very beautiful start and a very complete end with him being beside her and with all the adventure they've been through. A very memorable birthday a girl can ever ask for.
"Happy birthday sweetheart... I love you...," he whispered in her ear giving a kiss under her ear.
"Thank you... For every thing..." She replied.


End of part 52

Phew
At last finished it
It took me so much of my time to make this birthday of hers special
I hope you all feel the same way
And I really hope that every girl find a Manik of her own someday
Because there are men like this trust me
I knew men like this

So tell me how do you like it.
Which part you like the most
I gave you the lamba update and I want the lambe comments
So start commenting

I really really appreciate your love and support
Because while I was going through all the comments and reading them
There was a big smile dancing on my lips
I was literally smiling like a crazy person reading your comments
I was overwhelmed reading your words
So encouraging so amazing so appreciating
I can't even describe it

I will definitely make a separate post of appreciation to thank my readers
Specially thanking those who wrote page long comments
Inspite of their busy schedules.

Thank you thank you thank you

So enjoy and
Take care
Stay blessed and keep smiling always.

I love you all

Edited by Redcrystal - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Resseyyy...
Yayieee... I am first...
Hayeee...I am so happy sweetie...
Thank you so much for the update...

unress ...

sabr ka phal meetha hota hai yeh tou suna tha... pr itna acha hota hai yeh nhi pata tha...


Give me a hug honey...wo bhi tight wala...
U know for the first mujhe sochna padh raha hai ki what should I type...


''MashaAllah'' it was out of the world...really...
It was 'Heavenly Gorgeous'... 'Magnificent'... 'Utterly beautiful'... 'Outstanding '... 'Captivating' etc...etc...


U know I read this update more than 10 times..but still I can't have enough of this...


Starting part...hayyyeee...their passionate love making ...
it was so hot and sensuous ... pure bliss...
while reading na I am tou drop dead... and I am blushing like anything yaar...


Then Manik asked her ki I bother you so much...
Loved the way she said that... ''I feel the luckiest in this whole''
Yeh wala pura para I loved it alot ...
Manik tou sun kr clean bowled ho gaye...aur mei bhi...


Then here comes my possessive Nandini...
awww...my baby itna jealous thi...she was fuming in anger...
Then Manik manofy her... loved the way she told him and made him understand...

Manik baby apko itna gussa aaya tha jab apke friend ne misbehave kiya tha ...usse bhi acha nhi laga...aur obviously uska aisa react krna banta hai...


Then his friends and manan part was superb...
Nandini meet and greet with them so nicely...
Manik tou impress ho gaye...
But his friends are so sweet...


Then plane wala part... Nandini was so astounded ...
aww...usse believe hi nhi ho raha tha...
pr mr. naughty manik ko yakeen dilwana aata hai...


Hufff...Their romantic and passionate moments wo bhi plane mei...it was beautiful and blissful too...
It 's like love me like you do 2...touch me like you do 2...hehe..


Then nandini asked him...awww her innocent se questions...
Aur manik ke lovely lovely answer...that part was wonderful...
and when Manik said na ki I love you the way you are..
seriously isse zyada tou aur kuch nhi chahiye...
when Your Life Partner accept you the way you are... wo feeling tou describe bhi nhi ki jaa sakti...haina...

Indeed she is the most luckiest girl...



Then wo plane se pure Paris ka view...it was so beautiful...
Nandini 's dress was really pretty... the pics of Paris...
it was beyond beautiful...really...


Then they cut the cake... it was so yummy ...
(I wish mei bhi yeh birthday aise hi celebrate kru...)
Last part.. when she said ki ...how will she thanked him...
His answer...hayyeee... that part was fabulous and lovely...
They promised each other ki wo humesha sath rahege...chahe situation kaise bhi ho...
then fire works wala part it was superb...


While reading I am smiling like an idiot...really...
It was so magnificent...

It true yaar every girl wants a life partner like manik...
U make me dream more and more... You are increasing my expectations...

''I am just spell bound by the way you have written it ''.
Loved each and every bit of it to the crore...
Hats off for putting so much efforts...
Really you did an exceptional work...
I don't know yaar... kin alfzo mei tareef kru...
U are the best love ...really you are...
I love you so much...


How it is...???

Thank you so much ...Really thanks a ton love for sharing ...
Keep up the good work...
Spread love ...
Continue soon...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed...
Loads and loads of love...




Edited by Cute_Inaya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
The most awaited update
Trust me the wait was worth it
Manik maDe nandini really feel special or like a princess
Even I was in my own dreamland
Manan are seriously epitome of love
One soul
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
SO beautiful...
It was amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
So beautiful
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome dear loved it...
It was worth it. .
Continue soon
Take care
Stay safe and blessed
:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg omg omg///
crystal this is the most amazing and splendid update i read evr...
i mean hw can someone love his wife truely madly impatiently to this much extent...
while reading i was just imagining thiongs whether its their make out or their confessions..
u penned down evrything so so so beautifully that i acn feel the love around me in the air...
i have to words to appreciate u for this update as its unbelievable and beyond expectatipn...
although i knew that if u make us wait then it must be worth but this much i nevr expected and i must say to write such things and that to beautifully needs time..
this is one of favourite stories that i read...and i jst want to read it more more and more...
this type of husband evry girl wants it doesn't matter if he is as much rich as like manik but he has this much bigger heart full of love and care for his wife like manik...
i mean this is something par excellence..
about manik nandini i must say its jst their pure and beautiful love that make them so caring and loveable for each other...
the way manik expresses himself is jst beyond imagination..
nandini cutely and inocently confesses her love and expresses herself is so adorable..
my favourite scene as its so so difficult to choose coz i love all of them but still the way manik confesses his feeling in plane is something touches my heart as he is ready to accept her with all her flaws...BUT STILL I LOVE EVRY SINGLE LINE OF THIS UPDATE AND EVEN I AM READY TO READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN...
ITS SO SO SO HEART TOUCHING AND IT SPREADS THE LOVE IN THE AIR AROUND ME..
I FEEL LIKE I AM JST VISUALISING EVRYTHING AND ALL THIS IS HAPPENING IN FRONT OF ME...
SUPERB SPLENDID EXPLICIT AND ALL THE ADJECTIVES OF THE AMAZING IS FOR THIS UPDATE..
AND NOW U JST HAVE INCREASED MY CUROSITY AND INTEREST TO NEXT LEVEL FOR THIS STORY OF URS AND NOW I AM JST WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE IMPATIENTLY AND DESPERATELY..
PLZZ UPDATE SOON


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Posted: 8 years ago
The most awaited update
Trust me the wait was worth it !!😊😊
Its true every girl would want a husband like Manik..
Seeing all this surprises which you have beautifully written along with pictures my expectations fromn you is rising every time.😳😃.
You really know how to impress someone with your writing skills.
I am really in awe of you..👏
Thankyou so much for such a beautiful part..

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Posted: 8 years ago
wow...


superb


awesome


lovely update...


loved it dear...


continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di...di...di...I'm just speechless...
I mean the way you describe everything I feel like I was there...
Those birthday gift just awesome...
And the love of manan always heart touching...
As you said there was men like Manik...
I don't know if they were but I literally want one like Manik...
But pics were very nice...
Continue soon...
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